With his silver blade gripped tightly, Qor scanned the bottled tunnel ahead for any signs of the Duros, his temper beginning to fuel the power of the Dark Side. Betrayal was something the Quarren could handle, but defeat is something he would never accept even in the afterlife. Qor understood his eyes could deceive him, so relying on sight alone was not a technique. The Quarren developed a cold smirk that could be colder than Hoth itself; as he knew the Dark Side was expendable here.
“I can see more without my eyes, Duros. Surrender and you may see Xen’Mordin once more.” Qor played on Xantros’ feelings towards his past, as he clearly knew the relationship between the former Aedile and the Consul were strong. Then a shimmer in an alcove gave the Duros away, as his whisper spoke out.
“Odan-Urr is on mutual terms with your Clan, so I see him regularly.” Xantros felt the sting of ice at his fingertips, but the Light Side continued to warm his blood as long as he concentrated. The swift glow of silver rushed around the edge of the ice and plummeted into the shoulder of the Duros, who shrieked out in agony and fright. His bloodshot eyes stared into the uncaring demeanor of the Quarren, who seemed to enjoy slowly spinning and yanking the blade around inside the cauterising flesh.
“My senses were yours, but the Dark Side will always be mine. Where’s the crystal?” Qor roared out as he hissed, his slimy tentacle caressing Xantros’ icy cheeks. As his fears began to feed into his subconscious, the Duros reached up with his good hand and surrendered the transparent crystal from his shaking palm. The Quarren snatched it quickly and deactivated his lightsaber, walking back into the light of the ice. While the rumbles vibrated the floor below their feet, Xantros got a rush of warmth across his face and down his body. A clear sign something dangerous was about to come, yet Qor had his back to this heat the whole time. As the cogs and wheels turned in his head, the Duros placed a hand onto his burnt shoulder and concentrated to mend the damage.
“You know, that crystal will not work without a focusing crystal of the same minerals.” Xantros bluffed his knowledge in the hopes of outwitting the Quarren, who seemed unphased by his small talk.
“And you so happen to have these focusing crystals in your ship, hmm?” Qor replied, as he studied the opacity of the glass further. “No, infact they’re located underneath these icy tunnels. You just need to dig a few centimeters to find them.” The Quarren wasted no time, he got down onto his knees, activated the silver blade and began to carve the ice apart into blocks. The Duros carefully removed his bloodied hand to check his wound, which appeared to stop bleeding. This was all the encouragement he could muster, and Xantros forced himself onto his shaky feet. Stretching his arm out and pushing his influence inside Qor’s mind, the Jedi got to work.
While the Quarren hacked and sliced his way through the melting ice, tugging blocks and shapes of various sizes out, he heard a soft roar from behind. Qor quickly turned his head to gaze down the tunnel in curiosity, as he heard a slightly louder roar. “Xantros! What is this?” The Quarren shouted out, but he heard no reply. Darting his gaze around the tunnel, Qor could obviously notice if Xantros made a run for it. But he0 would of at least heard the limping elderly Duros leave. A much louder and ferocious roar bellowed from the base of the tunnel, which lead the Quarren to jump into the hole and smack his head on the permafrost.
Stumbling and scrambling to his feet, Qor shakingly peered over the icy lip and glared down the tunnel as his palms sweated. A nervous swallow struggled to go down, while a whip of a fiery heat cut across the tunnel ahead. Surprised and scared for his life, the Quarren shrieked like a youngling and cowered into the trench. But the call to check for the threat called to him once more, as a sun-shining orange burst directly over his hole. Qor gripped onto his lightsaber very tightly as it shook in his sweaty palms, slowly ascending to the lip of the ice to gaze at his impending doom.
“Hello?” It was what Qor tried to say, but only a high pitched whimper left his lips, as he bit his cut and bleeding lip continuously. The walls of the tunnel were still the same deep blue they have been, but the ceiling slithered with tails of scorching flames that hissed and whipped towards the Quarren. Attempting to brave this torturous ordeal, Qor raised onto his weakened feet and darted his eyes everywhere, he wanted to know where that roar was. He then sensed it before he felt it, a large lifeforce was directly behind him, pulsating with dominance and confidently looming over him.
The Quarren dared not to look behind, but the low and foeboding purr from the beastal lifeform commanded his attention. With a great deal of care and obedience, Qor turned on the spot to face a large feline beast glaring directly into his eyes. The mane of the creature irradiated with a scorching glow that scarred the Quarren’s skin. With fangs the size of his arm and a gaping mouth hanging open in aggression, Qor stood like stone as he awaited for the judgement. Crouching slowly down and launching itself into the air, the beast kicked it’s front paws out and delivered a mighty roar that cracked and broke the icy tunnels. Glaring back at the Quarren, the maw of the fiery creature dropped over him and imprisoned Qor inside the beast.
Watching on with a sense of despair and somewhat relief, Xantros placed the crystal back into his pocket. He took one final look at Qor who seemed to twitch and scream out in Quarrenese, then ascended back up the tunnel.
“I’m sorry it had to end this way. But you gave me no choice.” The Duros whispered to himself as he held a hand against his heavy heart. With a whistle, he called his bovine, who trotted past the Quarren, unphased by the seizure-like twitching and left with his master.
"...i’m just here for the crystal.”
"...he did indeed feel the Dark Side and the Sith Code in the Quarren."
My confusion continued as I found no conflict in this opening post whatsoever. Actual combat in the ACC isn't necessary to good storytelling, but you are avoiding conflict between the characters which is the fundamental aspect of the ACC.
"...circling on it’s pitch."
"...feel the Dark Side and the Sith Code in the Quarren."