With a downward swipe she used her lightsaber to absorb his attack. When she saw his palm crackle with more energy about to be unleashed she deactivated her weapon choosing to absorb the rest of the energy directly. Andrelious could easily see her grit her teeth as the lightning attack danced across her nerves. The Iridonian twitched and gripped at the lowered lightsaber tighter, but unable to help herself she staggered backwards. It took all of the Warrior’s concentration, channeling her energy to bolster her natural affinity to heal herself with her Force ability to compensate for the damage the Arconan had not anticipated. Her nerves dulled and burns had already began to blister at her palms and fingers.
Andrelious didn’t hesitate to take advantage of his opponent’s momentary distraction. Lunging forward, he attacked with a downward swipe of his lightsaber, aiming for her face with no hesitation or remorse. Nath was quick on the uptake however, adrenalin keeping the Iridonian going. With lightning speed, Nath brought her weapon back up and activated it, catching the blow, but it took a few seconds for her to deflect it away. Her boot came up and with a savage snap kick to the stomach she sent the Imperial staggering back, wheezing in a few laboured breaths. It gave the Arconan enough of a reprieve to recover.
Your mind is like an open book to me, old man. Your thoughts betray you before you’ve even begun.
The Warlord could hear her laugh in his mind, taunting the Imperial mercilessly.
As the Arconan advanced once more, her crimson blade was already held at waist height as she swung it. Andrelious backed away to avoid the blow, bringing his own weapon up once more.
As the Dinaarian looked upon Nath’s face he saw the insane smile that twisted at her lips and knew the Arconan would never back down - would never relent until one of them was dead.
With no recourse left to him Andrelious steeled himself for what was to come, his lightsaber feeling lighter than it should in his hands as the Imperial readied himself once more. The Iridonian gave no pause for the Warlord, advancing so suddenly that he could almost feel her breath on his own face.
Nath’s attack was uninhibited. The two handed grip upon her hilt gave her next attack slightly more power as she swung, placing the full weight of her body behind it in a high downward angle. Andrelious caught the attack without too much difficulty, however that had been her intention the whole time. The Warrior had caught him at an awkward angle that forced his dominant arm up to block but ensured he couldn’t quite gain the necessary leverage to parry the blow.
She pressed down upon him for a second before hastily recoiling back for the next blow, striking again from on high. The Dinaarian blocked easily once more and she again drew away just enough to pirouette and aim her next strike at his weaker arm. Andrelious was able to deflect the blow, but with each strike the Arconan made he could feel the heat of her lightsaber getting closer and closer to his flesh.
Using raw strength he forced her attack back. Nath knew she could not hold him back with her own physical fortitude alone, but that was never her plan. Though the Iridonian was persistent enough to think on her feet, she was not above using below the belt tactics to get the outcome she wanted. Andrelious was so close now that he could see his own reflection in her pitch-black eyes. Within a span of a heartbeat they changed, morphing suddenly before him. The horrors he saw within could never be unseen, never be put down and never stopped.
His body involuntarily shuddered, muscles slackening enough to allow Nath to push him back as the reflections tormented his psyche. The Imperial tried to shake away the visions he had witnessed but they seemed to glue into his mind like an unwanted guest; they just would not leave him.
If I were Zakath, by now you’d be dead and the Carrion feeders would be feasting on what’s left of you.
Her voice purred into his mind, dislodging the last remnants of what he had seen. Nath heard the Warlord snarl as he lashed out with his weapon, the Iridonian anticipated the attack, knowing her taunting would solicit nothing less, but before the Warrior could think to counter, a voice broke both duelists concentration.
“Nath, enough!” The firm effeminate voice was stern and disapproving. Both recognised the speaker without having to look. Andrelious did not relent just yet, knowing well enough that there was no guarantee the Iridonian would obey.
But much to his surprise, Nath did comply. She drew back and without hesitation deactivated her lightsaber, clipping it carefully back onto her belt. Andrelious falteringly did the same before turning to the intruder.
Atyiru looked resplendent in the black robes she wore. Her hair contrasted sharply with the material, but it could hardly be seen due to the way it was braided back and out of her face. The Miraluka heard a soft sigh close by before Nath’s voice rang out loud enough for everyone to hear.
“As you wish, Sister.” From the corner of Andrelious’ eye he saw Nath fade away only to appear standing close to the Consul’s left. It took a moment for the Warlord to process that the whole fight had been a lie, anger bubbled up at being robbed of a battle against the real Iridonian. He had no doubts now that she had used her skills in illusion to trick him.
The Imperial hadn’t missed the large bulk of the Barabel who seemed to be following in the Miraluka’s wake either. It took him a lot of restraint not to openly sneer at his old nemesis.
Nath, on the other hand, seemed to brighten at the presence of her Master. Both onlookers felt her mood change at once as she moved without hesitation to him. Andrelious needed to make a double take as he saw the pale Iridonian practically jump onto Zakath in embrace. The Barabel seemed to welcome her without hesitation, his larger arms taking the brunt of the Iridonian’s slight weight and returning the affectionate gesture.
“Andrelious, I believe we have business to discuss.” Atyiru had moved to his side without him really noticing, far too engrossed watching the pair.
“...Yes.” He finally replied, though the older Sith had not missed the violet glint in Zakath’s gaze as it locked on his; promising that this was not over. He managed to tear his eyes away to take in the petite woman next to him before adding as an afterthought:
“We have much to discuss.” Atyiru’s serene smile didn’t falter as she gestured for him to follow.
“Come, let us go somewhere a little less distracting.”
Reluctantly, Andrelious turned his back on Zakath just as the Barabel placed his only Apprentice back on her feet once more. He heard hushed words being exchanged between them but could not hear well enough to make out the discourse. Instead the Warlord followed the Consul away from the harsh sunlight back into the dimmed rooms that had been his original destination.
Had Andrelious paused a moment longer, he would have witnessed Nath's body collapsed in a small heap in Zakath’s arms, out cold and barely drawing breath.
Syntax
Repetition of "response" here. Look for alternates to gain better flow, such as "She gave a derisive snort in way of reply before responding verbally."
This would have been better suited broken up, as the actions following the dialogue are unrelated to the speaker.
The capital on "Her" isn't needed.
Story
Try not to reference things in such a way that the window is left looking for answers. The use of "and many other things" leaves the reader going: what other things?