Tasha pursed her lips in annoyance at the jibe, well aware that the Jedi was trying to bait her. She was better than that and resented the idea Sanguinius assuming she would draw upon her anger. Instead, Tasha began to smile as she recovered from the punches thrown her way.
Sanguinius was testing her, for what, she knew not. The Twi’lek was determined to pass the test, regardless of what it was. “Your insults need a little work, Sang.” Tasha chuckled as she brandished her crimson lightsaber. “In fact, I think you’re losing your edge.”
The Warden raised a quizzical eyebrow in response, “I am here to see who you really are, deep down.” Sanguinius advanced upon the waiting Mystic, his viridian lightsaber darting out as he leapt over a table, attacking from the right hand side of Tasha.
Tasha was ready for him, knowing that Sang would attack. Her crimson blade met his and held it back. Sanguinius kept moving however, grasping the hanging chains. Upon touching them, Sanguinius no longer felt the Light, only the cold darkness that suffocated his senses. Despite the lack of connectivity with the Force, the Warden swung on the chains to come behind his Aedile.
The Marauder stepped to one side, avoiding the swinging blade. Tasha drew upon her emotions, fuelling the telekinetic blow that collided into Sanguinius’ back. The strike cannoned him forward, his grip on the chains still firm. The Warden grimaced at the blow, riding it towards the wall. Sanguinius bent his legs as he reached the rock-face and pushed himself off the wall back at Tasha.
The chains clanked as they moved, the Jedi let go of the infused links and hurtled down towards Tasha. Upon letting go of the chains, Sanguinius’ connection with the Force returned. His lightsaber slashed downwards, threatening to cleave his opponent in two.
Tasha watched Sang swinging on the chains. She solidified her stance, her crimson lightsaber ready to intercept. As he fell towards her, the Marauder swung her blade upwards, batting the Entar’s saber to the side. Sanguinius rolled as he landed, his lightsaber deactivated in an instant. He rose, igniting his lightsaber once again to parry a slicing attack that could have taken his face off.
“That comment earlier about losing my edge?” Sanguinius enquired. “Thank you for a most sublime joke.” the Warden smiled.
“Sarcasm, from you?” Tasha narrowed her eyes, staring at her Quaestor as the two momentarily ceased their attacks.
“Honestly, Blue? I’m here to see if you’re good enough to be my replacement.” Sang gestured at their surroundings. “Do you think I like spending my time in dark dungeons?”
Tasha nodded, “Sometimes, I think you do.” she grinned and attacked once again. The Anaxsi rolled his eyes at her response and deftly deflected the strikes. The pair moved across the dungeon floor. Their lightsabers meeting again and again as Sanguinius maneouvered his opponent to where he wanted her. Tasha bumped up against one of the tables.
“Time to finish this, little one.” Sanguinius rumbled. He focused on the light within him and spread it outwards in a dampening zone that surrounded him. Tasha stumbled as she felt something was off. Sanguinius once again went on the offensive, his first few strikes were caught by muscle memory, but Tasha could not sense where the strikes would land anymore. The Twi’lek swore in frustration and narrowly ducked under Sang’s lightsaber. As she rose, Tasha found the viridian blade at her neck.
Sanguinius drew the circle surrounding him closer until it disappeared completely, “You did well, Tasha.” he withdrew his lightsaber from her neck.
“My pride nor feelings need salvaging, Sang.” the Mystic retorted. “You cheated.”
“Cheating? You expect me to fight honourably, yes?” the Entar asked.
“You’re a Jedi!” Tasha exclaimed. “That’s what you taught me!”
“True,” Sanguinius laughed, “But I’m also going to teach you another lesson.”
Tasha sighed and sat down on the table behind her. “Here we go, another fethin’ lecture from the Professor...” She deactivated her lightsaber and clasped it to her belt. Knowing full well just how much Sang enjoyed “teaching lessons”, she’d be here for another hour or two listening to the old fart gas on about something or other.
Syntax
Unless it is part of "Grandpa Joe" for instance, there is no reason to capitalize this.
Story
The action here is rather weak, and nigh non-existent. You are setting up not just the reason for this match, but the first taste of action. You did this through a paragraph of dialogue that didn't carry much weight behind it for the reader. There is no hook here and that hurts you.