The wild planet of Kashyyyk is known to be home to the gentle, but short-tempered race of Wookiees. Wild and untamed, the lush, wroshyr tree-filled forests form a multi-layered deathtrap. The local wildlife presenting more dangers as one descends towards the forest floor. However, as one ascends the vertical environment, the danger of falling increases until one comes in contact with the Wookiee settlements. Fauna and flora flourish in delight, growing within dirt pockets in the crevices of the trees. Some of these plants are carnivorous, becoming larger and deadlier closer to the forest floor. Others have some form of consciousness, able to communicate with the Wookiees to give some understanding of their use.
In one particular forest, you have traversed the vertical nightmare from Wookiee settlements and into the unknown to become lost within the canopies. Within the crevices in the trees, empty fruit and rotting shells from seeds show the spring season has ended. A soft wind whistles between the thick vines and shrubs that stick to the trunks of the ancient and sleeping giants. Despite the near-ending lack of footholds aside from the branches of wroshyr trees, you have found a series of abandoned and rotting platforms suspended a hundred meters above the surface, once home to a Wookiee settlement. Overgrown and decayed, it has since nourished countless plants and trees with their outstretched branches sheltering the dense and soft floor from the extreme sun rays and torrential rain. Upon closer inspection your eyes can pick up unusual signals. Moss carpets particular areas on the platforms and nowhere else, tree-dwelling animals and birds never land on the surface. In the corner of your eye you see something swaying, at first thought appearing to be another species of vine. But when you turn your head fully, you clearly see it is rope, damp but tightly locked. You feel that you have entered an arena without invitation, and the motivation to search further intrigues your mind. Tread carefully, or you will fall whim to the creatures that inhabit this terrain.
Syntax
This could have been broken up better if you had added a comma after "her nostrils". I had to read it over a couple times to get the proper flow of the sentence.
Story
This, being a major sticking point for why you made contact with the "beasts", makes the lack of any descriptors or identifiers for this creature a damaging mark towards the overall quality of your story. It's okay to gloss over unimportant details, but anything that may be groundwork for a later plot action or something important needs a more complete picture.
Additionally, there has been no mention of the back story for this encounter, so your mentioning of an opponent is somewhat jarring.
Be careful with stuff like this. Battle Meditation is an advanced power that requires significant concentration at all levels. The way this is written, it sounds as if you used it in tandem with telekinesis, though it could also be inferred that they were used sequentially. One as a distraction, the other as a follow up attack. If used simultaneously, this would be a realism issue.
Continuity
Two paragraphs up his saber was deactivated, when did it activate? When did yours?