Lo-Kain’s body didn’t even turn at first, but his muscles tightened when the image began to disappear. “You tricked me…”
Areticus cursed in his mind. He needed just a little more time! Lo-Kain was much too fast at his current state. If he didn’t find someway to hold him out a little longer, he was done for. His plan was to try to match his opponent's’ enhanced speed with the Force. However it required more time to concentrate, especially after he had recently been choked to death and used that time bowing to his illusion to recover himself.
“No Lo-Kain,” Areticus said while raising a hand to a stop gesture as the Zabrak turned to him. He noticed Lo-Kain’s eyes were dilated as they pierced into his own. Lo-Kain was absolutely livid. “It wasn’t a trick! Just listen for once in your bloody life! I was showing you what has not yet come to pass. This was to reveal to you what you could become. You are a magnificent warrior, and will someday go far. But even the greatest of warrior kings and warlords use advisors. That is my role for you, an advisor. With my guidance you will grow and rise to the top. Someday you will be recognized by perhaps the Grand Master himself. Think about it.”
The anger was still there, but it was much less than before. He was actually considering his words. Areticus had already expended a large amount of his power keeping him at bay. It was time to finish this.
“Do you really think I could go that far, master?”
Finally, it was ready. “Probably not,” Areticus replied. As Lo-Kain’s face shifted to confused and surprised at his reply, Areticus darted forward at what seemed in an instant. Lo-Kain reached for the saber at his hilt, but as Areticus was dashing past him he landed a slash at the armpit. He then pivoted his feet and ran back with a downward diagonal blow along the Zabrak’s back. Lo-Kain roared in pain and wheeled his body around to face Areticus at an immense speed. That’s when Areticus could feel it. His apprentice was already amplifying his capabilities through focus within the force, but now it is combined with the further push of his rage. Areticus didn’t think he would survive if he didn’t finish him now. His left arm had so far been immobile, with the right recently damaged. Areticus pushed his feet forward and rolled to the right at the notice of Lo-Kain’s heel lifting up to charge. As Lo-Kain approached, Areticus thrusted out his lunge and pierced the left lung. He also noticed Lo-Kain’s right hand merely centimeters away from his target’s head. His apprentice was at a stop from feeling his lung deflate. His chest was heavy with trying to breathe, and he looked as if he was beginning to lose consciousness.
Areticus then felt a heavy hand grab his forearm. He looked to see Lo-Kain’s right hand gripping his arm and pulling the pierced saber deeper inside of him. As he was doing so, he gave a monstrous growl of what felt like a mix of anger and pain. The beast’s eyes were hungry. The predator was deadlocked on his prey. Areticus was abhorred at the sight. He shifted his wrist to the right and the blade exited his body by breaking through his left ribcage. Lo-Kain’s eyes went staring into space as he released his grip, dropped to his knees, and fell onto the ground.
More work was needed on enhancing his physical abilities with the force. The after effects as it began to wear off was immensely exhausting. Areticus struggled across the area and tapped a small red button near the entrance of the sparring room that called for medical assistance. He then set down with his back against the wall breathing heavily and increasing perspiration. His heart felt it was going to explode at the tight grip from his chest at the sight of Lo-Kain. He was standing. Areticus almost couldn’t believe it. Lo-Kain actually stood, breathing heavily with his right hand crossed over his wound. His eyelids were fighting between being opened and closed, but the pupils were fixed at Areticus. He didn’t feel anger from him, rather a sense of conviction. Lo-Kain stumbled a bit, but in great pain he rose himself back on his feet. Areticus was in complete shock at the sight. Medical droids then came through the room and went over to Lo-Kain to lay him on a hover mat. Lo-Kain didn’t resist, and let them carry him out the door for recovery. One of the droids remained and turned to Areticus, “Are you okay? Is there anything I can get for you?”
“I’m fine, thank you. I’m just exhausted. Exhausted… and proud.”
"As the lights beam down from the ceiling when Lo-Kain stepped into the room. They made an almost visible beacon for Areticus who stood in the center awaiting for him."
“What’s wrong Lo-Kain you seem distracted.”
You constantly referred to both combatants by their proper first names. This gets boring to read after a time. Try using adjectives based on their Clan, House, Order, Rank, etc.
“I do believe it’s time for a change here, Lo-Kain” Areticus assured Lo-Kain