The Mystic rubbed his chest as the duelists closed the gap between each other, albeit slowly. If he could just pierce the Zabrak’s defences, he could make this a short and bloody end. However, the Knight was clearly trained proficiently in his bladework. To ensure a victory would require one swift and final blow, for either of them. But Darkblade knew he could not fail, orders were orders. He rolled his shoulders as he felt some of the pain dulling away and prepared for whatever came next.
He watched the Zabrak pace around him. Seeking his own advantage, no doubt. It mattered little, he felt assured the Knight could not possibly match him in the end.
They met in a tangle of corrosive light. Their blades smashed the air around them, smashed against each other in reckless hunger for the other’s handler. Darkblade danced his way around the Knight, falling more into his natural cadence. Instead of meeting blade with blade as before, he merely ducked and gave the crimson saber nothing to land upon. Kul sensed the toying atmosphere.
“So this is the Makashi Act I’ve heard mentioned about.” He lunged, swinging broadly to upset the Mystic’s rhythm, but was unable to interrupt the fluid motions of his opponent. “An impressive display, indeed. But that’s all it is, is it not? An act meant to outline my own style’s weakness.”
The Knight cut forward, driving the point of his blade at an angle towards the Anzati’s throat. Reacting to the assault, Darkblade wove his a path towards the unarmed side of Kul. He met an immediate halt as the Zabrak’s arm crossed before him, wrapping him in a small hug and ramming his body into the ground. The air whooshed from his lungs at the impact, but he knew he could not waste time. He rolled to his left, dodging the boot that stamped where he’d been. The wood splintered and snapped beneath the force, and Darkblade was glad he trusted his instincts. Such raw strength. He could have been something. A shame, really. Would’ve been nice for them to send someone who actually enjoyed killing, though. He pushed himself back up, the Zabrak watching him with a crooked grin.
“Some have called it that, perhaps. It does the job most days.” He felt a throbbing and reached a hand back to touch his head. It came back bloodier than it went. This needed to end before the Knight won through pure attrition. No problem, he’d gotten a gist for what kind of beast Kul’tak was. He placed a foot forward and gauged the distance between them. If it was enough it would be cutting it too close for comfort. One hand fell away from the hilt of his saber. His fingers curled and stretched in preparation. The Zabrak’s bright orange eyes followed the movement and he tensed. He continued his slow tracing steps around the perimeter of the platform. His back faced the edge while he kept his eye on his target. The hitch in his strategy Darkblade needed.
With some gusto the Seeker propelled himself forward, drawing on the Force in a burst. His open hand came up from his side and began to glow. The Knight began to lean in to meet his advance with his sturdier weight, but quickly flinched as a blinding eruption of light emerged from Darkblade’s hand. Unable to see clearly, Kul panicked and waved his saber in a defensive fashion. It was not focused, however, and the Mystic easily slipped by. His shoulder rammed into the Zabrak, considerable power still behind it from his dash. Both went crashing over the edge of the platform. Kul’s impeded vision was still a problem, but he knew where his enemy was now due to their proximity. He managed to arch his body so that his downward velocity spun him around. His foot sliced through the air and drove itself into Darkblade’s gut. The blow pushed him a few feet away, where he was caught by a thick branch. The landing was not a soft one. He heard a couple snaps that did not originate from wood. Leaning over the branch he watched as the Zabrak disappeared through branches covered in their evergreen leaves. He listened for what seemed an age before he felt he had listened enough. There’s no way even a Zabrak could have survived that fall. Chalk this one down for the win. The next time the Dread Lord wants someone killed, he can do it himself…
The Seeker groaned as some of the adrenaline began to wear off and his brain began to nag him about his obviously broken ribs. He struggled to make his way down a walkway which happened to be installed in the tree he’d “landed” on. He realized later he forgot how he managed to get back to his ship in his condition. Once on board he gave himself some first aid, letting his natural healing do most of the work. His ribs would be annoying for a while, though.
In the forest, at the bottom of one of the great tree’s trunk a pile of old and dead branches had collected over the years. The detritus had formed a soft, buoyant layer around the tree. It rose high enough to cover most of the tree’s body-length wide roots Usually calm, it startled some of the smaller creatures nearby when it began to shuffle uncontrollably. They took off running when a hand burst through, red skin covered in black tattoos scraping its way out of the muck.
Syntax
This should have a comma separating the thought from the thinker, much like dialogue.
Story
There isn't much in the way of motivations on display here, and a woeful lack of actual conflict. The only encounter occurs at the tail end of your writing and is a single moment, a single attack. That isn't very interesting for a reader and doesn't seek to draw them in, especially when there is no explanation of what exactly is going on, or why Darkblade is hunting Kul'tak.