Marick Arconae watched as Revs returned to his running regimen around the courtyard. The Miraluka had shown promise during his Journeyman trials, and had remained loyal to Arcona through the trials and strifes of the vendettas and war that followed. Revs had also been one of the first of the few Knights to show up when Marick had put out an offer to train the next generation of Arcona’s Shadicar. After the dust had settled, however, the cadre of Arconan assassins had dwindled down to two: Master and Apprentice.
Cloaked in the shroud of the Force, Marick ghosted away from the center of the courtyard to give himself some space from his apprentice. The Miraluka were born with both a blessing and a curse. Fortunately, the Adept had experience training one before, so the lessons he had imparted to his new apprentice still held true. He watched, silent as the shadows cast by the sun overhead, as the Knight wiped sweat from his brow.
Sticking to his training, Revs remembered to keep his head on a swivel, constantly turning and listening and looking all around him with his unique spectrum of vision. Reaching out through the Force would not help, since he knew that Marick could mask his signature even while cloaked. And even if he could detect his Master that way, he could never be sure if it was a trap or not. In the past, Marick had purposely waited over an hour before striking. Those instances had driven Revs to storm out of lessons on more than one occasion.
With those thoughts no doubt hovering in the back of his mind, Revs was focusing instead on the world around him, seeking for clues and warnings that would alert him to danger. It could have been something as simple as a displacement in the blades of grass around the courtyard here, or the sound of a twig crunching underfoot there. Attacks could come from anywhere, at anytime, and anyplace.
That was the lesson for today.
Marick continued to wait, idly calculating and timing Revs’ pace. The Combat Master knew that the mind often broke down before the body, so he was pleasantly surprised at how his apprentice never seemed to back away from the task at hand. Revs wanted to get better, stronger and faster. The Knight also knew that the Arconae’s teachings were the key. His determination came from a strength of heart, rather than from the resilient willpower of the mind. Marick could work with that. Mold it, even.
Marick drew one of his shoto lightsabers from his belt and bent into a crouch. His eyes narrowed as he focused and drew a bead on his apprentice. Just as the Miraluka was about to reach the farthest point from the Hapan’s position, Marick thumbed the activator and sent it flying through the air like a throwing glaive.
Though he detected no movement or changes to his immediate surroundings, Revs heard a faint, familiar sound from across the courtyard. He slowed his jog to a halt. It sounded just like...
“Oh frak me...” he grumbled as his Master’s lightsaber appeared out of thin air and made a beeline for his torso. The spinning plasma blade quickly crossed the distance of the courtyard as it homed in.
Duck, the Force whispered, and the Miraluka’s muscles obeyed. Revs dropped down to the mossy ground with both hands spread to either side of his chest.
“WOAH!” Revs shouted as the scything blade whizzed through the space his head had occupied a moment ago. “Are you actually trying to kill me, Master!?”
His muscles bowed and flexed as he pushed off of the ground and back up into a standing position, fumbling for the blaster pistol at his belt. Marick offered no response but to simply raise his open hand and gesture. Guided by the Force, the Adept’s lightsaber completed its parabolic arc and pinwheeled back around for a second pass at the back of Rev’s neck.
Reflex preceded precognition as Revs twisted and spun out to his right. He managed to keep his balance by bending his knees and spreading his stance, the whirring lightsaber passing harmlessly by on its return path. He raised his blaster and fought to get his breathing under control as he took aim and fired a volley of bolts in his Master’s direction.
Marick was already in motion, juking and weaving his way through the stream of crimson dashes. His shoto saber returned seamlessly to his open palm and immediately went to work batting aside each of Revs’ next shots.
But Revs had been counting on just that. He knew that landing a hit on his Master with a blaster was pointless. It did slow him down enough for the Miraluka to try and think of what to do next. The courtyard offered no immediate answer, though. That really only gave him one option.
Quickly holstering his blaster, Revs whipped out his lightsaber and snapped the emerald blade to life. He exhaled slowly as he turned his shoulder and extended the tip of his lightsaber outward. His knees bent as his heels slid perpendicular to one another to form a right angle. His free hand flared behind him for balance. No sooner than he had settled into his dueling stance, Marick was on him, cyan and jade plasma hissing angrily as their sabers collided.
The Adept’s blade angled hard to the left before cutting quickly back to the right. Revs flicked his wrist in time with the motion, meeting each strike on the inside of his opponent’s saber to deflect it outward and away from his body. His feet wove smoothly backwards through the grassy courtyard as he ceded to the Hapan’s kinetic, sweeping slashes. While Marick’s shoto lightsaber had less reach than Rev’s, his freakish reflexes limited any attempt of leveraging that factor towards his favor.
He hesitated momentarily when Marick seamlessly passed his lightsaber from his left hand to the right. Without skipping a beat, the Adept twisted and spun in the opposite direction, sweeping his blade low for Revs’ knees. Revs hopped backwards, planted on his hind leg and then darted forward with augmented speed. He swung high with a backhanded slash and followed it up with a flourish. Marick leaned away from the first and parried the second, but had lost enough ground for Revs to continue his counter.
The Miraluka thrusted and jabbed the tip of his saber into Marick’s gut three times. The Hapan’s saber bounced back and forth between the first two as he started to spin away, but the third caught the trailing fabric of his longcoat. It was not much, but Revs felt himself smile at the notion of almost landing a fatal blow on his Master.
Before any further sense of triumph could sink in, Marick become a blur and called a second weapon into his off hand. Revs reflexively parried the Hapan’s saber high and to the left, but left his flank dangerously exposed. Marick capitalized on the opening by rolling smoothly off of the cross-block and lashing out for the Miraluka’s side, quick as a vornskyr tail.
The offhand dagger drew a thin line of blood that trailed the arc of the emerald blade. The Knight swore as he backpedaled a few paces and touched his side. His hand came away sticky and, on a hunch, he lifted it towards his nose and sniffed.
“Frak,” he spat. It smells like Deadnettle, no, Nightfern no...I really should pay more attention when he lectures.
Then the pain of the neurotoxic poison that had coated Marick’s dagger blossomed as it flared through the Miraluka’s bloodstream. He yelped and doubled over, stubbornly staying on his feet and keeping his blade ignited and between himself and his opponent.
Marick watched his apprentice calmly and waited. It was a small dose, and the cut shallow. Revs would still be able to fight, but he would have to do so through the pain. He slid the emerald dagger back into the sheath on his boot, deactivated and stowed his lightsaber. He replaced it with the curved Inquisitorius dagger from his belt.
A few minor Syntax issues:
Ditch 'could' here.
The comma isn't necessary but it's not something I'm dinging you for.
Here's the thing with masters and apprentices: when you're using it as a title in direct address, like in the first sentence, or in front of a name, it should be capitalized. Otherwise it shouldn't. But there are two caveats to that. First, Marick is the Combat Master, so it's a special title for him like "Voice" would be for Evant. Second, it's not really a problem to capitalize Master and Apprentice as long as you do it consistently. If "Master" just looks right to you, that's ok - just make sure you always capitalize it.
First posts can be hard to write because so much of the Story score for both participants depends on how well you set up the scene. There are a few things I looked for: Do I get a sense of place? Do I understand the relationship between the characters? Do I know why they're fighting? Do I care? You did a great job answering all of those questions for me. The training session trope is ludicrously cliche by this point, but I didn't mind it in this case because you didn't just write a generic training session, you wrote Marick Arconae training Revs for a specific reason towards specific ends.