Sanguinius was already moving as the d’Tana’s arm came up to point at him, his training ingrained into his movements. The rocket whistled through the air and passed by the pirouetting Jedi to slam into the assembled Massassi behind him. Broken and torn bodies were thrown into the air as the explosion enveloped them. Cries of panic and anger were intermixed with the repetitive chanting of the tribesmen.
The Quaestor was thrown forward mid-spin, the force from the detonation enough to throw him off balance. Luck kept stray fragments from peppering the Entar as he tucked into a roll and pushed himself up off the ground in one move, drawing his strength from the wellspring of calm within him.
Looking at the cyborg, Sanguinius deactivated one of his sabers and placed it back on his belt. “Now that’s not very sporting, is it?” he quipped as he brushed some dirt off his robes. The Warden acted nonchalantly, despite his recent brush with death. His mind worked overtime, recalculating his interactions with the Mystic and alternative ways to win this fight.
The Jedi had sensed darkness within the Mandalorian when she first came to Marka Ragnos, yet he had also found a spark of good within her. Honour was a strange thing in the universe. Sanguinius knew the Mandalorians venerated honour and courage, they thought it the norm, unlike so many other cultures in the galaxy.
Yet despite all this, Ophelia was a conundrum. Her Mandalorian heritage and the One Sith tattoos that scarred her body showed a casual viewer that she was capable of great evil. To the Jedi, he saw someone who had fought all their life for something to believe in, for a sense of belonging. He was not frightened of his opponent, instead he felt pity and hoped that the Kiffar would find peace in Naga Sadow, a place to call home.
The stunned disbelief of the tribal Massassi had held them for a few seconds as Sanguinius studied his fellow Ragnosian. A bellow from the war chief drew them out of their stupor as he gesticulated towards Ophelia and barked out orders that sent the assembled primordial beasts charging towards the Mystic.
Ophelia responded by slicing through the first two Massassi to reach her, twin crimson blades bisecting maroon flesh. Bloodlust swallowed up the Mandalorian, her lightsabers lashing out to carve furrows in the tribesmen attacking her.
Several burly Massassi brushed past the Entar who stood still for a moment, weighing up the options. With a weary sigh, the emerald blade descended, clipping the heels of a Massassi that had just past him. The alien fell to the ground, his forward momentum making him collide with three other beasts.
The attack drew the attention of the few remaining Massassi by the Jedi, who roared in unison and came at him. Sanguinius’ full attention was demanded to combat several vicious and powerful tribesmen and he allowed his command of the suppressing field around him go.
Ophelia felt the Force beckon to her, warning of a savage blow that would have caved her skull in. The joy she felt at reconnecting to the Force was quickly overcome with the realisation that she could employ her favourite tactic. The Mystic vanished from sight, her lightsabers deactivated, confusing the Massassi attacking her. She quickly slipped away from them, circling around to come at Sanguinius from behind. She stood there, several metres back from the melee as the beasts that had been attacking her had looked around and seen their kin fighting the Warden. She watched, enjoying the tableau of destruction before her.
Sanguinius glanced towards where he believed Ophelia was fighting and his heart was leaden as he realised she had vanished. His disappointment with the newcomer to Naga Sadow was quickly clamped down on as he chided himself for having some hope that she would be a better person than that.
The Jedi fought valiantly, trying to avoid unnecessary deaths, deflecting blows and “disarming” his foes. Limbs lay scattered on the ground, trodden underfoot by the maroon skinned aliens. The emerald lightsaber never stopped moving as Sanguinius took advantage of the open ground to outmanoeuvre his opponents. The Shadow could appreciate the Quaestor’s form, noting his footwork. She dismissed his efforts to avoid deaths however, bemused by his qualms. No matter how strong the Anaxsi was, he was not enough to come out on top. Even if he beat the Massassi attacking him, there were hundreds more around the temple who would slaughter him when he tired.
Ophelia pondered as she watched Sanguinius dart past a pair of tribesmen raising their weapons and their reactions as they registered the damage his lightsaber did on their bodies. Could she let him die or would her honour as a warrior rule the day?
I noticed a few small grammatical errors here.
"It's" is a contraction. You just want "its" for the possessive. English is weird.
Small capitalization error.
There's a lot going on here with the use of Suppression and Illusion. I'm going to step through it.
So from this, I gather that Ophelia is still within range of the Suppression/Dampen field.
This doesn't work. Illusion affects the opponent's mind; it doesn't create something that isn't there. If Ophelia is still under the effects of Suppression, she shouldn't be able to use the Illusion at all. If she wasn't, the range of Suppression wouldn't matter at all. The illusion isn't actually a thing. It would only exist in Sang's mind, so the position of the illusion in the Suppression field wouldn't affect it.
Also note that at only +2, Ophelia's use of Illusion shouldn't be that effective in combat anyway.