“Are you done running? There’s nowhere left to go Areticus,” loomed the deep voice from under a cowl. Areticus turned to the figure from the edge of the rooftop building, keeping the holocron behind his back. The apprentice to House Ajunta Pall’s Aedile had been hunting him down ever since he got his hands on it from the forbidden archives of Lyspair. Hopefully the distress call to Felix Fulmen’s freighter, The Rivergleam, was received. He knew he could count on Felix to meet at the rendezvous and get them out of Kul’tak’s reach once and for all. But first, he needed to get out of this corner the hunter put him in.
“A wager?” Areticus requested.
“No,” was his reply.
“Hear me out,” he pleaded while setting the holocron down on the ledge and walking toward the hooded Iridonian. “There is nowhere I can run, and without my lightsaber you have me at a disadvantage,” he said opening his arms in an exposing gesture. The noble from Naboo could see the gleaming eyes of his opponent search for any indication of the lie. Areticus then made a small bow with an elegant wave of his arm before turning slightly sideways with his feet shoulder width apart. Kul’tak’s reaction at first was with a raised brow, but Areticus knew that his next words with just the right application of the Force would turn the tables for him, “Come now, consider yourself the victor of the hunt and face me as an honorable man should.”
The Zabrak chuckled, “Alright human,” and took his lightsaber and tossed it aside. He too took a sideways stance and mirrored Areticus further when they both raised their fists in a boxing stance. Kul’tak decided to take the first move. Although he was much larger than his opponent, he tried to get as close as he could. Areticus shot a straight punch with a twist of his hips to accelerate his momentum. However the punch was only met with air when Kul’tak ducked below. His tattooed arm lashed out in a feint strike along with an immediate groin kick with his leg. With a further shift to the side, Areticus avoided the dirty attempt and took a hopping step backwards.
“The nerve!” he said with frustration at his opponent.
“I don’t like to lose bets,” The Zabrak replied.
“Where is the famous honor of your kin? My bantha fodder of an apprentice had better manners.”
Lo-Kain, Kul’tak remembered. He too was Iridonian. “Do not speak of my people as fodder. The bounty never said I had to bring you back alive.”
“You’re right, I suppose they don’t quite live up to the comparison. The markings you put on your faces always makes me think of such, though.”
It was then Areticus saw the anger begin to form in the shadow’s orange eyes. The seeker retreated away further until he got back to the ledge and snatched the holocron to stop his stalker from advancing any further.
“This is your last chance, Areticus,” the Zabrak said with a clenched fist while keeping his eyes on the holocron. “Hand it over and come quietly, you have nowhere left to go.”
Areticus sighed, “Did you know that Nar Shaddaa had a diameter of approximately five thousand kilometers? Unless it possesses a density greater than lead, I hypothesize the gravity being at a comparatively less magnitude than that of my home world. Though I could be wrong. What do you think?”
It made Areticus smile to see his opponent’s eyes widen at realizing what he was about to do. “Ta ta!” he said before taking a step off the building.
There are some Syntax issues here:
Add a comma before a direct address like this.
Italicize the name of the ship.
Capitalize the names of Disciplines.
Realism:
Don’t forget that Mind Trick requires a hand gesture as a focus. Areticus probably doesn’t even need it, though, since he has a higher Manipulation than Kul’tak’s Resolve and to the appeal to machismo is a good rhetorical choice here.
I like the characterization here, and I think it plays off of several of Areticus’ Aspects.