Scion still held only his blaster in his hand when the first few strikes fell upon him. Instinctively, he stepped back from them and raised his arms to shield his face. At the same time he focused the Force around him into a solid barrier, deflecting the onslaught just long enough to drop the DL-44 and retrieve his own dual blades from his belt. They flared to life just as the barrier shattered.
The Soresu master put up a vigorous defense, but Solas’ unusual Shien style was unfamiliar to him. It took his full concentration as well as a few timely whispers from the Force to stay ahead of the grand, sweeping gestures of the style punctuated with the Knight’s powerful off-hand strikes and sweeps. The Tarentae was slowly retreating under the pressure of the attack, and somewhere in the back of his mind he was counting the steps before he would topple over the edge into the bottomless expanse.
“You said you wouldn’t need those, old man,” mocked Solas.
“Even the Tarentae occasionally make mistakes,” Scion admitted. “But you have yet to understand yours.”
The Battlelord’s analysis of Solas’ unique fighting style so far had revealed several interesting facts. First, that the lightsaber was not the Knight’s primary weapon despite being held in his dominant hand. Second, that the movements were almost all large and thus time consuming. Functionally, they weren’t so different from the Soresu forms intended for blocking incoming blaster fire, but he had yet to see any of the quicker jabs or parries he would expect from a dueling style. The attacks that were penetrating his defense more often than not were low leg sweeps, beneath his typical lightsaber parries and in many cases forcing him to jump to avoid being knocked over.
Scion stopped retreating and pulled more of the Fortress’ twisted, ebon power into his limbs. His dual blades began to sing as their speed crescendoed into two wheels of shining red death. Solas was already on the brink of madness, his face painted with pure rage and moving as fast as he was capable, but the old man had only just begun to tap into his reserves. Now that he better understood his opponent’s style it was becoming much easier to defend. The increased speed allowed him to weave attacks and counter-attacks into his defense, putting a subtle end to Solas’ advance. The dual blades could present an attack impossible to block with a single weapon, and within moments the Knight’s offense had shifted to a harried defense composed both of blocks and parries as well as nimble hops and dodges.
After awhile the Quaestor scored a hit across Solas’ calf as he tried another sweep. Then he dug a deep gash along the Epicanthix’s side. Those injuries alone should have at least slowed the Knight down, but he appeared not to even notice. The madness had fully taken him, and nothing short of death would stop him now.
Exertion was beginning to take its toll on the old man. It was becoming clear to him that waiting for Solas to wear down and slip up was not going to be an option. He crossed his blades and locked the Knight’s own blade between them, shoving the larger man backward with all his weight. Solas reeled, giving Scion a moment of opportunity. He took off running toward the door, stopping to turn when he reached the beginning of the walkway. As soon as he did, a massive invisible force slammed into his chest and knocked him on his back. He heard Solas’ footsteps fast approaching as he tried to regain his feet. He didn’t try to stand up, but just rolled into a forward leap and flew, lightsabers first, into Solas’ torso. The chaotic tangle of three crimson blades slid across the smooth surface of the platform, leaving a wide streak of blood and entrails for four or five yards.
Scion lay gasping for breath. At least one of the lightsabers had punctured his chest and very possibly collapsed one of his lungs. He was a naturally fast healer and had some skill in using the Force to accelerate it beyond the natural, but getting up and out of the fortress for rescue on one lung was going to present him with a significant challenge.
On the other hand, Solas had fared far worse. The dual blades had disemboweled him on impact, and as the two tumbled to the ground the majority of his internal organs had spilled out onto the floor. Most lightsaber wounds self-cauterize, but the violent action had pulled the sides of the wound wide open instead, like popping a balloon. Their bodies had rolled and mashed most of the spilled innards into paste and many pints of his blood were now rapidly congealing all across the smooth floor of the chamber. Scion feebly wiped what remained of Solas off his face with the sleeve of his jacket, grimacing when he pulled it back and saw what he had smeared on it. He gave a long look at the door which now seemed impossibly far away, and began to contemplate trying to sit up.
There wasn't anything technically wrong with this post, but it was very short. I'd have liked more background on the conflict between the characters. The reader here doesn't necessarily have any knowledge of the context going into this fight. You mention your forces, but don't give any explanation of what they are, or why they'd be trying to make a play on this temple against your own Quaestor.