As his eyesight began to come back, Andrelious felt the Force slowly shielding his hearing from the affect of the flash bang. The ringing began to turn from a shrill, painful noise into a duller tone that was far more irritating than anything else. It was still loud enough that he could not hear much else, but his focus was no longer dominated by the sound.
Climbing back to his feet, the Warlord examined the room for his discarded lightsaber, noticing it in Morgan’s hand. He extended his own hand to summon it with a simple command to the Force, but, as the silver hilt began to free itself, his opponent hurled it to the far end of the room.
“I think not. Come on, Andrelious. You’re a Grand Inquisitor. Surely you’ve got more in your arsenal than just a few fancy lightsaber moves?” the Herald taunted.
Andrelious looked up to see Morgan approaching, but found that her imprint in the Force was far less obvious than it had been before. Instead of bone-chilling cold, he sensed her darkness as if he were feeling a seaside breeze wisping its way peacefully past. It was almost as if he were sensing her as she would have been without any training. In a flash he realised what was happening.
“A cheap trick, Miss Sorenn. Something that I’d expect from that brother of yours,” the Sith hissed, stepping back in an attempt to move out of the zone that the female had seemingly drained of the Force.
“Typical Sith! You’re denied the use of the Force as a crutch and you try to hobble away!” Morgan teased, releasing her hold over the area as though she were discarding a shroud. Her gaze remained focused solely on Andrelious, however, as she began to probe the Warlord’s mind for further weaknesses.
“All you’re doing is trying to stop me, Herald. What are you going to do when your luck runs out?” the Taldryanite hissed, activating his second lightsaber. As he readied himself to attack, his concentration was broken; he remembered the comments that Morgan had made about his family.
She mentioned that business with Vorsa. And my family. That’s why she’s here! She’s keeping me busy while Pravus, or one of his other Councillors, deals with Kooki and the girls! Andrelious thought, panicking as he realised the gravity of the situation. Sweat poured down the Warlord’s face as he found himself engulfed with fear of what the Grand Master was prepared to do.
“But Kooki. The girls. The Grand Inquisitors are the ones who failed to deal with Vorsa. Not our families!” Andrelious cried, trying to fight back a tear from rolling down his face.
“That doesn’t matter, Inahj. Lord Pravus was deeply upset with you and your fellows. You’re just the first to be punished!” Morgan responded, her words designed to further enhance the ruse that she had created.
“No. I will not stand by and let them die! Stand down, Sorenn. Get the hell out of my way!” the Sith roared, his sense of logic already beginning to dislodge the Herald’s trickery. Andrelious charged forward, attacking so furiously with his lightsaber that Morgan barely had time to re-activate her own weapon to fend the Warlord off.
“You’re going nowhere, Inahj. You should have fled the Brotherhood when you had the chance! Instead you went crawling to Cantor and his hasbeens! You’re just going to be the first of the so called Grand Inquisitors to fall!” the Herald snapped, remaining completely focused on the job at hand even as her opponent pulled out all of the stops.
Andrelious continued to try and batter his way past the female’s defences, becoming more and more frustrated as his lack of speed allowed Morgan to fend him off with a seeming ease. Her own attacks were also quick in nature, trying to take advantage of the times that the Warlord swung back to build up power for another assault.
Stepping back, Andrelious was about to lurch forwards and attempt a series of lower slashes when the Force yelled at him to take caution. Sure enough, Morgan leapt backwards, putting several paces between herself and the Taldryanite, before hurling another grenade in his direction. As she threw it, her other hand reached for her goggles, placing them on her eyes. The grenade exploded, immediately excreting a large amount of a translucent gas that began to irritate Andrelious’ eyes. Even with the few moments of warning he had received, the Warlord found the discomfort enough to have to step well away from the immediate area.
Tear gas. Could have done with this bitch and her belt of tricks back during the War. Andrelious thought as he rubbed his eyes to try and help them clear the offending chemical.
Smirking as she peered through the gas, Morgan’s delight at seeing her opponent struggle was replaced by a sense of foreboding as she noticed Andrelious had stopped rubbing his eyes, and was instead pointing his fingers directly at her. She had just enough time to raise her hands before the Sith’s Force lightning hit her. The attack flashed into the Herald’s raised hands, fizzing out of existence millimetres away as if blocked by an invisible shield. Moments later, the shield itself began to collapse, but the lightning ceased before it was able to become an immediate danger.
Andrelious snarled. He was beginning to run out of ideas; he had sensed that Morgan was beginning to tire, but she had raised her defences against his lightning with such ease that he was now unsure if her fatigue was just merely what she wanted him to see. He side-stepped a few times, never taking his eyes from his opponent. She too watched him carefully, praying hard that she could keep the Warlord doubting her abilities.
Reaching his fingers out again, the Taldryanite prepared for another burst of lightning, but was caught completely off guard when the woman hurled herself at him, hitting him with enough force to send him stumbling backwards. As he fell, Andrelious had enough about him to fire off his intended attack, but it was cut short as he collided with what he initially thought was the wall. However, a sharp piercing pain through his back quickly told him that he’d backed straight into one of the weapon racks, and had been wounded by the sharp edge of a sword that had been carelessly put back the wrong way around. The Warlord struggled with the weapon, trying to free himself as the pain grew. As he pulled, the embedded blade did further damage, cutting many of the tiny blood vessels throughout his back.
Morgan casually sauntered up to the beleaguered Sith.
“Shame. Seems someone wasn’t paying attention when they returned that sword. For once it is you who has been stabbed in the back,” the Herald declared with a smirk.
Finally, Andrelious managed to work himself away from the sword, but his back was badly wounded. Without the sword in place, blood began to ooze from his severed veins and arteries, coating the floor in crimson. The Warlord realised too late that the blood loss he was suffering was far greater than he had estimated. Even with his own abilities to heal, he would need medical attention, but Morgan wasn’t in a charitable mood. Taking her chance, the Herald jammed her lightsaber into her opponent’s left thigh, further increasing the Warlord’s agony. He dropped to the ground, unsure whether to clutch the fresh, cauterised leg wound, or to try and stem what felt like a river of blood still flowing from his back.
Andrelious was still trying to decide what to do as he passed out from blood loss.
Morgan simply shook her head and walked away.
“I wonder if his wife would have been better sport...”
Story -- Good backstory here leading up to the fight. It gives the reader some perspective. Well done.
Syntax and Realism -- As a character, Morgan seems fairly uninterested in the private lives of others. The issue, I think, is that this sentence reads as if Andrelious is saying it, with the same tone and rhythm, whereas individual characters should have their own individual thought processes and ways of speaking. To this end, I felt that it pulled me -- as the reader -- out of the action somewhat.
Syntax -- Crimson plasma is not necessarily the best description that could be used here. I'd suggest something different.
Overall
I thought this was a good opening, introductory post. It established an interesting backstory and certainly went some way to explaining the motivations for Andrelious. The post did not explore Morgan as much, which would have added another dimension to the story.
Another point which would have augmented your post would have been to describe why Andrelious and Morgan were meeting in the Combat Training Centre. Who had sent them together? What was the purpose of it? These things add breadth and really contribute to the backstory.
I also felt that the post was somewhat disproportionate. With the long exposition into Andrelious and the conversation that takes place thereafter, there was plenty of scope to have some interesting combat, using the surroundings (which would have worked to your favour with Morgan's Character Sheet) and seeing the detailed writing you demonstrate at the start through to the end. Instead, it seems as if the post peters off unexpectedly. This detracts from what promised to be a very interesting piece of combat.
Aside from the above, I was very impressed. You are a veteran of the ACC and clearly know your domain. Well done!