Usually it took a good bit of time before Alethia could form a strong opinion of a planet; the Human prided herself looking past the obvious and doing her homework before committing herself to a position. Kamino, though, didn’t have much to it beyond the obvious. She hated the rain. She hated the constant crack and boom of the thunder. She hated the overly sterile hospital smell of the Kaminoans’ whitewashed city, and the patronizing aliens that dwelled within it. She hated every rain-soaked minute she’d spent on this rock, but she could at least take solace in her mission.
It had taken some time to get the Sentinel Network back up to full speed after the loss of New Tython, but the majority of their sources had remained faithful. One of them had reported that Clan Naga Sadow had contracted an order of experimental growth matrices from the Kaminoans. The devices - if they worked - would allow field medics and emergency technicians to grow new organs or even limbs for the grievously injured within a few hours. Alethia suspected the Sadowans had less altruistic intentions for the matrices, but regardless the opportunity has been too good to pass up.
So Major Archenksova had quietly requisitioned a light freighter and three crewmen and set off to hijack the shipment. The team had arrived on Kamino ten hours ahead of the scheduled pickup, and with a bit of finesse and a lot of bluster - aided, no doubt, by a black zeyd cloth robe, black lipstick, and a countenance of irate superiority - Alethia had convinced the Kaminoans to hand over the growth matrices. The Kaminoans seemed happy enough to retreat inside while the supposed ‘Sith’ loaded the crates themselves.
“That’s the last of them,” the warrant officer said with relief as he walked over to where Alethia and the other two soldiers had been watching the load-lifters from the limited shelter of the research facility’s entryway.
Alethia nodded in response, and several drops fell from the edge of her mostly water-proof cowl onto her face. “Excellent. Are we ready for take-off?”
She’d barely gotten the words out before the question was answered. The ship’s repulsors hummed to life and the freighter began to pull away even as the entrance ramp slipped shut.
“Uh, apparently without us, Major.”
Archenksova just scowled in silence as she retrieved the remote from her belt and keyed in a detonation code. Even through the tinted viewport, the flash was visible and the EMP grenade tucked away beneath the pilot’s seat went off. The freighter wobbled as it slowly tilted to port like a wounded animal. It hung above the landing platform for a tense few seconds before the repulsors failed and it came careening down. Durasteel shrieked in protest as the craft scraped along the platform, mowing down a crackling lightning rod before pitching over the edge. Two of the KUDF crewman jogged after it, weapons drawn, just reaching the end of the platform by the time the freighter finally slipped from sight.
Quo-Wing-Tsun would have agreed with Archenksova’s assessment of Kamino. He’d hated that he had to argue with traffic control to give him a landing pad, since “the Dlarit Corporation’s lawful representatives have already arrived.” He hated the downpour and the agonizingly slow pace he’d had to take to make it to the ship unseen. Most of all, he hated that he didn’t kill the thieving scum trying to run off with his shipment. Quo knew better than to jeopardize his mission by engaging a squad of unknowns. But right now, the Zabrak’s hatred was reserved for the crackling explosion from beneath his chair.
The hair was standing on end all over his body and his extremities tingled a bit, but otherwise the Shadow was unharmed. His prosthetic right hand spasmed once, briefly, but the electronics were well enough shielded to continue functioning. The ship was a different story. The control panel and the myriad of displays in the cabin were dark, save for lingering sparks and arcs of electricity here and there. The lights flickered a few times before dying out permanently. If the ship had a reserve power generator, someone had disconnected it for just this occasion.
Quo scrambled to his feet and his robes billowed out behind him as he bolted down the corridor. The Zabrak was thrown from his feet as the ship slammed into the landing pad, but he bounced off the bulkhead and slammed his hand on the hatch controls in one fluid motion. Taking one deep breath, Quo willing strength into his legs and hurled himself out the hatch as the freighter slid off the edge.
Darting up the rain-slick, curved side of the landing pad by sheer force of will as much as athletic prowess, Quo again launched himself upwards. He drew the lightsaber from his belt and ignited it in mid-air as he somersaulted, bringing the blazing weapon down into one of the Odanites as he landed. The other barely managed to bring his blaster up before Quo’s other hand shot out, his rage and frustration escaping in the form of brilliant white lightning. The Twi’lek crewman fell to his knees, only just registering what had happened as Quo’s lightsaber smoothly glided through his lekku and neck.
The warrant officer brought his own blaster up to take aim at the Sith, but the Major’s hand shoved the weapon back down.
“Inside. Now,” she said, firmly but quietly. “Get to a coms terminal and call Henymory for extraction.” The man could hear her suck in breath through gritted teeth even over the churning of the wind and water. “And shoot the door controls from inside. I’ll call you when I’m done with this one.”
The man gulped, but nodded. Within a heartbeat he was gone, and Alethia heard the quiet whir of the closing door followed by a muffled blaster bolt. “Care to explain where you were going with my ship?” she shouted over the storm.
“Back to Aeotheran,” the hooded Zabrak replied in a tinny, distorted voice. He was advancing on her slowly, almost casually except for the blood red lightsaber held up across his torso. “With my equipment. It was kind of you to load it for me, but I think I crashed your ship.”
So much for basic taunts, Alethia thought. “Don’t tell me: Quo-Wing-Tzun?”
The Sith kept advancing in silence, raindrops fizzling to steam as they landed on his blade.
“Zabrak. Breathing mask. Red lightsaber in a Jar’kai grip. Lightning. Oh,” Alethia said with a conspiratorial smile, “I almost forgot the cybernetic hand.” That, and your name on the pickup receipt. The Human hoped the bluff would throw her opponent off a bit. If it had, the Sith was determined not to let it show - but he did pause in his advance. Alethia nodded towards his forearm, and Quo glanced down at the broken dart caught in his sleeve.
Frack, he thought. She must have gotten a shot at me when I came up, and I didn’t even catch her. He wouldn’t allow it to happen again. Quo kept his gaze focused on the woman as he drew his vibroblade with his off hand and brought it up, tucked close to his chest to guard his solar plexus. His lightsaber blade bobbed slightly out in front of him as he dropped his weight onto his back leg, poised to lunge forward. “And you are?”
“In no mood for introductions,” Alethia replied as the Sith hurled himself forward, not waiting for her answer. There was a crackle and a flash as she seamlessly drew the riot baton from inside her robe and batted away his saber before spinning her weapon around for a counterattack. This was going to be satisfying.
Syntax
You tense danced here between "had" and "has".
Should have been "Quo willed strength into his legs".
Story
This is a bit convenient, especially since there was no explanation to such a thing being there. It doesn't particularly hurt your story as you are still leading into it, but it didn't strengthen it.
Again, this is too convenient. There was no allusion to this occurring, and it is strange that even with +1 Perception and Precognition that he wouldn't notice a single thing.