His teeth were gritted so tight each set could have crushed another leaving the Nautolan with a mouth full of painful shards. Still, the pain from such an event wouldn’t have interrupted the creature’s focus as he quickly moved to his feet from the prone position on the berm. Rolling his index and middle fingers over his trigger in the double tap technique he had learned, Raiju’s carbine washed the setting with a spray of blue while he continued to bare the snort of his weapon at the fleeing Zabrak. When the Sadowite finally took cover behind the skeleton at the base of the ditch, Raiju disengaged; cautiously circling the edge of the pit to find a better vantage point while having his weapon fixed on his prey below.
The lack of a Force connection was an educating experience for the Corsair. In previous engagements, the acrobatic display from the Sith wouldn’t have given the Nautolan any pause. Today, worry was hard to fight off as it tensed his muscles and paled his complexion. He underestimated the Knight, thinking he had been at a safe distance, and it gave worry where else he could have underestimated the Sadowite in his plan. His confidence was drawing, and for a split second all he could think about was how much he could use a good smoke. The urge drew on as he completed his circuit around the pit and its imprisoned carcass, as did his concern of the Knight’s abilities.
What if he is just concealing himself down there is plain view? The paranoia rushed in like a flash flood. What if the mynock had feigned the move and was still back by the other skull? Without the force to aid me, do I still have the resolve against a Mind Trick-
Raiju was slow to wipe the parade of sweat from his forehead, taking comfort from the touch and attempting to push away the worried thoughts. Flicking the sweat from his fingertips in one swift motion at the ground back his right foot, he used the now free hand to fumble through his chest pocket for a cigarette. When Raiju brought up the lighter afterwards, he noticed the trembelling movements of the flame dance around the tip of the cigarette. A long drawn out sigh of annoyance flared the Nautolan’s nostrils then suddenly, as if spooked by the sigh, the flame held still – quickly sparking the cigarette and then disappearing in a fluid motion as the lighter was closed and tucked away back in the breast pocket.
The cigarette burned brightly for a few moment as the Nautolan drew in a long breath. He had continued his circuit, clutching his carbine hard into his shoulder as it was fix down at the skeleton again. Curiously directly in front of Raiju a bone fragment, the size of a shoe, lift from the ground with its jagged edge pointed at the Nautolan. When it hurled forward towards the Corsair, Raiju noticed the dark figure of the Sadowite reappear behind the resting place of the shard; yet the creature was incredibly more focused on the vaulting piece of harm coming his way – so much so, he completely ignored the lite cigarette falling from his mouth and skipping across his clothes to the ground.
Instinctively, the Nautolan felt his shoulders and head drop back from the danger – as if he were to limbo under the assault. However, the shift to his balance forced the Corsair hard off his feet and Raiju dropped out of danger. Smacking his buttocks off the edge of the berm, and his feet catching his balance on the slope and launching him forward, the Nautolan sailed towards Quo-Wing-Tzun with the added momentum at his back. A howl, with a mixture of intense momentary courage, anger, pain, and a little worry he had wet himself at the sight of that floating bone shard, erupted from the Corsair’s lips and he felt a familiar surge of energy tense muscles and hammer on his trigger. A lifetime of a warrior’s memories rushed through the Corsair’s mind, returning with it a sense of confidence to the proud creature, and he now recognized the familiar symptoms of a Dark Jedi’s terror tricks.
Free from the Zabrak’s unnatural mind games, the mercenary kept his fingers drawn on the trigger and continued to spray the Sadowite as he approached. The wild attack forced the Zabrak to stumble back as he tried to put distance between him and his assailant and left his guard open as he still attempted to bat away every bolt, the conclusion of his efforts and the Nautolan’s added momentum was realized when Raiju crashed hard into the Sith’s chest – knocking the wind from the Zabrak with a painful gasp.
Both men fell to the ground, with the Nautolan rolling over the Zabrak and flipping onto his back, leaving the combatants in a heap resting against the skeleton. Raiju was the first to start making his way back to his feet but discovered that he had lost his grip on his carbine, experience lead the Corsair’s hands to his belt and onto his baton rather than digging through the pile for his carbine. Armed again, he flailed the baton out into its engaged position but where he was expecting to hammer the end of his weapon upon a downed Sith; his weapon collided with the rising blade of the Zabrak. Despite visible efforts to catch his breath, the other creature pressed on and managed to catch blow after blow on his crimson blade.
Anger fueled the mercenary now as he couldn’t believe this creature’s drive, and he batted at the Sith from multiple angles – overhead, from the side, and even backhanded. However, it when he spun on the balls of his feet and barring all his weight around in a circle to crash, he still crashed his baton onto the blade of the Sith; however, this time the Sith was forced to the ground after being knocked unbalanced.
The time to end this is now, Raiju thought, as he brought his baton above his head and swung it down at the Sith. However, the mercenary jerked forward as his baton stopped mid-swing and held its place in the air above an outstretched hand of the Zabrak. Yet, pulling his own legs out from under himself again, as he did on the berm’s edge, Raiju felt the weight of his body crashed hard on the solid ground below. And while he gave a large grown of pain from the impact, his hand was lucky enough to find hand of his slugthrower amidst the confusion.
Without even drawing it from its holster, the Nautolan jerked his thigh inward so the weapon was pointed at the other floored combatant and squeezed off several shots at the Zabrak. Pain shot up the Nautolan’s leg from the heat of the weapon, and several shots buzzing close over his skin, but a couple slugs found their target as was evident if only from the baton dropping from the air as the practitioner’s focus was broken. But Raiju could see this as he slowly draw his weapon and forced himself onto his feet because past his sights he could see blood bubble from several spots on the Zabrak’s chest. Determination still shun on the Zabrak’s face though, causing Raiju to wonder at what point the Sith realized this hadn’t been a drill before he used his foot to sweep the lightsaber hilt from the Zabrak’s hand.
Squatting over the downed combatant, Raiju drew himself close to the Zabrak and firmly planted his slugthrower on Quo-Wing-Tzun’s temple. It was at this point the Nautolan realized how out of breath he was and he choked up for a moment before he could speak. The entire time, an angry glare remained unbroken from the Zabrak.
“Should you survive this, I want you to know something.” Raiju began, grabbing the Zabrak at the chest and pulling hard on the robes to shake the Sith. “I had friends on New Tython, and I will never forget what your filth did to them. The rebellion will strike back, and we will ravage the Brotherhood two-fold for what was done there. So should your anger be enough to keep you alive, I want you to come find me on the new battlefield. Because at some point I will get my connection to the Force back, and I will show you want a real practitioner can do.”
After the last of Raiju’s words were spat at the Zabrak, a deep sigh of relief came from Quo-Wing-Tzun after the slugthrower was pulled from his temple. Whatever quiet, seething response out of the Zabrak was ignored by the Nautolan while he stood and foraged around for his weapons. Once all were collected, the Corsair carefully climbed the dirt slope and took another look down at the Zabrak before looking to the source of the bird calls that had started to the west of them. In the distance, at the edge of the unholy graveyard, many scavenging birds had begun collecting on cliffs and trees and calling out that they were hungry. Yet, none of them made a move to enter the grove.
A final look down at the wounded Zabrak was responded to by an insulting gesture from the Sith before he began sway his body back and forth so he could roll himself over. Afterwards, the creature began clawing his way towards his lightsaber, however the attempt was pathetically slow and not a danger to the mercenary whom has begun walking away with a smug grin on his face as he thought to himself.
What a worthy rival to look forward to.
I'm not entirely sure exactly of the plot that you're trying to convey with this post. You reference "next opponent" as though Quo is in the context of some larger battle (tournament?), but don't explain it any here.
In general, you should strive to give the reader enough info so that they don't need to dig through wiki pages or other ACC matches to understand the context of a fight. At the very least, you should give some sort of clue for where the reader should look if they're interested in the backstory to the fight. Basically, this opening post says "there is some reason to this fight, but I'm not going to clearly define what it is."