The Akul moved smoothly through the blades of delicate Turu-grass, announcing its presence with a deafening roar. Bright, blazing orange fur barely concealed its massive muscles. The beast’s piercing gaze sent chills down the combatants’ spines.
“Whoa there, nice kitty…” Aul soothingly spoke towards the muscled mass of fur, tooth and claw staring him down. The human was displaying both his palms, hoping to appear non-threatening to the predator.
“You idiot, you’re going to get us killed with your lightsaber out like that,” spat the Umbaran without taking his eyes off the Akul.
“Ah, right,” Aul agreed and dropped his lightsaber, the ignition dying as it hit the ground. Alarmed by the sudden motion, the Akul hissed and made a sudden swipe at the human. Quickly summoning what energies he could, Aul leapt backwards, narrowly avoiding disembowelment.
The Akul was unphased about missing its target; apparently patience was within the budget for this meal. The beast made its way towards the pile of partially charred animals and sat quietly, facing towards the petrified pair of Grey Jedi. It began to quietly chew on a blackened rodent.
“I don’t get it, what’s going on?” the Umbaran blurted out in hushed exasperation after a moment of tense silence.
“The Akul can be surprisingly intelligent. It seems to be playing with us; must not be hurting for food. We should run; we stand a better chance against each other than this monster. At least one of us would survive,” Aul morbidly replied.
The swordsmen slowly backed away to put distance between them and their attendant, hoping for a small head-start to a sprint for safety. Barely audible above the sound of their feet crunching on dried grass and the Akul’s plentiful salivation, Aul detected the sound of a camera lens refocusing. The human realized his lightsaber was ten meters away, blocked by an Umbaran with a devilish smirk spreading across his face.
“I must confess, my favorite part of a drama was always the third Act; nothing beats a good, bloody climax,” Adem taunted with a tinge of delight. The Arconan deftly twirled his still-activated blade and revelled in the wide-eyed realization growing on the Sadowan’s face.
Aul reached for the DC-17 on the back of his belt only to find the holster empty. His vibroblade was missing as well. In a moment of clarity, Celsus became aware that only he and Bol’era were there; the Akul had vanished, and the small pile of animals remained untouched. Cruel laughter disrupted his thoughts.
“For such a learned fellow, you certainly turned out to be the village idiot,” Adem snickered. Aul’s confiscated weapons dropped with a thud and a clang at the feet of his opponent and were quickly destroyed by the glowing yellow energy of the Arconan’s blade. “And now, for my triumph.”
Adem breathed deep, still twirling his lightsaber in a showy taunt. Suddenly, the Arconan cleared the space between him and the Sadowan, blade searing through the air. Aul reactively leapt back, but too slow to keep clear. The human groaned in agony as Adem’s lightsaber sizzled through his shoulder muscle, leaving a deep, burnt track reeking of crisped flesh. Aul suppressed the pain to avoid losing focus on his attacker and rolled towards his lightsaber. Adem pursued his target, elaborately brandishing his blade to try and catch Aul once more.
As the human came out of his roll, he felt compelled to stay low and dove forward, flattening out onto the grass, his weapon still a couple of meters out of reach. Not expecting the sudden change in trajectory, Adem overcompensated and tumbled into the dry grass. The Umbaran hastened to his feet, but was caught by a powerful knee strike driving into his ribcage. The Arconan fell to the ground and coughed deeply, spraying the Turu-grass with bright blood. Before he could regain his composure Aul was upon him, delivering two heavy strikes to the Umbaran’s delicate face leaving deep, bloody gashes under his eyes.
The Arconan covered his face with his wiry hands. “My face! I can’t be seen like this!” Adem wailed loudly, disturbing some birds in a nearby tree.
“It’ll heal, quit whining,” Aul groaned as he picked up Adem’s lightsaber, which had rolled a short distance away. “You’ll have bigger problems if you keep making that much noise with the Akul prides nearby. As if our wounds weren’t big enough beacons.”
“Just finish me off,” muttered the Arconan as he sat up, his head hung in shame.
The scene was interrupted by rustling and a low growl from a nearby cluster of tall grass. “You really think you can get me like that again? I’m on to your games, showman,” Aul snarled as he bent down and retrieved his own lightsaber.
“No, really, that’s not me this time. I beg you, my lightsaber. I won’t betray you, but I don’t want to become an Akul’s meal,” pleaded the diminutive Umbaran, his face painted with terror.
“See, you do have jokes--” before Aul could finish his mocking reply, a massive Akul bounded out of the grass towards the Sadowan. Adrenaline flushed from his victory, the human refused to back down. Celsus held both hands aloft, pooled the living energies surrounding them into his palms and released an intense, white flash in the Akul’s face. The beast disorientingly wobbled and whimpered. Its pain was brief, however, as Aul’s blade severed its head, which heavily fell to the ground beside its limp body.
“This carcass will attract others. No weapons, but you can run for it. Clear?” Aul shot at the Umbaran.
“Really?” Adem replied quizzically.
“I won’t kill for the Grandmaster’s pleasure, but the show must go on, right?” Celsus returned.
“Yes, the show must go on.”
The two shared a respectful nod, gathered the surrounding Force, and sprinted off in opposite directions.
Syntax
The comma here is unnecessary and actually hurts your flow.
Another unnecessary comma.
This is a bit awkward due to your use of 'perfect' as a noun. In its noun form, it refers to the "perfect tense" which I don't see applying here.
Should be "Initially".
"Heartrate" should be two words.
"the" doesn't belong in "behind where the his head".
This whole sentence runs on longer than it should. The comma between "forward" and "as" doesn't need to be there either.
Story
This was really well done in setting up the 'story' of the conflict, as well as showing the persona of each character. It shows you've been paying attention to the previous matches as well, demonstrating Adem putting on a show for the cameras. The biggest shortcoming would be that only one actual exchange of combat occurred. You had room to play with in your word count and could have influenced the action a bit more in your writing.