Cold howling rage burned inside of the Kaleesh as he turned on the Arcona Proconsul. His clawed hand moved down to the lightsaber at his side, unclipping the saber and thumbing it on,the emerald blade hissing to life in response. “You’re right, Lord Proconsul. I do have something to prove.”
Charging forward, the rage and bloodlust inside him fueling his movements, each step made with the intent to kill the man in front of him. Even if Uji was his superior, the Proconsul had just attacked him in the heart of the Arconan capital. No one would defend him now, he was on his own. Alone in a mass of steel, stone, and history.
“A nearly useless beast, only capable of being let off his leash long enough to cause some measure of damage to the enemy before he collapses. Yes, Rrogan, you live up to every report.” Those words were ringing inside his head. They had cut deep, right down to his very core. They were true, it was the finality that hit him the hardest, that the Summit regarded him as nothing more than a beast tore open an old wound inside his soul.
One that had taken both his Grandfather and Mother's care to heal. Now it tore again at his very soul, his faith in his family and his friends in Arcona. No, he thought to himself I will not let this Human get into my head. I will defeat him even if it kills me.
The two sabers clashed into one another with a resounding hiss as the plasma of both blades met each other. Taking several steps back, Uji’s face contorted into an expression of surprise and sudden panic as the full strength of the Kaleesh now forced him back further, step by step, the heels of his boots digging into the grass and dirt, causing twin lines to form on the ground as he was pushed back.
Breaking off his attack, Rrogon’s eyes locked once more with the human’s, the rage and fury within him causing his eyes to glow like the stoked coals of a forge. Leaping forward, the two clashed into one another, the strikes of the sabers filling the courtyard, but it was soon clear that the Kaleesh had the upper hand.
Even if he was slower than Uji, His skill and strength far outweighed this disadvantage. Rrogon could feel the Dark Side pulsing through him, that cold and familiar rage that nearly killed him settling into his soul once more as the two combatants locked blades again.
Moving one of his hands off the hilt of his blade, Rrogon thrust it forward, aiming in the direction of the gut of the Seer and vented all of his rage and emotions into the telekinetic strike that flowed out. Uji was sent tumbling back several feet, and even as he recovered, once again the Juggernaut was bearing down on him, his saber raised high in an attempt to sever his lying head from his shoulders.
Uji raised his saber to block the blow, only to have it knocked aside by the sheer force of the Kaleesh’s strike, the emerald blade missing his face by mere centimeters. Rolling with the blow the Human spun around, his white blade in hand as he tried to cleave the Kaleesh in half at the waist.
Rrogon felt the Force respond to his call as the blade came closer. Just before the blade could touch him, he bellowed in pure terrifying rage, his voice amplified to the point that he was sure the tore something in his vocal cords.
The Proconsul reared back in pain as the close proximity to the Kaleesh’s enraged scream left his eardrums ringing, giving Skar just enough time to block the saber before it cleaved him in two. Rrogon finally saw an opening and drove his knee into the stunned Human’s stomach, causing him to double down, only to have his nose meet Rrogon’s fist, causing him to fall back as blood began to flow freely down his face.
As the Seer tried to recover, he felt the weight of the Kaleesh slam down into his wrist that was holding the lightsaber and a familiar hum coming to rest over his face. Opening his eyes, Uji could see the emerald blade of the Sith hovering mere inches from his nose and the panting Kaleesh that held it standing over him.
“You are right Uji. I am a monster, a beast, a savage killer for Arcona. I always have been, I always will be. I'm not worthy of being anything more and you know what? That's fine. Atyiru preaches peace over war, that's fine too. But there must always be someone willing to do the darker work that is needed. The work that is shunned and hidden away from the public sight. That person is me, Uji, and I'll gladly be Arcona’s monster if that means I can keep my family safe!” rasped the Kaleesh his voice strained from earlier
A smile formed on the human features as he heard those words. “That's all I needed to hear, Rrogon.”
Confusion filled the Sith
“What did you just say?” asked Skar
“You passed my test,” Said the human, the tone in his voice betraying some form of sincerity
“I don't understand,” stammered the young Sith
“I don't expect you to. All you need to know that this was a test. All I needed to know is if you were ready, and you have proven just that. So let me up.”
Thumbing the lightsaber off, Rrogon moved back before collapsing to the ground from sheer exhaustion. The last thing the Sith could remember was the Seer speaking to a comlink before coming over to him, a small smile spread across his face. Then everything went blissfully dark.
I think you meant "installed."
Eliminate the space between "short" and the colon. Also, consider rephrasing and ditching the comma.
Job titles such as Consul, Proconsul and Quaestor are generally capitalized in DB writing. In any case, you should be consistent with whether you capitalize it or not.
Repetitive word use here. Try "position vacated by Arcia once she left" or something similar.
The sentence would be clearer if you said "because of his connection" and ditched the comma between Oval and to.
"had all been cleaned"
You missed an opportunity to vary your word usage here as you had used comfort in the sentence prior.
While there is nothing technically wrong with naming one's fighting style it is always better to "show, don't tell." Next time describe the stance. Also there's a typo for lifted.
Story: I just want to highlight that you spent ~660 words setting up the fight and how Skar got there only to have Uji just attack him out of the blue with no explanation. As a reader this was a bit of a letdown to have all that buildup in the post with such an abrupt start to the fight.