Her offer was sincere; after all, she knew that being a Cathar had branded him something else—something undesirable. The few that weren’t in hiding were looked down on as inferior species, meant as slaves until their frail bodies ceased usefulness. She was disheartened that Arron would rather risk damaging a dwindling species further, than giving over something so trivial to his own advancement. Otherwise, it was ironic that he would rather serve to further a cause built on the namesake of someone who founded an empire on the foundations of intolerance towards non-Humans.
A cascade of colours reflected off the Cathar’s mechanical arm, forming bands of different-coloured hues across its skeletal surface. His reflexive counter was well-timed, blocking the green blade of A’lora’s unorthodox lightsaber with feline grace before evading the blunt end. His attack came in the form of a downward sweep that should have severed it in two; but, to his misfortune, she no longer wielded a single blade. Conjoined at the middle, the two ends of her lightsaber came together to re-align a mechanism in what had been the blunt end of a long hilt. Streaming into the arc of his stroke, a cerulean river of plasma ignited to block his incoming blow.
“Here I thought the Jedi had fallen,” Arron’s sable mane stood on end, “instead, it look like the Sith are outmatched in their resourcefulness. Tell me—isn’t trickery a Sith tool?”
Rivulets of sweat rolled over the white markings adorning A’lora’s otherwise lavender skin, dissipating into steam as droplets fell onto the contained jets of plasma or the durasteel beneath her feet. He must have felt it too—the heat of Mustafar’s volatile surface as it collected beneath his dark fur. Matted with moisture, his hairs clung together into hundreds of locks.
“Deceit isn’t exclusive to one side of the Force, Arron.” Her muscles coiled to brace her defense against the weight of his counterattack, “Or has Xen’Mordin managed to blind even his idol’s enemies to fight for his cause? We don’t need to be rivals in this; Odan-Urr can shelter those who cannot fit into Pravus’ new order.”
Her amber gaze matched his, “Just give me the disk, Arron.”
Matched in strength, the combatants found themselves at a standstill. Bearing down on the cerulean blade with the force of his overhead swing, Arron had the advantage of momentum while A’lora had the subtle raw strength of someone accustomed to honing their muscles. Not willing to risk his life in a test of strength, Arron retaliated with a surprise of his own to settle the score.
Extending from their metallic sheathes, five claws of the same material brushed against the skin of her forearm, rending flesh as it tore the skin to her wrist. The blood collected underneath her arm before staining the lava-scorched durasteel crimson. Most of the liquid fell between the gaps of the expanded metal into the tumultuous inferno being harvested for its precious materials.
An agonized scream pierced Arron’s ears, sounding closer to that of a cornered animal than a wounded one. Outmatched against his now-unobstructed offense, she reeled a meter backward. Losing the resistance from her defense, Arron’s blade continued with the pressure he had exerted against hers and severed a railing to his left.
Given a brief moment of respite to recover from the initial shock, A’lora gritted her teeth. Arron sensed that the woman was poised to strike, but winced noticeably when she instead held the wound to the remaining section of railing. Sizzling like raw meat tossed into a fire, the heated metal cauterized her forearm as a lightsaber’s blade would have.
“The information on this doesn’t concern the Jedi, A’lora Kituri. Let me return it, and tend that wound.” Arron offered.
“It concerns us a great deal,” she hissed, more from the burning sensation than outrage, “that disk contains the whereabouts of those like us: outcasts, and unwanted things.”
Those like us.
He realized that she had directed the phrase at him, rather than addressing the Jedi alone. Arron felt a tinge of regret, knowing that the data he held could condemn others to his fate, Cathar among them. Being marked was something he knew all too well; running from the wrong people was no life: it was a sentence. Still, he had to ask himself—was it a trial to test his devotion to Scholae Palatinae?
Mustafarian should be capitalized.
You have an extra period in the ellipses.
"It's" is a contraction for "it is." "Its" is the possessive.
Species names are always capitalized.
I like what you are doing here but you need to be careful when writing Force power usage. One thing to keep in mind for future matches is judges read posts for realism so you need to make it clear which Force powers are being used. As written this could be Illusion, Force Cloak or both. A'lora has +4 in both powers so it's not a ding against you here, but it is something you need to be mindful of in the future.