The blood lay crimson upon his hand. Mune eyed it dubiously. He had to admit, the warrior had caught him off guard to land the blow. He turned baleful eyes on his opponent, a look quickly shifting to amusement. It was delightful, he realized, to meet someone he could exchange blows with and enjoy doing so.
“Beautifully executed,” Mune offered, before he disengaged his saber.
Delak was no fool, having seen just what he could get himself up to, he knew it was not beyond the hybrid to try another form of trickery. He circled, saber at the ready.
Mune circled with him, slowly, step over step. Mune concentrated, he let his body continue to move while he focussed his attention on drawing the Force and bending it to his will. Like threads it ran through his fingers to be woven to what patterns his mind wished. Every step, another second. Every second, another step. They circled, eyes locked. Each piece fell into place. Each manipulation set perfectly into motion, the motion of another step within the slowly moving circle of two duelists looking for their opening.
Mune had his.
A hiss, a strike, Delak barely ducked and rolled in time. The violet saber rent the air in a violent slash. Dust, smoke, the blade struck the ground. The strike had been vicious and from behind, and only at the last moment had something told him in a panic to move. He blinked through wide eyes, the illusion of the circling hybrid gone, and Mune not bothering to conceal his Force signature any longer. Had the vertical strike met home… Delak dared not think what could have happened.
Instead, he acted. He threw himself forward and met his opponent’s saber. Their slashes and cuts came in a flurry of motion. Parries, evasions, counters and blocks. A dance, synchronized to near perfection. Delak moved, he saw it, he lunged.
With a twist, the glancing blow tore naught but clothing. Singing and burning the fabric in its passage. His reflexes were all that saved him. The Force, with a surge, thrust from his palm into Dalek’s side. An explosion of pain. Agony ripped through him and he was sent rolling across the dirt from the sheer force of the strike. His vision was a blur, and he tasted blood. Copper on his tongue. He spat as he rose, wiping a hand across his mouth to smear crimson absently.
He hadn’t honestly expected so much of a challenge from one he had assumed, rusty. But he clearly saw Mune was breathing hard, he was taxing himself. Or was the Savant using the same trick he, himself, had used earlier? He hesitated. Tactically, it was a stupid move… But what if that was the intent? To make him hesitate and leave himself open?
Mune gave his saber a spin, as if to draw the human from his thoughts.
“You seem pensive…”
“And you hesitate,” Delak chided.
“I am in no hurry. Are you short on time?” Mune inquired, canting his head a bit in inquiry.
They stood, meters apart, watchful of the other. Mune’s saber flickered, before finally the blade withdrew and he holstered his weapon, an impish grin playing at the corner of his mouth. The point of a fang showed just barely. His eyes filled with mirth.
Delak did not know what to make of him.
“Are you giving up?”
“Giving up? I thought we were getting to know each other?” He eyed Delak for a moment more, intelligence a fire in ruby red eyes. “I never intended to defeat you, I intended to fight you. I’ve fought you.”
Delak’s saber disengaged, his hand dropping to his side. “You’re serious.”
“You had my respect the instant our blades crossed. I know you now… and I like what I see. Now… let us see if you can put up with me.” He grinned wickedly and turned his back, walking in the direction Delak had come, satisfied with his renewed membership within a clan, and a battle team. He was going to have fun… and drive Delak crazy.
Repetition of "beautiful". Try and use synonyms or vary word choice, especially when the sentences are right next to each other.
Should be a comma instead of a period.
Awkward sentence.
D-d-d-d-uel! (Screw the rules, I have money?)
No reason for crimson to be capitalized here.
Repetitive language with 'once again once again.'
So, this is kind of a crapy thing to do in the first post. Lightsabers are serious weapons, and even grazes or "light wounds" can be hard to fight through. The reason lightsaber fights are so exciting is that if you slip up, you're in trouble. Mune also has +4 Precognition and probably wouldn't have been caught by a really really simple decoy like a TK-thrown skull.
Otherwise, fairly simple and cookie-cutter set up for a fight. Your entire last paragraph could have used some page-breaks/spacing to avoid a wall of text. It will help with your pacing.