A torrent had begun to fall. Massive droplets caressed Kul’s armor and face as they slowly descended before splashing onto the slickening rocks the combatants stood on. He gazed solemnly upwards at the Togruta. His eyes were veiled over with hate, but his mind was lucid.
Yes, Taasii. Show me you are truly worthy to guard my home. Then, and only then, can I accept you.
A crackling bolt of lightning lit up the deep and raging sky with a brief flash, and the two crashed together with the roar of thunder. Saber bashed aside saber in an attempt to create an opening for a final blow. The rain hissed as it fell against the plasma, and Abadeer thought he could see Kul sneering excitedly beneath his hood. The Zabrak appeared to be having no trouble deflecting slice after slice. His Jar’kai allowed him to swiftly adapt to any offensive slashes or thrusts the Togruta could employ. On the other hand, Kul was unable to pierce Abadeer’s defense as the parries prevented him from taking full advantage of an opening. He would have to immediately return to guarding himself. At this rate the battle would become one of endurance; one Kul would prefer to avoid.
It turned out Abadeer was thinking nearly the same thing, because he started switching up his attack patterns, utilizing solid kicks to put Kul off-balance. At their different height levels it would eventually work since the Zabrak was taking blow after blow to his uppers sides and shoulders. With such a disadvantage Kul knew he needed to change the pace. So when Abadeer drove another kick towards his dominant side, Kul sheathed the blade of his saber and tossed the hilt to his left hand. As the kick landed, he absorbed some of the blow by catching the leg in the crook of his arm. The blunt force shook his body and he almost missed catching the hilt again. He managed to cut the saber back on just in time to catch and hold the violet blade that was coming down upon him. With nothing in his way now, he rushed Abadeer. With shoulder lowered, the Zabrak rammed his opponent and drove them both to ground. The pair crashed to the ground hard in a mass of tangled limbs and rolled down the slick, weather-worn steps. At the speed they were traveling, it almost seemed as though they meant to race to the bottom.
They finally came to a stop near the cliff’s edge, and Kul dropped a knee on Abadeer’s chest to prevent him from getting up. Kul took Abadeer's dark red throat in his hands and began to squeeze, his muscles contracting into a vice grip fed with loathing.
“You wear Plagueis’ crest upon your armor, but do you truly stand firm behind it? Renounce your position, or I'll rip out your throat here and now!” The Zabrak yelled to be heard above the roaring thunder and the wind as it shrieked against the rocks.
Renounce my position?
The Togruta struggled to move as Kul forced his weight upon him, but he managed a glance behind Kul’s billowing cloak to see the sheer drop so close by. The sound of crashing waves was distant but just barely discernible in the moment the wind took a breath in preparation of the next gust. The Togruta smiled and focused his attention on his left hand, which lay flat in the muck of the storm. Kul took this smile as a sign of mocking and raised his clawed gauntlet, blades aimed for Abadeer’s throat.
“I warned you, Taasii. Renounce Plaguies, or die.”
Abadeer felt the power coalescing under his hand. A tight and fixed coil of energy ready to be released. He let it grow just a bit longer.
“I will never betray Plagueis.”
“Not even at the risk of death?”
“Never.”
Abadeer thought he noticed a change in Kul’s eyes. They grew lax in their malice and instead hinted at a smile slipping up on the Zabrak. His face remained cold, though, as he began to bring his gauntlet down.
“So be it.”
The gauntlet never landed, however, because as it came down Abadeer slammed his left hand quickly into the ground beside him.
The ground ruptured into bits of wet rock and shredded grass as both Shadow’s were sent flying. The trajectory of the blast rolled Abadeer, but flung Kul from his chest and over the edge of the cliff. Abadeer coughed and took a moment to catch his breath as the shock wore off. Once it did he rose and gazed at the cliff.
“It did not need to come to this, Kul.”
Dejected, he raised a hand to block the rain from pricking at his eyes. As he did a flash of lightning lit up the horizon...and sparkled across the blades that rose from the cliff’s edge. Eyes wide, Abadeer watched as Kul hauled himself up and over the rocks. He grinned maniacally.
“We’re not done yet, Taasii!”
no comma needed between stairs and where.
Amazing imagery. I love this.
Run-on sentence.
Some streams got crossed here with tense/word choice and sentence structure. Not sure what you were going for.
dropping* in this case
This should be two sentences, and doesn't work in its current state.
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Excellent intro post setting the stage for the match.