Zakath was thrown entirely onto the defensive as Rrogon cast aside the last shackles holding back his rage. Biting off a snarl, he allowed the Force to flow through him and direct his lightsaber. Each powerful blow that the Kaleesh warrior made was met by the Barabel’s scarlet blade, seemingly arriving just before he could cut his Grandfather down. Rrogon’s enraged strength however was forcing Zakath back, step by step as they fought across the tile floor, their blades blurring together.
Zakath could feel his strength beginning to fail under the Kaleesh’s angry onslaught, but still he trusted in the Force, knowing that the Warrior could not keep it up for much longer. His breathing quickened as he felt himself approaching one of the tall curving grey stone walls of the massive throne room. He had controlled the retreat to this point, but now Rrogon was about to strike a major blow.
This was going to hurt.
As soon as he felt his back hit the wall, the Barabel dove sideways just as Rrogon brought his lightsaber crashing down. But- he was just a hair of a second too slow. The roar of pain that erupted out of Zakath was thunderous as the Kaleesh’s lightsaber cleaved through his thick tail. As he crashed onto the floor, his entire backside seemed as if it were on fire, his talons scratching thin gouges into the tiles as he crawled away, his lightsaber rolling away ahead of him. Behind him, Rrogon had momentarily frozen up, staring down at the severed tail that laid on the floor, hot black blood oozing out of the smoking cut.
Zakath’s pointed teeth gritted together as he clamped down on the pain, shutting it away as he slowly rose back to his feet, retrieving his lightsaber in the process. His eyes was glowing fiercely now as he stared venomously at his Grandson, his scarlet blade re-igniting. He could feel the rage bleeding out of the Kaleesh now as Rrogon tore his gaze away from the tail and whirled around to face his Grandfather.
Now it was his turn.
“Tell me, Rrogon,” Zakath hissed out, his voice dangerously low as he raised his lightsaber, both hands on the long curved hilt as he slowly approached the Kaleesh. “What drives your power?”
“...what?” Rrogon’s voice carried notes of exhaustion and confusion in its tone as he cautiously raised his lightsaber, its yellow blade casting a sickly glow on the Kaleesh’s scaly skin.
“Rage drives my power,” Zakath continued on in his low hissing tone as his eyes began to flare up. “When someone cuts off my tail, for example.”
The Barabel let out a deafening roar and threw himself forward, his scarlet blade blurring forward to smash into Rrogon’s blade and sending the Warrior stumbling backward. Without giving him a second’s pause, Zakath pressed the attack, his strength growing with each staggering blow as the Dark Side flowed through him, his fury feeding it. Zakath’s crimson blade recoiled and smashed into Skar’s lightsaber blade again and again, each crushing blow stronger than the last as the Kaleesh frantically backpedaled under his furious hammering attacks
Rrogon was defending himself well under Zakath’s onslaught, but he was tired, and his earlier drawing of his rage had to have impacted his weakened heart. Having been privy to Rrogon’s previous moments of weakness, this was a factor that Zakath was now intending to exploit.
The enraged blows continued to land, but with each second that passed, Rrogon’s blocks and parries became increasing slower. One last crushing blow, and the Warrior was just a hair too slow. Zakath’s burning scarlet blade sliced through Rrogon’s fingers and through of half of his hand. The yellow blade vanished as it fell from suddenly nerveless fingers, the hilt clattering onto the tiled floor as the Kaleesh fell to his knees, suppressing a groan as he pressed the stump of his hand against his chest.
Zakath was breathing hard now and a pounding headache was beginning to settle inside his skull. Growling, he set his booted foot onto Rrogon’s chest and shoved him onto his back, his lightsaber blade receding as he thumbed it off. Zakath sent another kick from his booted foot, smashing it into the fallen Warrior’s ribs. Skar let out a sharp cry as his ribs cracked from the impact.
“What are you waiting for?” Rrogon groaned out, his teeth grinding as he glared up at his Grandfather. “Finish it.”
Zakath dropped to one knee and studied his Grandson’s face for a long moment, his breathing slowly returning to normal, even as his headache began to intensify. Suddenly he seized Rrogon’s throat and squeezed, hard enough to almost cut off the air supply. The Kaleesh made some gurgling choking noises as he tried to pry off Zakath’s hand with his sole remaining one.
“You listen to me now and you listen good,” Zakath hissed out, his eyes strangely fading away to their normal jade green color, with black reptilian pupils staring down at Skar’s crimson eyes. “You made me proud once, when you were doing things for the right reasons. But you lost my pride the instant you started losing control over your temper for the stupidest of reasons.”
Zakath’s grip loosened just a hair, enough for Skar to breathe slightly easier but not enough to talk.
“But you are family, and I am not without a heart,” He continued on, his eyes unblinking. “You will remain here at the Citadel, and you will learn everything that Atyiru has to teach you. You will master your temper. And if you lose it again, it had better be for a damn good reason. Because if I have to come back here, Rrogon…”
Zakath’s eyelids closed for what felt like a long moment, but was in reality only a few seconds. And then they opened again and this time… they glowed like hot purple coals.
“...it will be for the last time,” Zakath finished, his grip tightening again. “Is that understood?”
The Kaleesh frantically nodded and the Barabel released his crushing grip, rising to his feet and beginning to stumble toward the throne room doors, his muscles trembling with exhaustion and the barely repressed pain that he was still holding at bay. Before he could reach them however, the doors flung open and several people rushed in, followed swiftly by a woman clad in loose fitting robes, her eyes hidden behind a colorful cloth blindfold.
“Skar first,” Atyiru Caesura Entar commanded to the men that had entered ahead of her before she turned her attention to Zakath, quickly looking him over.”Tail’s severed, but it looks like it will grow back… otherwise just general exhaustion… how’s your head?”
“I will live,” Zakath growled softly before suddenly wincing as a sharp pain erupted behind one of his eyeballs. “Barely,”
“Uhuh. Now do you want to explain why you felt the need to beat up Skarbie?” Atyiru’s voice took on a disapproving tone. “He was confined here already and was under my supervision. There was no need for-”
“No!” Zakath snarled as he suddenly jabbed a sharp talon into her chest. Impressively, Atyiru didn’t backpedal from the impact. “No! You would have lectured him, like all the others! Skar has been lectured to about his temper time and again! By you as well, repeatedly! No, he needed to be broken!”
“Broken?” Atyiru’s voice maintained its disapproving tone. “And what exactly is beating him up supposed to accomplish?”
“An ordinary beating would accomplish nothing. It is the fact that I beat him down that matters. What is it that you healers are so fond of quoting?” Zakath cocked his head before continuing on, his voice taking on a mocking tone. “Ah, ‘A twisted bone must be broken and reset before it can properly heal.’ I believe is the proverb you medics are so fond of. Rrogon’s spirit was twisted. Now it is broken. Now the healing under you can commence.”
Zakath turned his gaze toward Rrogon, who was being helped onto a repulsorsled and being stabilized for transportation to the medical center.
“I broke him so he can heal,” Zakath repeated. “He will listen to you now. If he cannot comprehend your lessons, then dispatch him to the blasted Jedi, if need be. But he will master his temper, or it will kill him. One way or another.”
“Zakath, I-”
Zakath waved off her words with an irritable hand.
“I’m going to my quarters to… clean up. Keep me appraised of his status.”
Atyiru remained silent as she watched the Barabel limp off before turning her attention to the now bed-bound Kaleesh, floating on his replusorsled and now unconscious, one of the medics having retrieved his sliced off fingers for possible reattachment surgery. She pinched her nose and sighed.
“You Agronas…”
You need a colon instead of a period between "see" and "a"
Excellent job incorporating external events in this paragraph to give the fight context and more emotional weight.
Someone call the burn unit. Seriously, outstanding dialogue.
Great description of Precognition.