Solas slowly rose to his feet shaking the remnants of the lightning attack. He had only begun to look around when he was encompassed by pitch black darkness. Smiling at his apprentice’s favorite technique he was caught completely off guard when a thunderous explosion went off to his left and sent him tumbling to the ground.
As he heard the grenade go off, Blackhawk took off running through the streets. He knew that the blast wouldn’t be enough to take his master down, he needed to figure out a way to end this quickly. If he met his master on an even battlefield he was dead. He needed to catch the Sith off guard and end it with a fatal blow. The clawdite was so lost in his thoughts that he nearly ran headlong into an armed blockade that had been set up at the exit of the sector. Ducking inside a nearby building he observed the blockade. It was clearly set up by the local security, then he saw it. The distinct grey hood and armor of a Syndicate operator. ‘So he used the locals to seal the sector. Blast it, he really is determined to kill me. But why?’ Blackhawk knew that his master was less than pleased with the clawdite’s refusal to join the dark side. But despite everything, the epicanthix had never made a real attempt on his life. ’Come to think of it, he has yet to try for a killing blow. He’s had several opportunities, why hasn’t he made his move? I need to figure out if he’s really done with me, or if this is just another one of his tests.’ Knowing what he needed to do, Blackhawk moved to the roof of the building and drew his blasters and leveled them at the blockade.
Solas stood up and brushed the dust from his robes. ’Tch! He’s gotten better. But I think it’s time to turn it up a notch.’ As the Sith was brushing himself off his comm beeped.
“Master, we’ve received word that someone has engaged the blockade east of your position. Your orders?”
“Don’t get involved. I’ll take care of him.”
“Understood Master.” With that the comm clicked off. Solas rolled his shoulders before breaking into a light run through the streets to the east. Making good time as most of the people in the sector had retreated into the nearby buildings. Arriving a block away from the blockade he watched as blaster fire rained from the roof a building on the left side of the street. As he watched a hooded figure approached from behind him.
“Hello Supreme Commander.”
“Hello operative. What’s the situation?”
“The guards at the blockade are pinned down, but…”
“What is it?”
“They haven’t lost a single man. The worst damage any have taken is a shot in the arm or leg.”
“He’s trying to draw me out while not letting them overtake him. Very well, pull our forces out. Things are about to get messy.”
“Yes Sir!” With a sharp salute the figure disappeared into the shadows. Solas smiled and strode down the street.
Syntax:
There's one issue that pops out immediately: formatting. All three of your posts are formatted as snippets of code, and they shouldn't be. Not only is it a bit of an eye-sore, but your words will get butchered when they're at the end of a line. For example, on my display, I see:
This can happen if you write your post in Word and then past it into the ACC box without previewing. One easy workaround is to paste from Word to Notepad and then put it into the site, but you should always use the preview button to make sure the site isn't doing anything screwy.
Another easy thing to fix is that you should have a blank line between paragraphs. In this match the posts were fairly short, but you want to do whatever you can to make your text easy to read for your opponent, the judge, and any other people reading it.
If your sentence keeps going past the end of the quote, the last period will turn into a comma.
Story:
This was a little sparse. You can get away with shorter posts in a 3x3 match than the usual 2x2, since you have more posts to tell the story, but don't be afraid to paint a picture. We know Blackhawk was summoned here, but we don't have any details. How do all the bystanders react to someone running out of a bar and shooting off Force Lightning?
Realism:
No errors. Watch out with using "stream" to describe Force Lightning, since you can only do short blasts unless you have the Stream It Feat.
Continuity:
No errors.