“Don’t worry, he will get them,” Mune replied softly, his hand relaxed on the familiar grip of his lightsaber.
Any mirth he may have felt had made an expedient retreat. He made mental note, however, to tease the squid further about his purse once their mission had been completed. He stared across the open space, eyes studious of the three men threatening them. Did they necessarily know to whom they issued threats? Mune could only assume, based on pure observation; that they would have issued the threats to just about anyone they could make a few credits off of.
“Come on, I am only so patient. The belts, credits, purse and weapons. Now!”
A steady hand, Mune noted.
“I am sure we can talk about this, no need to act as common brigands. Squid’s purse will definitely not go with your attire anyway, I assure you.” Mune spoke, his eyes all for the Gand. He was the leader, the hybrid decided. Quite likely, even the gentleman they sought. Though, he mentally checked himself, gentleman was not a term likely pinned on this guy. Though… he admitted to himself he could not note any robotic arms. Discarding the idea that this was Jim, he re-evaluated their current position.
There was a sharp intake of air through his breathing mask, the Gand’s next works angrier than the y had been. “I will shoot, and I don’t miss!”
“I know you are new and all… or returning and all… or something… Could you just maybe stop spurring him on?” Lexiconus hissed in his own growing irritation. He shot the hybrid a glare, though realized quickly that his companion was up to something. Mune’s eyes were focussed, bright with intention. The Quarren shifted his gaze back to the thugs, and he could see the two Rodians becoming unsteady. He watched the unease between them then a nervous exchange of words in Rodese.
The Savant kept focussed, manipulating the illusion, ignoring a bead of swept that ran down the side of his face. Then a cry echoed off the chasm walls. One of the Rodians had shot the other. Jim, to Mune’s surprise, did not flinch. Rather, he fired. Only by mere milliseconds was Mune ahead of Lex. His arm slammed into his companion’s chest and pinned him against the wall as the rifle bolt whizzed by harmlessly to hit a wall somewhere beyond them.
The stairs creaked, and whined under their feet. The yawning abyss below, a frightening reminder of just where they would wind up with the slightest misstep. There was near no time to think, however, when the remaining Rodian and their target both started to openly fire upon them.
Lex’ saber hissed to life in a wicked cascade of violent red light. Mune ducked, his own saber a brilliant wash of purple. With trained precision, both deflected the onslaught before throwing themselves forward. Over the heads of the two thugs and landing with a metallic clang on the aged gratings behind them. The catwalk groaned ominously. Frankly, Lex could not believe it was holding at all. He kept picturing being flung off into the gaping chasm to his death. Swallowed up by the void.
“Stop daydreaming,” Mune warned.
Lex’ saber came up in a vicious arc. The remaining Rodian’s arm came away to be taken by the chasm along with the shrieks of the alien. Mune’s saber finished him with a quick stab through the chest, abruptly, silent. The Gand had already backed up and his rifle was up taking aim.
Mune struck outwards. The Force crashed into the Gand, his rifle ripped from his fingers. Both equites could well hear some claws break with disturbing wet cracks. Lex struck the point home. His saber rent the air and so with it, the Gand’s body. Their would be mugger fell from the stairs and into the darkness below… engulfed.
A yelp brought Lex’ attention back around. The Savant had caught a saber struck aimed to his head with his own, though pressed perilously close to being thrown over the railing of the catwalk. The whirr of machinery, cybernetics working at overpowering with brute force. Jim Petcher. The metal groaned and whined before finally, with a metallic ping the railing loosened further, bowing outwards. Lex could only surmise that the thug had used the moment Mune had thrown the Gand off balance, to attack the distracted Savant from behind. It was likely only the Force and Mune’s reflexes that had kept the hybrid from being taken out on the spot.
The current situation could not be described as any better; Lex thought wryly.
“The… ignorant should not play with toys they… do not understand.” Mune warned with an edge of a vicious growl.
Syntax
Missing article here, into the gaping maw
When using pronouns in a long string of sentences, make sure that they agree with the initial subject. Here, "it" should be "they", to make it agree with "the vibrations", which is plural: Only the vibrations of the chasm... they called to the Quarren. They flowed through... but they refused to give in.
A comma after "shiver" would have completed the pacing of the sentence, They flowed through his body, shaking his legs and giving him a cold shiver, but they refused to give in.
You use "the Clan" in the next sentence. Make sure you capitalise words consistently. In this case, since it refers to a specific clan, it should be "the Clan".
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"Surround" is associated with something that encircles or is positioned uniformly around an object, rather than being directly on it. Otherwise, a good physical representation of Lexiconus' distress.
This post does a nice job of setting up the nature of the mission, the mood of the two characters and the environment. The fighting does not start, but you introduce action and danger with the rickety staircase. You also present a basic description of the NPC opponent, which is always a good idea when the NPC does not have a Character Sheet of their own.