Riku leapt to his feet, whipping his Synergy blaster out of its holster. He fired two shots at Andrelious, who was in the process of switching back to his lightsaber. The crimson blade snapped into existence just in time to allow the Sith to deflect the blaster bolts away.
Cursing under his breath, the Nihilgenia continued to fire his blaster, each shot aimed at a different part of his target. Andrelious swung his lightsaber around, blocking everything, but the intensity of his enemy’s firepower was enough to prevent him from moving any closer.
“Come on, Amahara! I can’t imagine that a simple stalemate is good enough for you! Try something else!” Mimosa-Inahj yelled.
Riku did his best to ignore the Sith. He kept the barrage of blaster fire going, whilst stepping backwards to further increase the distance between himself and Andrelious.
Spinning on his heels, Riku, confident that he’d created enough of a gap, sprinted away into a nearby tunnel. He kept his eyes on the floor in front of him as he ran, occasionally glancing back to see where Andrelious was.
Rounding a corner, the clone realised he’d run into what appeared to be a dead end. In front of him was a large blast door. It looked a little newer than the rest of his surroundings, but Riku’s attention was drawn to another object. In one corner of the room was a neatly folded cloth, sporting the Herald’s logo.
Andrelious entered the area to be presented with Riku examining the banner.
“So that is what the Herald wanted us to find. How unfortunate for you that she placed it here. Shall I even bother to give you the chance to surrender the banner without a fight?” the Warlord questioned.
“You’re better off sparing me from that cliché,” Riku replied coolly. Before Andrelious could say any more, he started firing his blaster again, hoping to overwhelm the Sith’s defences.
As he batted away the seemingly constant stream of plasma, Mimosa-Inahj focused on his opponent’s blaster. With one flick of his wrist, the Warlord commanded the Force to tug at Riku’s weapon. The soldier felt the blaster slip in his hand slightly, and tightened his grasp, stopping firing to readjust himself.
Andrelious seized the window of opportunity. He extended his arms forward, discarding his lightsaber, and hit the Sadowan with a burst of lightning, aiming it as best he could at the clone’s head.
“You let your guard down. Typical clone!” Andrelious roared.
Riku was knocked back by the sheer power of the attack. He kept hold of his blaster, waiting for the right moment. As he glanced at the Sith, however, he realised that something was terribly wrong. Andrelious’ lightning had shorted out his cybernetic eye, which flickered on and off, affecting the soldier’s vision.
“Your reliance on technology is your downfall, clone. That and your failure to understand the power of the Force!” Mimosa-Inahj taunted, nearing the taller Human.
“I understand how powerless you are without it. That’s enough,” Riku spat.
“Powerless? Shall we see about that?” Andrelious responded, activating his second, black hilted lightsaber.
Aiming with his good eye, the Sadowan fired his blaster one last time, more out of defiance than anything else.
“I will not give you the satisfaction of my surrender, Sith!” Amahara hissed.
“And I am not going to give you the satisfaction of killing you!” the Warlord shouted.
Moving into Riku’s face, Mimosa-Inahj jabbed the tip of his lightsaber’s blade into the clone’s natural eye, just deep enough to destroy the optic nerve.
“Now it is not just the power of the Force that you are blind to,” Andrelious quipped, turning to retrieve the banner.
As he bent down to pick the cloth up, Andrelious felt his back get pierced by a small, metal object. He looked behind himself, spotting the blinded Riku retracting his hidden blade.
“It’s not just the Sith who can stab people in the back,” the Sadowan declared.
The blast door began to slide open. On the other side was a smirking Morgan Sorenn, along with a dozen Iron Legion troops.
“I think we’ll stop you two there. Before someone gets really hurt,” the Herald chuckled.
Syntax
You use italics to signify thoughts in the rest of this post yet do not here. Either is technically correct but you need to be consistent in your use of formatting.
You need a comma after up.
Story
"Show, don't tell" is a big thing we preach at the ACC but I think you took it a little too far here. You have a short word cap in this event and it took you 295 words out of your 750 to get to this point. You could have shown the reader this level of the ship was a labyrinth in less time. Your imagery was wonderful and helped you, I was just left wondering when the plot was going to start.
Related to the slow start is the fact there was no real conflict between the characters. This would have been an outstanding run-on post but the ACC rubric requires conflict between the characters: "That said, if a post contains no actual combat or engagement between the two fighters, this will be considers a detractor to Story scoring.