Hanging from ropes anchored to the catwalks, it was like watching spider hatchlings leave the comforts of the nest for the first time - unaware of the dangers below.
The Nautolan gave them no time, charging towards the first to descend - who was vulnerable even though he was at least three metres from the floor. From an outstretched hand Radula was cast towards the rope that hung the man; cleaving it and dropping the fool hard. The sound of meat hitting the hangar cut the scream short, at best he would be paralyzed. Yet, Raiju’s attack didn’t end there.
Radula soared back into its owner’s hand, while Mist was deactivated and clipped back upon Raiju’s belt. With his free hand outstretched; the Nautolan was hurled off the ground, as if he had hit a spring in it’s floor. With the rope free from the deplorable, Raiju took ownership and swung. Carried by the momentum of his leap, Raiju circled the hangar towards the other hanging ropes; clipping each within reach and casting their owners down.
One after another, bodies rained upon the metallic floor with an uncomfortable sounding as its material flexed under the weight of each deplorable. It wasn’t long before those above had taken the hint, and remained nested above the threat below - all of which now chanted for the combatants to be spaced. Below the Nautolan, it seemed the girl had done well to intercept any deplorable who had been out of his reach as several bodies still smoked from the burns of the girl’s electro-staff.
When the Nautolan came to rest his feet upon the hangar floor once more, each combatant eyed the control room nervously. They only had one chance.
“Hurry!” Raiju bellowed, pointing towards a piece of rope that had been cut from the catwalks. “Toss me that!”
While the woman was quick to gather up the cord, Raiju casted something from his free hand towards the control room. Whatever it was soared through the viewport of the control room and struck the Operator hard, throwing the man back from the control panel and knocking him from sight.
“Here!” Zujenia snapped, passing the Nautolan the bundle of rope. When Raiju snatched the gift from her hands, threw it under his shoulder, and then proceeded to launch himself on top of the control room; the girl continued with a tone of both confusion and fear in her voice. “What are you planning on doing with that?!”
“I don’t know!” Raiju shouted back with a shrug. Suddenly, both of his lightsabers were activated and burning into the roof of the control room. The spin was quick, but before the Nautolan dropped into the control panel he finally continued. “On the holo, they always seem to need it!”
The disc cut from the ceiling hammered straight to the floor, surprising the Nautolan. The room wasn’t large, and he figured he had knocked the Operator onto what little floor space there had been. Yet, a whimpering seemed to be coming from beneath a section of the panel. Curious, the Raiju bent to look at the source.
“You’ve done it now.” The Operator was quick to spit out when their eyes met. “We all are going to feel her wrath now.”
“You’re mistaken.” Raiju dismissed the warning, while he wrapped his waist with the rope and tied it off around the panel. Peering out through the viewport, Raiju could see the bewilderment in the half-breed's facen. “She’s still getting spaced, I just want the pleasure.”
Without hesitation, the Nautolan slapped the control panel. Immediately, the bodies that lined the hanger were swept from floor and plunged into the depths that had been behind the energy field. Zujenia was just as easily cast out to the starry background - and Raiju couldn’t help but feel her thoughts of betrayal and fear before she disappeared from view.
Struggling to reach the control panel due to the howling pull from the hole Raiju made, when he finally reach the button again and activated the field he was surprised to see the Operator had managed to hang on from his spot beneath the panel.
“See?” Raiju asked with a wide smile, “What can she do to us now?”
“Not her, you idiot.” The Operator was quick to snap, and the smile fell from Raiju’s face. When the man continued, the Nautolan felt a deep disturbance in his chest.
“Morgan.”
Syntax
I think you meant "dripped."
Girls should be girl's to indicate the possessive
Story
I laughed audibly at that line. You did an excellent job of introducing the in-character conflict in a very organic way by having Raiju insulting Zuj's heritage. The conflict was mostly fed to you through the prompt but I like how you stepped things up a notch by using your opponent's aspect in a natural way.
Overall a very strong opening post. You described the venue and made it feel alive, introduced the conflict and started the action in the limited space of 750 words you were allotted.