Atra's reaction to the thermal imploder was as swift as the device was deadly. He reached out with his right hand, still grasping his saber's hilt but partially open with two fingers extended. His power lashed out like a lasso and raised the cylinder into the air to hover for a half second before it rocketed back towards the surprised Kaleesh — warnings of danger surging through the Force in Skar's mind. Clearly it hadn't been the most enlightened of plans for Skar to enact and Atra found himself wondering for a moment whether it had even been thought through.
The blinking red light on the canister ceased just as the tell-tale sound of the device triggered. It was hard to describe as anything other than a rippling suction, coming inward before bursting outward with blinding light and lethal fury. Skar took the brunt of it, his body tossed through the air as it was jettisoned from the source of the destruction, the force somewhat subdued due to his initial attempt to put space between him and his own ordinance.
On the other hand, Atra had hardly been in the most protected of positions. The Umbaran raised his arms defensively while deactivating his saber, mostly to protect from any shrapnel as the bits of stone in the dirt turned to fragmented shards that cut remorselessly through his exposed flesh and the fabric of his clothing. Atra couldn't keep from gasping in pain from his dislocated knee and the newfound streaks of blood seeping from the razor thin gashes. Still, this — at least — he could handle.
The Combat Master threw his mind into the depths of the Force contained within him. He felt a jolt as he sank beneath the frigid surface, the caress of the Dark Side, but he pushed further. Atra closed his eyes and focused on silencing his nerves. The pangs that had ceaselessly pulsed from his knee faded into the background, allowing him to reach down and lock his leg into place while his other hand came in from the side. The Combat Master grunted with effort as he forced the joint back into its socket. The pain was exquisite as he dropped his internal control, allowing the fire scorching through his nervous system to register at last.
Pain was good. Pain meant you were still alive.
Atra wasn't the only combatant recovering though. Skar let out a howl of pain while spasming on the ground. Twirling strands of smoke raised from his semi-scorched body, the fabric on his left side burnt and mangled along with his scaled flesh. Each movement tugged on what fabric remained and brought new pangs as it pulled on the wounds. His bone mask was cracked from the initial shock wave, causing Skar to let it fall to the ground and exposing his reptilian features. He used the pain, the anger, and willed the cells of his body to accelerate their healing. Not enough to nullify his wounds but enough to make him able to function without complete distraction.
In the end, the Combat Master was the first back to his feet. His stance was uneasy as he was wary to put weight on his knee, not quite ready to test its resilience. His grey-gold eyes scanned the clearing with a focus on two very different things. First, there was the gnawing suspicion that if Skar was willing to use one explosive then he'd be willing to use more. He hoped he might catch sight of even a hint of more. Second, they weren't exactly being quiet. After night had fallen... on Shili. The last thing they needed was a visit from an Akul.
And yet, it seemed, that was exactly what they were in for.
In the quiet of the night, beyond Skar's rumbling, the Combat Master heard the faintest of roars in the distance. A hunting cry. That was definitely something to be filed away under useful information. "Are you really so stupid?" Atra began as he reached up to pull down his hood. The Umbaran flared his nostrils for a moment, irritated by a droplet of crimson blood that hung from the tip before wiping it away. "You say it matters not if you kill him, only that you will see justice by finding and killing him? Do you even hear yourself?"
Skar growled again, rising to his clawed feet and affixing the other man with his predatory glare. "You mock my purpose?!"
"No, just your intelligence." Atra's lightsaber crackled to life once more, the surging cerulean blade pointed directly at the Kaleesh.
Skar quickly took stock of his location, trying to triangulate where he stood with the mines he had buried earlier. The act didn't go unnoticed by the Combat Master but he suspected it was a similar interest in ensuring no predators were about to surface. Skar's eyes narrowed, putting faith in the markers he had left to remind himself, and advanced on the Umbaran once more. His sapphire blade added to the glow from the nearby fire once more and he was upon Atra in short order.
The Combat Master's dark hair clung in clumps to his forehead, perspiration causing it to stick alongside patches of dirt, but his endurance was far from spent just yet. He paced himself carefully, as he always did in combat, and pivoted away from the oncoming swings of Skar's aggressive attacks. He had recognized the familiar stances and strikes almost immediately upon their initial encounter. It seemed they both favored the tenants of Djem So, however it appeared that the Kaleesh was far more of a traditionalist when it came to its application. There was nothing wrong with that, but it made his moves even more predictable in Atra's perception.
Unfortunately, the Umbaran still had to favor his right leg and that made him predictable as well. He could risk putting the entirety of his weight and momentum on the previously injured knee of his left leg, but only as a last resort. Skar growled and interrupted Atra's thoughts, bringing in a powerful overhead slash which required the Combat Master to hop back, bouncing on his right foot. The Kaleesh pressed the momentary advantage, carrying his momentum into an advancing spin and horizontal slash. On his current path, Atra wasn't in a stance to meet the attack, let alone avoid it. He needed to shift quickly and kicked off the ground with his left leg to do so.
As the Combat Master had expected, pain shot up from the weakened joint and set his nerves on fire. He grimaced but still managed to just avoid the streaking blade of his opponent, stumbling slightly as he shifted his weight back onto his right leg. Again, Atra found himself having to fight smarter in order to gain the advantage. Biting his lower lip, using the pain to counteract that from his knee, the Umbaran dropped into a crouch with his weight evenly distributed. He willed the Force into the coiled muscles of his legs and pushed them beyond their limitations.
Suddenly, there was a considerable distance between Atra and Skar as he arced through the air, disengaged his weapon, and landed across the clearing from the Kaleesh. The landing was far from graceful and thankfully mine free, not that he knew for sure there were any. Undeterred from what would be surely a sore and bruised tailbone in the near future, Atra continued with his plan as the Force quickly coalesced in his palm and he thrust outward. The attack, however, was not meant for Skar. The nearby fire all but exploded as the invisible force concussed against it. The small sticks and remaining logs scattered across the clearing to either be snuffed out amongst the dirt or to quietly fade into bright, angry embers and miniscule flicks of flame.
Atra allowed himself a smirk as he turned and rushed from the clearing into the Turu-grass, pushing through the ache of his joint that seemed to be easing over time. Skar's slit pupils dilated as he growled and gave chase to the Combat Master. "Coward," he bellowed. The Kaleesh couldn't rely on the pale light of the night sky like he could the fire, but his species was one of hunters. The sensory organs just under his eyes allowed him to find his prey, tracking the thermal energy radiating off the Umbaran.
While the initial distance between them was wide enough to give Atra a fair lead, it was clear the Kaleesh was faster with that distance shrinking alongside each bounding stride. This time it was Skar's turn to doubt the intelligence of his opponent. How could the Combat Master hope to escape a natural predatory species — such as the Kaleesh — in the dark?
Then Atra's heat signature faded away into the night's chill air.
The Turu-grass, tall enough to hide predators and prey alike, also gave no hint of the Umbaran's whereabouts. Once more relying on his training, Atra had turned his command of the Force inward and regulated his body heat to match his surroundings. It was a clever move, and not exactly one based on his opponent. Men and beasts both hunted the night, after all.
Skar snarled and waved his saber back and forth along his path. The blade-tip carve through the grass without effort, lopping off large groupings at a time. "No honor and no pride, just like Marick," Agrona managed as his gaze flit about. "Nothing will stop me! Not the Inquisitors, not you, and certainly not that traitor to Arcona!" The Kaleesh's nostrils flared as he took in a shuddering breath, turning in a circle as he searched for his target. "I will have vengeance," he added with a more level tone.
Not far off, Atra remained prone and carefully controlled. His focus had to remain on keeping his breathing even and his body temperature down. It wasn't an entirely pleasant experience but a necessary one. It was becoming increasingly clear that only one of the fighters was as aware as they needed to be of their surroundings. Word to the wise when in the kingdom of an apex predator and you're not that predator: do try and keep quiet.
The Turu-grass shifted nearby, almost causing Atra to jump in surprise. Instead, he became even more still as he held his breath. With his Umbaran eyes he could see easily enough and what he saw was a large mass of muscle, fangs, and claws. Yeah, the Combat Master had no interest in pulling the pin on that grenade. Others could manage it just fine on their own. Which was exactly what the Kaleesh was about to do.
To his credit, Skar was doing a fair job of keeping his head on a swivel. His focus was ever-shifting in his hunt for Atra. When he started picking up a thermal presence once more, standing out amongst the grass, he was certain he had finally happened upon the Combat Master. Agrona readied himself to charge but had to pause instead, planting his clawed feet wide and deep into the dirt as the newly discovered form leapt towards him. It was suddenly large, no longer crouched in an effort to hide itself, and most definitely not Atra.
The Akul was on Skar with a hungry roar. It forced the warrior back, but managed to catch a patch of fabric in its powerful jaws. The Kaleesh heard the tearing but paid it no mind, repositioning himself as he glanced back to see the Akul whipping its head side to side — its killing tactic — only to suddenly realize it wasn't its prey it had caught. The blue cloth still hung from its fangs as the beast went for its prey again.
Skar was ready for the attack this time. He held his lightsaber extended out in front of him and he stepped into the creature's leap while thrusting. The blade seared through flesh and bone without effort, piercing through the open jaw of the Akul before angling into a side swipe as Skar stepped out of the beast's path. The Kaleesh's chest heaved, his nostrils filling with the smell of singed fur and flesh, but he didn't have time to feel either pride in his kill or fatigue from the battle. He still had to find the Combat Master.
That's when the Force blared like a klaxon within his thoughts, but he wasn't in a position to react as he had before. He felt sharp fangs digging into his right shoulder and side before he crashed face first into the dirt and grass. The Akul pressed its weight in upon him, priming to to take a sizeable chunk out of Skar. A sudden snap-hiss gave both parties pause for the single heartbeat before a crackling blade carved through the beast's head... and Skar's arm.
The pain could only be described as exquisite. It was a burning cold coupled with the sudden sense of loss. His entire arm hurt, though at some level he knew there was no arm left to be hurting. It sent a shock through his system that fought to send him into the embrace of unconsciousness. As Agrona bellowed, writhing on the ground, Atra's gaze shifted around him once more. He was almost panting as his jaw worked open and closed, his muscles burning and a migraine pounding at his brain. The Combat Master was both physically and mentally exhausted. Still, he used what effort he could to sink his awareness into the Force once more.
His senses weren't quite what they were. He could feel the flow of the Living Force like ghostly strands slipping through his fleeting grasp, and yet he could still get somewhat of a feel of things. He let out a long breath, reasonably sure there was nothing else nearby. His grey-gold eyes shifted to the Kaleesh, a look of profound disappointment on his features. "You'd think..." he began before taking a shuddering breath of air. "You'd have learned to be... quiet."
Atra allowed himself to drop onto one knee, bringing all of his weight into a punch that connected hard with Skar's jaw. The sudden jolt, coupled with the pain of his severed limb, finally proved too much for the warrior and he was out like a light. The Umbaran put his weight onto the Kaleesh's prone form, half-turned to see the man's arm lying to the side while dark strands of blood seeped from the bite in his shoulder. Atra's chest rose and fell with another heavy sigh. He raised his left arm up, opening and closing his hand. The Umbaran could almost hear the servos and gears working beneath the synthflesh of his cybernetic arm.
Just like you used to be, he told himself again as he turned his gaze back towards Skar. Atra toggled his wristlink and waited to hear Adalinde's acknowledgement before speaking. "Gonna need a pick up at the rendezvous coordinates," he managed before groaning and leaning his head back.
Atra rubbed the bridge of his nose, a strip of cloth having been placed over the cut Skar had given him, while staring at the medical equipment. Skar had been heavily sedated the moment he had been brought on board. It was a two-fold measure designed to keep him both subdued and stable until he could be brought to a proper medical facility.
"I don't see why 'e is alive," Adalinde muttered from beside the Combat Master.
"It wasn't necessary to do otherwise," he replied. The Umbaran turned away from the medical bed and found a nearby chair to offer his knee some respite. He was a large man, after all, and he had done his body no favors on Shili.
The female Inquisitor turned with a scowl, her red hair falling even more heavily over her face in the process. "'e is an enemy," Adalinde intoned.
"He is a tool," Atra countered before pressing his head back against the durasteel wall of the shuttle. Closing his eyes the Combat Master chose his next words carefully, still tired and in need of rest. "Frankly, he's more a threat to his allies than the Brotherhood right now."
"So you return 'im to ze enemy?"
"I return him to Atyiru," Atra clarified. "Then see what comes of it."
Still quite visibly displeased with the scenario, Adalinde offered up an exasperated sigh before acquiescing. "Sometimes I wonder just what side you are on," she pondered aloud.
Atra's lips shifted back and forth before settling into a frown, his eyes still closed. "I stand for the Brotherhood... as always."
Seemingly appeased, for the time being, Adalinde stole one last glance at Agrona's vitals before making her leave. Atra could feel the hum of the shuttle's engines through both the floor and the wall, seated as he was. It was far from a comfortable spot but he didn't care. The fight had been exhausting but at least it had been informative. Maybe the Combat Master wouldn't be the only one to learn something from it.
This was an exceptionally sound post from a technical standpoint so my comments will be more generalized and not broken down in categories like they usually are. The strongest part of the post is your vivid descriptions of both the scene and the combat. You also demonstrated a supreme mastery of both characters' sheets and their respective limitations. One particular example of Atra using Force Sense stood out to me:
This is one of the best examples of writing a lower skill tier (+1 or +2) Force power I've seen. Atra used the power outside of combat and still had to really focus to maintain it. This is how you do realism folks.
If your post had a weakness it was that it was very slow to get going. It took you the length of a normal sized post (approximately 900 words) before Skar actually showed up. You talked about him and set up the conflict early on which mitigated this issue somewhat but I felt that you could have cut the introductory material in half and not lost much. You almost got lost in the descriptions and didn't really hook the reader until about midway through your post. The premise of the conflict itself, while skilfully employing your detailed knowledge of both characters, was still a tried and true "test" scenario at its core that ultimately felt more impersonal than it should have been.