There were eight of them, each armed and outfitted with the best the galaxy’s criminal scum could buy. Typical of most Hutt enforcers, the bulk of their number consisted of axe wielding Gamorreans and gun toting Nikto, with a handful of humans to back them up. Stomping over the discarded glasses of patrons, with one quietly slipping the discarded winnings of one high stake Sabbac game into his pocket, they began to spread out before noting the only two remaining individuals left in the now empty club. The Jedi were given a momentary warning as the first - and largest - of the Gamorreans let loose a squealing warcry, sprinting forwards with one axe raised above his head. He barely made it three paces before his howling charge came to an abrupt and bloody stop.
Drawing the two pistols again, the Togruta smoothly turned and dropped to one knee, loosing a hail of bullets. The Gamorrean stumbled forwards as wet explosions of lifeblood erupted across his body, groaning as he collapsed into the nearest table. The others, the more sensible members of their group who had ignored this act of bold incompitence, merely raised their blasters and started to fire.
“Well then, what was your plan for after I agreed to go with you?” Tarvitz asked, raising his gun and putting two bolts into the nearest human trying to find cover.
“I didn’t plan for any of this!” The Togruta yelled, ducking beneath the burning storm of ionized energy hurtling overhead. Tarvitz paused momentarily, staring at the other Jedi in absolute disbelief before he leapt behind one of the supporting beams and out of sight.
“You drew a gun in Vertical City’s busiest night club, shot a man I was having a card game with, and demanded I follow you with no questions asked. How did you think this was going to end!?”
“Look, you were the one who gave some nebulous mention that you needed to-” the Togruta stopped and fired, eliciting scream from another charging Gamorrean “Can we save this until later?”
“Fine, just give me two things - Your name and who sent you,” Tarvitz said, leaning further into the relative safety of the sofa as a bolt shrieked through the air, close enough to leave a blackened streak across its fabric.
“Lavanth,” the Togruta answered, his irritation evident, between metallic clicks as he reloaded his two slugthrowers “and your house’s Aedile sent me, who else.”
Who else indeed. Tarvitz sighed slightly, before leaning out into the open and firing off several shots at one of the more over-eager thugs. Edgar Drachen had been one of the few he had announced his departure to, stating simply that he had needed a few days to tie up a few loose ends from his former life. That had been almost a standard month ago, after one particular exchange of information had become extremely complicated. All the more so now this deal had gone up in flames, which was going to take a great deal of explaining before the night is over. For all the leeway Odan-Urr had granted him, it was situations like this which truly made him miss the freedom allowed by the Jensaarai.
Noting another thug drawing a bead upon him, Tarvitz reached out with the Force, hurling one of the abandoned stools through the air and into the man’s chest. He collapsed with a surprised yell, pulling the trigger on the blaster as he toppled and punched a large hole into the ceiling overhead. He didn’t rise again afterwards. So, that was two wounded, albeit bleeding heavily, and one concussed thus far. Not many to be sure, given the size of the group, but it was enough to rob them of the usual cocksure attitude found in criminals seeking an easy target. Enough, perhaps, even to get them to listen to reason.
“Gentlemen,” Tarvitz yelled over the blaster fire “Could I have a moment of your time, please!?”
The gunfire faltered, and even Lavanth paused for a moment, though something told him it was more out of confusion than anything else.
“Three of your number are down,” he said with all the politeness he could muster for someone who had been avoiding blaster bolts mere moments before “two are likely to bleed to death any minute now. Take them, walk out that door, and you will not be pursued. In return, we will leave the club as it is, and we will not pursue you.”
Normally this would have resulted in laughter, or perhaps the odd boasting threat. Instead, this particular group apparently decided to skip all of that and returned to attempted murder.
“Did you really think that would work!?” Lavanth yelled.
“No, but I had to give them a chance,” Tarvitz answered, peering out at the ruined club interior before ducking back into hiding “Do you think you can shoot the bar a few times?”
“Yes, why?”
“If we waste too much time here they’ll call for backup and we’ll end up with half the city after us. We need a distraction and I just happen to have a flame projector.”
Tarvitz could have sworn he caught the ghost of a smirk on the Togruta’s face before he rose up, took aim and fired a dozen shots. Each bullet sped past the thugs, missing them entirely as they ripped through the small bar to their left. Each and every one ended with the familiar crunch of shattering glass as bottles exploded under the impact, spilling their contents out onto the carpets below in a slowly spreading stain.
Just as the last round hit home, Tarvitz leapt up out of cover, raised his right arm and struck the micro-trigger hidden in his gauntlet. A five meter tongue of flame erupted from the small projector barrel at his wrist, hurtling across the short distance before striking the counter’s surface. It latched onto the polished wood, curling about the interior as it ignited everything in its path before finding the exposed liquids. Alcohol was volatile enough at the best of times, but few worlds held anything close to what Nar Shaddaa deemed a “strong” drink. Tarvitz had seen things served here which made undistilled Rhydonium seem tame by comparison.
The bar did not ignite so much as explode. One moment it was there, burning brightly, and the next, it was as if a small supernova had been unleashed within the club. Burning shards of wood, fragments of glass and an inferno of burning alcohol rapidly spread across the room. Anything it touched was reduced to a bright burning cinder within moments, and what little it could not simply burn it coated in blazing substances. The thugs, being the closest of the two groups, were lost amid the sudden explosion. Cut off by the rapidly spreading fire, Tarvitz barely made out a few alarmed screams, a door being forced open followed by the grunts of something heavy being dragged after them. Hopefully several someones, in this case.
“What now?” Lavanath asked, stepping into view and holstering his pistols before Tarvitz, making certain the other Jedi saw the action.
“Now, we run like every damned soul in hell is at our backs,” he said, turning quickly heading for the far exit “And hope we can reach our ships before the club’s owner learns of this.”
Syntax
Human can either be capitalized or not in Star Wars writing but you should be consistent.
The period after me should be a comma. See the dialogue section of the ACC Guide.
Spell check will betray you. I assume you meant Knight instead of night.
Story
Sometimes less is more and for the length of your post you very nearly did everything an opening post is supposed to do. Two things hurt you story-wise: first, you didn't really give a reason for Lavanth to be looking for Ka and second you didn't really have any physical interaction between the two. The opening post is supposed to set up the premise or the "why" of the fight so you want to frame the fight for both the reader and your opponent. There's nothing wrong with leaving room to expand the story later but even a hint to the reader as to why Lavanth was there would have helped. As to the second point, you set up the conflict between the two and introduced an action element by having Lavanth shoot a third party but you didn't have the two actually physically interact. The ACC rubric specifically provides, "if a post contains no actual combat or engagement between the two fighters, this will be considers a detractor to Story scoring." In the duelist hall, the two characters must physically interact in some way, even if it's a missed shot or swing, so long as some attempt at direction interaction is made.