Rhylance looked on with a grin as the Zabrak held his bleeding wound. The Chiss steeled himself, even as a slight air of fatigue ran over him. Prolonged conflict had never been his strong point, and he was heavily relying on the poison to assist him in surviving this encounter.
After Kul’tak brought him to the ground, the Gungan’s in the area began to back away from the conflict. Some went running, while others called for guards to come enforce justice upon these intruders. The cloak he had “borrowed” was still draped over his shoulders waiting to be used again for a quick escape. These somewhat primitive creatures would be easier to trick than the Zabrak, and even he fell victim to the charade rather easily.
Kul’tak could feel the stinging sensation of his opened flesh and he had to concentrate to allow the Force to make the pain more bearable. The Inquisitor thought himself lucky that he seemed to not have any symptoms yet. This encounter needed to end. Ripping the hilt free from his belt, Kul’tak activated his lightsaber. Crimson light filled the underwater pod with a harsh hiss.
“I don’t know what you’ve done to me you wretch, but I will end your traitorous ways for good!”
Taking a step forward Kul’tak froze in place. A strange feeling of euphoria began to wash over him as his vision blurred. The Inquisitor’s sight was filling with strange combinations of flashing lights and the room around him seemed to bend in unusual ways. Stepping backwards, he stumbled with a slight loss of balance.
“Everything alright Kul?” The Chiss’s voice rang into the Zabraks’ ears with a resonating echo. “How are you feeling? In what terms would you describe your experience?”
Rhylance’s voice rang in Kul’s head. As Kul turned to face the Chiss, the Consul began to multiply before his eyes. When one spoke, they all spoke. When one moved they all moved.
“I find this to be one of my favorite creations. The effects vary from subject to subject. What do you see?”
“Shut up.” Kul’tak flinched at the volume of his own voice. It was maddening. The Euphoria he felt left as waves of heat and cold washed over him. The multiple Rhylance’s began to circle him. They seemed to be evaluating him like an animal. Kul was no animal. The Sith focused every ounce of control he had on the Force that surrounded him. Slowly his vision steadied, but he couldn’t hold this concentration for long.
“I would normally hold off and study the effects of my toxin, but you have proven yourself to be a most dangerous, and annoyingly present adversary. I can’t afford another run in with you.”
As Rhylance approached Kul’tak his scalpel gleamed in the light of the underwater pod. Less and less copies of the medic hindered the Zabraks’ sight. Seeing that the Chiss would likely kill him with the small blade, the Inquisitor took action. He thrusted the lightsaber forward towards one of the copies. Rhylance twisted his body slightly, and even though the aim of the strike was off it still managed to clip his side. Kul felt where the lightsaber met flesh and pushed forward his opposite hand sending a burst of Force energy colliding with the Chiss, knocking him to the ground.
Rhylance could tell that Kul was coming to his senses, even if at a slow pace. The searing pain he felt in his side was unrelenting, and this battle could very well be his last. He needed to act quickly or he would face the Inquisitor’s justice. Kul’tak turned and focused on the Chiss. He flourished his blade slightly as he prepared to kill the Consul. As the Zabrak stepped closer to his prey, Rhylance pulled out a green vial with his right hand and held it out to him.
“I’ll offer you a truce Kul. You let me live and I will give you this antidote. All of the effects of my toxin will be gone. I will even come quietly to whatever trial awaits me by the Iron Legion.” Desperation could be heard dripping from the Chiss’s lips. He was begging for his life, and Kul’tak was loving it. “I’ll give you whatever you want.”
“Anything? Even the location of Taldryan’s fleet. The coordinates of all your traitorous hideouts?”
“Yes, anything Kul.”
“And tell me Rhylance. Why would you do this?”
“Self-preservation. I only wanted to continue my research, but right now it seems that my only option is too maybe live. Taldryan means nothing to me.”
Rhylance’s arm remained outstretched holding the vial. Silence filled the pod as Kul thought about his decision. A wicked smile crept across his face.
“Ok, it’s a deal.”
With a swift stroke of his lightsaber, Kul’tak sliced through the Chiss’s forearm earning him a shrieking yell of pain. The severed limb fell to the ground, still clutching the vial. Kul retrieved the vial and chuckled as he removed the small black cap from the top.
“How much of a fool do you think I am Rhylance? The minute I move to retrieve this vial, you would have merely moved to kill me. Now you will die a traitor’s death, just as you deserve.”
Kul’tak downed the contents of the vial before dropping it to the ground. He wiped his mouth and grimaced at the taste of the antidote. As Rhylance writhed in agony on the ground, holding the stump that was his arm, he let out a strained laugh. Sweat was pouring from his blue skinned forehead and tears could be seen in his eyes, but he forced out an amused chuckle between his hardened breaths.
“What are you laughing at?” Kul asked in confusion.
“You…you really are…an idiot,” Rhylance forced out as he gasped for breath.
“What are tal…” Kul went to grab the Chiss, but he felt a familiar numbing sensation travelling across his body. His eyes darted to the shattered glass upon the ground. He’d been tricked!
“You…You really drank…the whole thing…heh.”
The crimson saber in his hand fell as Kul’tak’s body began to freeze up on him. His legs felt like jelly as they began to give out. Panic spread through him as he watched Rhylance strain to pick himself up. The Chiss was gasping out in pain from his severed arm. He barely managed to lift himself to his feet, and the stress evident on his face. He may have survived the encounter so far, but it was at a heavy price.
“You know…I want to kill you…almost as much as…I want to live,” Rhylance looked at the stiffing form of his opponent. “But you made…several errors today Kul…but your biggest may have been…killing that Gungan.”
Kul’tak could hear a commotion come from the hallway to his right. Fear caused his heart rate to increase. The pumping could be felt in his ears.
“Gungans don’t take too kindly…to people killing their own. Have a good day Kul. Hope I don’t see you again.”
Rhylance hobbled out of the room. He used his remaining hand to slip the hood of the cloak still hanging from his shoulders back over his head. The injuries he received had taken their toll. Moving on will alone, the Consul just needed to get back to his ship. Unfortunately, he wasn’t sure that he could.
Syntax
Pay attention to your tense. This is present, it should be past:
You don't need the second comma here:
A bit repetitious with your use of "Consul" here. It would have been better served with his name or another moniker such as "The Medic":
There is a datapad inside the Consul? You probably mean "in the Consul's hand":
Story
I'm left wondering what the purpose of this segment was, though I know that "recourse" means "help", more or less. As a reader, the word choice leaves me wondering if more was meant to be outlined:
You did a good job of trying to instill meaning in this match, especially referring to previous encounters with your opponent. I liked that. You attempted to work it in organically as well. Makes for a richer story.
Realism
This bit is Realism due to using equipment you didn't include in your match details. At no point are sensors mentioned:
Continuity
This section is also Continuity, because you mentioned him taking notes of possible recourse but not doing anything. As a reader, it looks like you "magiced" these into existence because it was suddenly convenient towards your story purposes. You should have gone back and made note of installing these, or hinting at it properly, once you decided to use them: