Awrathakka. The center of a horrific past, an ominous presence seemed to linger in this storied settlement. These were the ghosts of history, wisps of suffering and lament conjured by visitors to this great wroshyr tree – at least, those who knew anything about what happened here, amidst the great canopies and Wookiee edifices.
Thanadd Mawgath knew something of this history, having been regaled in serious tones by the Sith handlers of Tarentum. “G5-623,” the Empire had called it, stripping the planet of its indigenous name the way it stripped the inhabitants of their autonomy. The native populations were shipped to labor camps, experimental medical facilities, or worse, unable to stem the Imperial tide until years later.
The Wookiees of Kashyyyk eventually seized their freedom, but even now, Awrathakka lay in ruins. High above the sinister flora and fauna, which pervaded the forest floor, Thanadd Mawgath skulked the abandoned networks of ligneous platforms and viaducts. Now, only the torrents and great wroshyr cared for the city, a lonely echo of Sheev Palpatine’s odious legacy.
Here, the Knight of Tarentum would shed more blood.
Scaling the coarse skin of the ancient tree, bark collapsing in vice-like grips, Mawgath could taste the darkness which lingered here. It stirred his bones, coursing through taught, fetid flesh and lending him what felt like power. His quarry no doubt enjoyed these invigorating forces, but the Pau’an suffered no fear. He was a warrior to his insidious core, a sinister blood lust calling him to meet his foe…
…and so he did.
Derek Cinn, he had been told, was a deadly champion in his own right – one which embraced the legacy of Darth Sidious himself. He was a threat to Mawgath’s ascendancy, an agent of a Sith cult which did not recognize the hegemony of Sith Bloodfyre and his ilk. Such entities could not be permitted to flourish, their dark ambitions a constant hazard to the grand scheme of the Clan of Life and Death. Capable enemies – those like Derek Cinn – needed to be squashed before their potential was fulfilled.
It fell to the line of Bloodfyre to strike the killing blow – one which would be an honor to deliver here, where the fist of Palpatine fell.
“CINN!” the mighty Pau’an bellowed, the hilt of his lightsaber an extension of lithe, cord-like arms.
“I have come for you, Sith,” he sneered, emphasizing the final syllable in a rare, begrudging token of respect. Even when murdering one of their own, the Sith Lords embraced a sense of honor.
The shadowy figure ahead sat folded, the bulk of a jetpack reflecting a peculiar shadow against a nearby hut, long condemned to the mercy of the elements. As he rose, Mawgath could just make out the tell-tale plates of clone trooper armor, the ovoid contours of the helmet reminiscent of Palpatine’s Stormtrooper legions. His eyes remained hidden as turned to face the Tarenti, clad in his own armor, an opaque visor concealing the properties of his visage.
The clambering Pau’an paused as his target stood to stature, little more than four and half feet tall from end to end. There was little time to make assumptions about where such a short being – likely an alien, from the looks of it – was able to procure such a compact suit of clone armor. Before the thought could be parsed, the creature inside removed the helmet…
…revealing the adolescent gaze of a teenager, no more than thirteen standard years old.
“WHAT IS THIS?!” Mawgath blustered, his blood rushing to the surface of his skin and coloring it a pallid violet.
The zealous harbinger of Tarentum had come to reap blood for tithing, yearning to draw each drop through glorious battle. How could a child bestow this bloody honour?
“You would not be my first, young one,” Mawgath growled, the mechanical timbre of his words menacing in their pitch.
“…but I have not come this far for you. I seek the one called Cinn, the would-be heir of Palpatine!”
The diminutive teenager flashed a wry smirk, as if a carnivore revealing the deadly promise of razor-sharp canines.
“Haven’t you heard? Size matters not!” he quipped, his puerile shrieking a grating cadence against the chaotic acoustics of Kashyyyk. He turned through the air with a deceptive aplomb, one which seemed to belong to a seasoned combatant instead of a child.
“Wha-“
Mawgath’s groan was interrupted by a flurry of blows, Cinn’s silver blade hissing and crashing against a crimson counterpart. A sequence of strikes and counter strikes carried the pair in a violent waltz, evenly matched and circling the putrefied platform.
The massive Pau'an chafed beneath his miscalculation. This was no mere boy, and he grunted against the relentless onslaught. Power met speed in congruent magnitudes, refusing to reveal a hint of weakness.
Neither combatant would hear the telltale creaking of the wood beneath their frenzied cries.
Syntax
Missing the word [a] in front of ‘half’.
Unnecessary comma after ‘least’. It breaks up the flow of the sentence.
This is a very awkward sentence that could use a rewording. Ideally, the first clause is shown as a thought in italics and the second clause stands by itself.
Verb correction. This sentence should use the verb ‘could’ rather than ‘would’.
Story
Wonderful intro for this venue. The scene is set up nicely. Good job.
Nice description of the scenery.
Nice. A reason to fight!
Nice use of his aspect.
Nice foreshadowing.