One of Alara’s favorite places to visit among her journeys in the universe was Ilum and its famous kyber crystal caves. The array of beautiful crystal as well as the peace that dwelled around always soothed her heart from whatever rage she may have been feeling. Perhaps it was due to the Force’s presence there, or the memories shared in this cave for Jedi and Sith long ago. Whatever it was, it drew Alara to the cave very often.
She had come across Ilum during her travels for her Battle Team Tacitus Athanasius and couldn’t help but stop by the caves on her way back to Judecca. The Mystic was now in her favorite spot, a pillar nearby the antechamber with a larger rock underneath it that quite often worked as a seat. The Aedile decided to devote some time to meditation among the crystals that surrounded her. In her heart, her Sephi-Human blood pulsed excitedly as if to keep rhythm to the song the cave sang in her pointed ears. It was a melody Alara and the Force shared in her mind.
A sound from the exit of the cave caught the Sephi’s attention. Her amber eyes flashed open as they peered over every corner she had memorized so well. She got up with a start and hung her body close to the floor, like a tusked cat ready to pounce on her nearby prey. The she-Marauder kept her breath very still.
After a few breaths, Alara’s heightened senses spotted the stranger come down the main pathway, opposite to the antechamber. His blonde hair made it easy to see him among the violet-sapphire hues in the cave. His blue eyes also reflected the kyber crystals around him very well. However, the half-Sephi noticed that kyber crystals did not illuminate in his presence as they did for most Force Users. Further analysis of the stranger made the woman realize he also did not carry a saber, but instead had a blaster rifle and pistol clipped to his belt.
“Halt!” Alara shouted at the stranger, “Who are you? What is your business here?”
“Easy,” the stranger lifted his arms as a sign of his lack of desire for combat. “I mean you no harm unless you give me reason to. My name is Lithar Andaris. I’m a Weapons Specialist for the Brotherhood. Clan Odan Urr.”
“Ugh,” Alara rolled her eyes, “I’ll never understand why they let you Lighties in.”
“Do I dare assume you’re a Sith?” Lithar’s brow furrowed into a frown as a steady hand reached for one of his blasters.
“No, no Sith. I’m a Dark Jedi of the Brotherhood. Clan Scholae Palatinae.” Alara bestowed the Loyalist with her information.
“I see. You’re one of those ‘undecided’, then.” Lithar’s frow eased and turned into a teasing smile.
“Undecided? I think it’s wrong to fit something as powerful as the Force, which has created all things, into simply two categories: Light and Dark. Even this cave proves that there is the middle ground. The shades of darkness that still flirt with light. Grey is just a part of life like black and white is. I just happen to be a shade darker than most.” The Aedile crossed her arms, satisfied with her opinion’s summary.
“You give your opinion very easily on the subject; something I find odd when coming from a stranger.” Lithar stepped forward cautiously, watching Alara’s stance as if predicting what she might do next. This only infuriated Alara further. Her well known temper began to churn within her gut and heat up her chest.
“You’re the one who assumed my path, Lightie.” Alara growled under her breath.
“It also seems very easy to tempt your anger,” Lithar tsked. He crossed one arm over the other behind his back and began walking around the half-Sephi as if inspecting her. “Shame really. That could be a true weakness you know.”
“Watch it, Loyalist.” Alara warned, standing in place while tightening her fists,“It may be easy to make me angry, but rage is not my weakness; It’s my strength. A strength you don’t want to come to face.”
“And why would your rage ever scare me?” Lithar smiled coyly as he came face-to-face with her.
Alara’s eyes began to glow with fire-like anger as memories of what she went through because of Jedi filled her mind. Her brow tucked even closer to them while her jaw clenched with a tightness of spite and bitterness. “I’ve dealt with you Lighties before, and I’m not afraid to do it again. You think you’re so wise and all-knowing, yet you dive into trouble without even a second glance at your surroundings. What did you even come here for? To stir up problems for others? You obviously have no Force Power, so it can’t be a kyber crystal you came here for.”
“ENOUGH!” Lithar snapped loudly at the woman before him. “My reasons are my own as yours are to yourself. I don’t need your constant questions. Just get out of my way before things get ugly. You practically dirty the Way of the Force with the Dark vibes you give off.”
“I don’t need your insults, Sithspit.” Alara cussed at the blonde. “Go to your own part of the cave, so I may do what I came here to do. I arrived here first.”
“And what if I don’t?” Lithar grabbed the half-Sephi’s right arm suddenly and held it at shoulder height.
“Then I’ll be forced to remove you from this place myself.” Alara swung her left fist at the Loyalist and struck his jawbone with impact that staggered him backwards.
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Neither did Pravus...that's why he burned New Tython, (This is just a joke and in no way affected your score)
Generally speaking, your descriptions of the environment and the confrontation dialogue were sound. You were heavy on dialogue but added enough emotes and descriptive language that the reader got a strong visual picture of what was going on. From a plot standpoint your reason for the conflict was rather average. I felt like there a missed opportunity there to create something more than a misunderstanding between a dark and light sider. Why was Lithar even there? That's a critical question that shouldn't be left open in the first post.