Focusing his non-corporeal senses on what he had only caught a glimpse of before, Jorm saw Alara’s radiating fury organize and weave into indescribable patterns. Then it descended upon his lover, cloaking her like a second skin.
Her lips split in a hungry smile.
“I’m so not sorry for what will happen now. A sound beating will do you good, Jorm.”
He finally realized what Alara was doing. I’ve even dabbled in that technique myself, he thought. In that very moment, he did what decades on the wrong side of the law had taught him about unexpected encounters with a lot of power.
He bolted.
Pushing himself beyond his physical capabilities, he ran down the alley, towards the force field furthest away. His mind raced, fishing for what little he knew about the harnessed rage Alara had embraced. He completely forgot his own injuries between the adrenaline and his thoughts.
I need time!
A tingling sensation and a guttural shout in his back prompted him to sidestep, just to see a heavy club shoot through the air where he had just been.
The projectile continued its flight for another dozen meters before it crashed into the forcefield. A shower of sparks traveled along the translucent wall, illuminating it across its whole width.
Meanwhile, Jorm heard Alara close in from behind, her feet hammering into the ground like pistons.
No turning back...
The Kiffar shifted his weight and adjusted his course, then jumped. His bootheels made the Forcefield explode into another shower of sparks, and another, and another, as he ran up on it - but it did not collapse.
Instead, it allowed Jorm to pass the corner onto one of Murder Alley’s walls above the stands, now wall-running in the direction he had come from.
Another subconscious nudge prompted him to kick off and drop back to the deck. As he fell, the half-Sephi passed him in flight like a beautiful, Force-fueled missile.
For the shortest moment, they were face to face, little more than an arm’s length apart.
Jorm winked at Alara.
Alara glared back.
Then he hit the deck, rolling to bleed off momentum. His foot slipped into the dent Alara’s empowered jump had struck into the metal as he whirled around to face her rebounding off the second-story wall.
Gotta admit, she’s magnificent like that, Jorm mused as she descended upon him. Her ferocious golden eyes locked with his laughing citrine ones, then hers widened in surprise as the Kiffar reached out as if to touch her. Alara suddenly hung in mid-air, suspended by Jorm’s telekinetic grip.
“I’ve got way too much fun with this,” Jorm chuckled as he threw her into another shop. The washed-out burgundy market tent collapsed under the impact, entangling the woman and muffling her outrage.
From the corner of his eye, Jorm saw a Gran behind the transparent barricade double over and wince as if beaten, and guessed him to be the owner. He shrugged it off and pooled his mental reserves.
How long has she been raging now? Twenty seconds? Thirty? No matter, here she comes.
The collapsed tent virtually exploded into metal scrap and reddish rags as Alara burst out of it. She launched herself right back at Jorm. A savage, unarticulated roar escaped her lips as she charged.
The crazy Kiffar held his ground this time. Again, he saw the woman’s frenzy weave around and support her in the Force. With a premeditated effort, he severed the strands holding the Force-weave in place, blowing it into tatters just as she had obliterated the tent.
Alara’s battlecry turned into a yelp as her feet hit the ground with more energy than they could absorb without the Force’s assistance. She fell against Jorm when her legs folded under her, and prematurely depleted literally bounced off him.
Jorm caught her by the wrists before she could hit the ground and upheld his mental assault. She struggled against his grip, but her burned-out muscles couldn’t contest Jorm’s remaining strength.
She kicked at him, but he plain ignored her weak hits with a smile.
She tried to renew the weave that had carried her so far, but Jorm doubled down and frayed every strand of torrential anger she tried to knit into something greater, making sure that energies which would be directed against him went to waste.
Finally, she just stopped. The fury ebbing from her every pore subsided. Jorm slowly let her glide to the floor, where she sat speechless, and panting heavily.
Jorm wiped his brow with the back of his hand.
“Tell ya what,” he addressed her, “you tap out now and I’ll treat you to a weekend in bed, meals included.”
She looked up at him and took his measure. It must have been as obvious to her as it was to Jorm that he had deeper reserves left. Her gaze wandered to his arms, where the bruises he had suffered by her hand earlier were already fading before she answered.
“One condition. Anywhere but here, preferably planetside,” she demanded.
Jorm’s smile widened.
“Done.”
Alara made contact with a guard and tapped out. The force fields shut down to admit medics, led by Lexiconus.
Memo to myself: Jorm, never break up with that girl in close quarters.
Took a minor syntax hit for the following:
This is a very awkward phrase, and grammatically incorrect. It would have worked better as 'had been built', as the lead in clause about multiple fighters would change the 'was built' to 'were built' which...would not make sense obviously. Sometimes you just have to say it aloud to figure out the problem.
Looks like your spellchecker got the better of you here, the curse of Star Wars names.
Minor continuity error here, you're fighting on the Matron, a starship, inside an area filled with shops, the decks shouldn't be covered in sand.
All in all this was a solid start to the match, it set the tone well and showed the chemistry of Jorm and Alara, as well as giving them a reason for being there.
Unfortunately you took a hit to story here because there isn't any kind of back and forth conflict, which is required in every post, even the Funderdome. Note that this doesn't mean combat, but some form of conflict needs to be present.
Other than that and the comments above, very solid start.