Alara hit Andrelious with her full fury still coursing through her body. It did not matter to the half-Sephi that her opponent hadn’t had anything to do with the attack on Judecca. The fact that he had so callously referred to the event was enough to make her hate him on the spot.
Already physically superior to her aging rival, the extra boost provided by the dark side allowed Alara to force the Taldryanite to remain firmly on the defensive as she varied between strength and speed with each of her strikes.
The ferocity of the attacks were enough to silence Andrelious; only by staying fully committed did he appear to have any chance of even staying alive, let alone turning the tide of the battle. To his dismay, Alara didn’t even seem to be starting to tire. Her blows remained powerful, whilst she left no openings for a counter-attack.
Keeping his blade as solid as he could manage, the male glanced around for the nearest exit. He did not relish the idea of an embarrassing retreat, but his own survival would always come first.
I’ll run. Get back to the ship. Get back to Kooki. Let her deal with this madwoman Andrelious thought.
Ducking under an attempt to remove his head from his shoulders, the Sith finally managed an attack of his own, trying to stab Alara through the heart. As the half-Sephi parried, she appeared to have lost some of her strength. Andrelious took advantage, slamming his lightsaber into its counterpart with a newfound confidence.
“Overestimating your power. The Jedi would say it’s a weakness. I will just use that weakness!” Andrelious snarled.
Continuing his assault, the Taldryanite probed for an opening, forcing Alara to defend almost as desperately as he had moments before. The strain of having been on the defensive during the female’s onslaught caused fatigue to affect the Sith, but he was determined to punish the young girl for making him look so foolish.
Just as he appeared to begin another series of slashes, Andrelious stepped back, moving into a defensive stance. He did not deactivate his lightsaber, but he appeared as if he were about to say something.
“Something on your mind?” Alara hissed.
“As it happens, yes. Clearly we’re at an impasse here. You’re easily my equal. Further fighting is a waste of time. Instead, we should be looking at a way to get revenge on Pravus. For Karufr. And for Judecca,” Andrelious replied, seemingly calm.
Alara almost couldn’t believe what she was hearing. Her Sith opponent had seemed intent on hurting her, maybe even killing her, but now he was wavering.
Perhaps he doesn’t realise how tired I am. If he had kept up what he was doing, I would have been insevere trouble. Maybe he’s overexerted himself. He doesn’t exactly look to be the peak of his fitness, the woman mused.
“You propose an alliance?” Alara questioned.
“For now, more of a truce. We’ll see about an alliance after we’re back at our respective clans,” Andrelious explained.
“Alright. I have very little reason to trust you, but you’re right. I have bigger problems than finishing you off. Besides, someone needs to make the sandwiches for that wife of yours,” the female quipped.
“Let us leave, then. After you,” the Sith answered, smirking.
Alara moved past Andrelious towards the exit. She was still mystified as to why her opponent had suddenly backed down. From what little she knew of Andrelious, he was not one to allow his prey to walk away unscathed.
Just a split-second later, things became crystal clear as a crimson blade slid into Alara’s lower back. She fell to the ground, devastated by the pain from destroyed internal organs.
“So strong. So powerful! I didn’t think you’d be so weak minded!” Andrelious teased as he withdrew his weapon, returning it to its belt clip. Without bothering to so much as check on Alara, he grabbed his other, discarded lightsaber.
As he left the room, the Taldryanite shot one final glance at his wounded opponent.
“Goodbye, Alara. If you survive, I hope you’ll have learned something from this.”
Syntax:
A small typo:
Remember, when you follow a quote directly with 'he said,' 'she murmured,' or things of that nature, a period at the end of the quote changes to a comma.
Story:
Ok, so we know why Andrelious is there. Not in great detail, but that's something Mark is free to expound upon in his post; you did your part of getting him to the arena. Likewise, the fight flows naturally from their clashing personalities and willingness to resort to violence. My question is: why is Alara there? Does she just loiter in ruined ancient Sith citadels?
Realism:
No errors that I noticed.
Continuity:
N/A