Alara retracted her sabers, clipped them to their holding place on her belt, held her hands up to her temples and called upon the Force to guide her. Sure enough, it responded and opened her eyes to what surrounded her. She could feel that Xantros was just around the corner. She silenced a chuckle that nearly fell from her lips and pretended to walk around aimlessly.
“Come out, come out, wherever you are…” Alara toyed with her combatant. She whistled a haunting, lullaby-like tune as she swung around the room in playful motions. While trusting the Force, the half-Sephi purposefully turned her back away from where she knew the Duros was hiding. The Force quickly warned her of an impending swing from the turquoise-skinned foe which she quickly acknowledged and gracefully spun around to meet him. Alara then encapsulated his fist with her palm and asked the Force in her mind to help her soften the blow. Xantros huffed and continued to push forward with his strength, but the Aedile could not be staggered. Instead, she was triggered to laughter.
“Nicely done, Xantros. Your camouflage will do you well in Excidium. We all tend to lurk in the shadows, not much like our counterparts elsewhere in the Empire. But I am prompted to ask you this… Is that all you’ve got?”
“We shall see, Lady Deathbane.” Xantros grunted with a smile. He returned his fist to his side and reached for his saber once again.
Alara nodded in agreement and ignited her sabers as well, “Let’s dance, pretty boy.”
With a feline-like grace, the half-Sephi twirled in the air towards her opponent. Flashes of orange, yellow, and purple filled the castle ruins as the two continued to parry attacks from one another. The Duros was a fantastic opponent, but it was evident that he had issues blocking attacks from multiple sabers at once. Alara’s confidence continued to soar as she observed the sweat dripping from her new recruit’s cerulean brow. She purposely parried his attack with her left yellow saber, and while keeping him busy with that sliced the ground next to him with her right. With a yelp, Xantros leapt out of Alara’s reach.
“Here, let’s make things a little easier.” Alara smirked. She clicked the button of her left saber, turned off its plasma, and clipped the hilt back to her belt. With a nod, she gestured the Seer with her free hand. He nodded back and stepped forward to return to battle. The two danced the fighters’ dance, blocking each hit with precision, until Alara could sense her opponent growing tired. She raised her saber and slashed it downwards with all her strength. Xantros managed to stop the saber’s approach, but only with a shaking grip. At this, Alara took advantage of the moment and sent her foot directly to his stomach.
“YOWWCHH!” Xantros heaved backwards and landed awkwardly on the damp floor.
“How about this, we lose our sabers and just fight ‘mono-e-mono’?” Alara offered with a grin. Xantros answered only with a nod as he quickly shut down his saber and clipped it to his belt. Alara did the same, and offered him a hand to stand up.
“I guess this is why you’re still Aedile, and why I’m still a bit rusty.” The Duros laughed nervously and accepted her hand.
“No need to worry. I know you’re a great fighter. It’ll all come back in due time. It’s what the test was for.” Alara smiled kindly. She pulled him up with a quick flick of her wrist, and backed up to give him room.
“Alright. Let’s do this.” Xantros shrugged his shoulders and waved his neck from side-to-side in preparation. He raised his hands in the air at mid-stance and shifted his weight to his right side.
Alara hunched herself close to the ground by bending her knees, and held her hands in a similar position by tucking her elbows closely to her hips. “Shadow Step, eh? A true assassin’s form. I’ve dabbled in it a bit myself. Not my strongest suit, though.” She stated and welcomed her opponent to her with a waving palm.
“Yeah, you seem to be more of the front-lines type.” Xantros suggested.
“I strike in many ways. Just depends on the situation I’m in.” With that, Alara stepped forward forcefully and thrusted her fist towards Xantros’ chest.
He dodged successfully and swung his left foot to whack her jaw. Alara dodged the kick by lightly jumping to the side and swung her own right leg to kick him in the rear. Xantros dropped to the ground in a twirl, lifted his left leg to meet hers, shoved it aside, and used his right leg to try and trip her. Alara swung her right leg backwards as if performing a pirouette, hopped slightly to miss her opponent’s attempt at tripping her, and continued her spin to hit his face with her foot. The attempt was successful. The Seer hovered without balance for a moment, but immediately hopped up to resume the fight. Alara nodded at his performance and punched forward with her left fist. Xantros dodged, met his wrist with hers, and tried to strike her with the other fist. Alara snuck her left knee up in time and kicked him backwards. His movements proved he considered returning to fight, but the Duros instead sighed and wagged his shoulders once again.
“Well I think it’s fair to say that wouldn’t go anywhere for me.” Xantros admitted.
Alara dropped her hands from further combat and reached for her cape on the floor nearby. “No biggie, like I said. It’s a measure to see where you’re at. We plan to do more training soon.”
“I promise I’m not as bad as I seem.” he looked towards her seriously.
“I know, I know.” Alara agreed. Suddenly her vision began to shake rapidly, as if her head could not stay still. Her pupils began to flicker in and out of focus. She could barely make out the Duros’ hand that was only but centimetres from her face.
“You will tell no one of my performance in this battle. You will report that I am as sharp as ever in combat.” Xantros’ voice resonated loudly in her ear drums.
Her lips were forced to voice the words that throbbed in her brain. “I will tell no one of your performance in this battle. I will report that you are as sharp as ever in combat.”
With that, the Duros smiled, waved his hand again, and walked away as Alara fell to the ground and into a deep sleep.
Syntax
Spelling Issues.
No comma needed when the subject of the second verb is the same as the first part of the sentence.
Comma needed.
Period needed.
Story
Good. You have told me why this fight must take place. This is followed up with some nice dialogue.
Combat initiated. Good.
Realism
Per Xantros’s ‘Bothan’s Do It From Behind’ aspect, this would not be something that he would employ. It is too basic an attack. If you had included some sort of sneaky reason behind it that is the true attack, then I could get behind this but as it stands it is out of character for Xantros.