Alara saw the Ryn’s ears perk up as he picked up what the Force was putting down. She could sense it too. Way to go, Alara, she growled at her stupidity, Way to wake up the only live beast in a mile radius.
Instead of continuing to follow Kordath, Alara chose an ulterior motive of survival and took to the trees. Her nimbleness and acrobatic skills were a little rusty from no longer living in a jungle biome, but memories came back to her which refueled her passion in it.
“Oy! Wheya yah goin?!” Kordath called from the ground.
“Where does it look like? Away from the giant beast that’s on his way over here. My battle isn’t through with you, though.” Alara shouted, trying to keep her focus on reaching and swinging from branch to branch, vine to vine.
“Kark! Don’t leave me heyah!” the Ryn attempted to chase after her by scrambling over a tree trunk, but scoffed in frustration at his lack of time and gave up in order to keep running to safety.
“Why shouldn’t I?” Alara hollered down while swinging on another vine. “You and Arcona don’t want to help us at Scholae Palatinae, so why shouldn’t I just leave you there?”
“I get it, okay?! You’re upset! That’s obvious! But it’s no reason for me to die!” Kordath bellowed while he ran and attempted to stay low in the bushes.
“Hmm, reason enough for me! And if you survive, we will finish our fight!” Alara laughed and continued flying through the sky.
A heinous roar thundered through the jungle and shook leaves off of the alien atmosphere’s trees. The two combatants gulped and continued in their frenzy to get away from the scene. Sure enough, the rancor made its way into focus and immediately spotted the large amazon woman monkey-mimicker as well as the running blue elder-nymph running at the ground.
The creature’s first move was to cut Alara down to the ground. Its sharp claws pierced through the wind and began to yank down branch after branch. Alara continued to flurry through leaves and vines to escape the rancor’s clutches, but her attempts unfortunately failed. The rancor’s right claws managed to grab hold of the last trailing vine she clung to. He reached for the half-Sephi with his other hand, but Alara jumped for it and hardly managed to roll into a landing on the ground behind a tree.
“Kordath! Throw the damn grenade!” Alara hollered.
“Wha?!” Bleu looked over his shoulder in confusion.
“IT’S IN YOUR HAND, SITHSPIT!” Alara shouted angrily. The rancor leaned down for another shot at seizing the Aedile, but she rolled out of the way to another stump and picked herself up to continue running.
“Ohhhh... Right! Got it!” Kordath looked down on his hand and spotted the grenade he had already forgotten about. He lifted it to his teeth, ripped off the clip, and chucked it behind him as hard as he could. An explosion threw all three of the characters backwards, but Alara and Ryn tied in getting up first. Another roar reverberated through the ground as the rancor furiously clambered to gain footing.
“Where’s the ship?!” Alara called from the Seer’s right.
“It’s just ahead! Oy! You’re not coming!” Kordath growled.
“Wanna bet? Let’s see who’s in shape enough to outrun a rancor!” Alara called upon the Force and focused her strength as much as she could into her legs. She could practically see the extra speed she was given as she stared down at the ground to keep her footing. Her half-Sephi eyes managed to spot the shuttle successfully. She began to head towards it until a pulling feeling in the Force began to nag her gut.
Alara, why are you doing this now of all times?! the Marauder scoffed to herself, Why do you let the Light bother you when there’s a damn rancor behind you!?
Despite her efforts, she couldn’t shake off the feeling and ended up turning around to help the Ryn. She found him making his way up some other tall tree with the rancor not far behind. With quick thinking, Alara channeled the Force to crackle through her fingertips and sent a flash of lightning towards the beast. The creature howled and stomped in pain. The distraction worked. It began to head towards her. She inhaled deeply to prepare herself for another attack, but before she could another grenade fell from the tree towards the rancor.
Alara immediately leapt up the tree as she watched the explosion land on the rancor’s face. It’s blood and skull pieces began to litter the ground around their tree which was also turning into splinters below their feet.
“Hop on my back!” Alara yelled.
“I’m fine, I don’t need yah help!” Kordath growled.
With aggravation, Alara huffed and grabbed the Ryn anyway while she spun to leap towards another tree before they were squished by the ground quickly coming towards them. The Gray Jedi held on as she reached for another vine and managed to bring them to safety.
After a few pants of breathing, the pair finally began to speak once more.
“Well, that was crazy.” Alara chuckled, adrenaline still pumping through her veins.
“Not as crazy as you are, Deathbane.” Kordath laughed.
“Truce?” Alara offered her hand.
“The Seer looked down in disbelief, but nodded and took the pale figure’s hand. Alara squeezed until she felt the crack of his knuckles.
“Owch! What was that for?”
“Sorry, had to.” Alara chuckled, “I get that our problems are not your own though.” With that, she began to climb down the tree.
“Well, if you ever need anything persuhnuhhly,” Kordath placed a small hand on her shoulder. “Gimme a call.”
Alara looked up, smiled at the curious Ryn, and nodded in acceptance of his offer. She climbed down, kicked the Rancor to ensure herself of its death, and headed towards the shuttle he left so far behind.
Syntax
Typically thoughts are italicized to separate them from the narration, although apostrophes or quotation marks suffice so long as the thoughts are dictated as thoughts. Try to follow one of these methods in the future.
The paragraph preceding this is Kordath's dialogue, and thus this line of speech should be paired with it. A minor formatting error.
When transitioning from dialogue to narration in this manner, a comma should be used instead of a period. This happens several times throughout the post.
Story
This line gets reused a little excessively here and points out, in its use, that there was not much thought put into the purpose behind this encounter nor for the impending conflict that ensues. I would hazard to say that this exchange was also rather unrealistic given that such a message could be easily given via holocall or some such messaging devices, and that a member of Arconan leadership would not go all the way to Felucia for something so trivial.
Realism
This is technically feasible through Amplification with the related Feat, Enhanced Sight. As is, none of your abilities support this use of the Force. Minor detractor.
“Shit” does not fall into the Star Wars profanity roster; druk, poodoo, and Sithspit do. “Damn” is about the only real-world curse that transfers over. Minor ding here.
Synopsis
A bit of proofing and this post would have been mechanically sound. The story was severely lacking in that the setting was given only a perfunctory mention, and the remainder consisted of a lackluster verbal exchange that forced in the background and lead-in to the fight which reduced the overall quality.