Mune had to admit, he had been quite impressed by the Duros’ suppression of his senses to hide his movements. He was less so impressed by his opponent’s use of a blaster rifle however. He hated firearms. Mune peered over the edge of his cover. He was already working on triangulating his opponent’s location by the direction the blaster fire had come from. He knew well, though, that his opponent had likely already moved.
“You should really learn how to use blasters, Mune.”
The Hybrid’s head snapped around. The Duro’s rifle was levelled upon him. He had concealed his location so completely, and shrouded himself well enough to have made it around behind the other Seer. The Force reacted to the younger man’s instincts, all he could grasp, driven into his reflexes. He jerked sideways just as the rubble at his back exploded into shrapnel. He pivoted on his right foot, the Force surged at his behest and he hd the shrapnel within that grasp of his mind. All at once, the sharp shards of rock whipped through the air, made lethal projectiles.
Xantros was forced to drop his blaster. He focussed on drawing the Force to bend to his will. The realization came when the first and third shards cut through his cloak to draw blood, that he could not bend the Force into a barrier quick enough to protect himself. Mune had acted too quickly. The older man felt the sting of another three cuts before he threw himself to the ground. The rest tore by overhead to be flung off the platform and released to the abyss.
“You probably should have did that to begin with…” Mune teased lightheartedly. “You know why I do not use blasters?”
“You don’t know any better…?” Xantros grumbled at him, rising slowly to his feet.
“They lack imagination.”
Mune ignited one of his ligthsabers, held in his right hand, a prompt for the Duros to do the same. So they stood once more, face to face. Blood ran from no less than five lacerations, Xantros noting the one in his left side was specifically uncomfortably deep. He noted too, Mune was breathing hard, the counter attack using such an intricate show of telekinesis had taken a toll, it would appear.
“I’ll admit, that attack was something.”
“Thank you, many years of practice using my abilities in unpredictable ways.”
“It must throw your opponents off.” Xantros continued.
“Don’t try lulling me with talk, mind games won’t work on me.” Mune play mocked.
The Duros chuckled a bit, circling, their eyes remained focussed on each other and only each other. The arena itself was a distant thing. The sound of the wind, the rustle of the leaves, the echos of water bubbling through the rivers of the canyon. It all evaporated in those moments, only the other existed. The Hybrid caught his breath slowly, the Duros managed to gain control of the aching pain of his multiple small wounds. The pain was still there, but, dulled through his concentration, his attention was all for the young man before him. Neither paid attention to the edge of the arena they had grown close to.
His breathing levelled, Mune drew short. Xantros had moved. Mune did not react. He instead turned sharply, he caught the cut intended for his right side upon his own lightsaber. The crackling hiss of the sabers resonated off the trees to either side of the suspended arena. Birds burst from the foliage at the savage racket of the two weapon. The illusion at Mune’s back unravelled, Xantros’ concentration instead turned to pressing his opponent’s saber back.
It was not difficult, the Duros was far stronger than his opponent. The Hybrid’s footing was forced to shift to accommodate and, Xantros could see the effort it took for Mune to maintain his block. Sweat beaded upon the part-Human’s brow. I have him, he could not help but think with a grin.
Mune struggled to maintain his position, his saber held in a block that he knew well he could not maintain for much longer. The ache of the effort was already beginning to pulse through his right shoulder.
“Give up. You’ve seen my abilities now.” Xantros growled.
“Yet you still think you are better.”
“You are the one about to lose, boy.” The Duros exclaimed.
“Lose? How can I lose when I never intended to win? This is a test.”
Xantros froze, confusion clear in his green skinned face. Realization dawned. The weight behind his saber faltered. It was enough. Mune disengaged his own saber, the blade retracting. He shifted his weight away at the same moment and the Duros tumbled forward, too surprised to retain his suddenly shifted balance.
Mune struck then, the Force wrapped tightly within a fist, a strike to his back that sent the Duros sprawling with his own momentum. He very nearly went tumbling over the edge of the arena when he was jerked suddenly back. Mune had him by the wrist, instinctively Xantros’ own hand gripped his fellow’s wrist and he was tugged back to safety. The fight was done, though Xantros was taken aback when Mune spoke again.
“Good fight. You won that one.” Mune announced softly.
“Wait… you…”
“Never happened. You won.” The Hybrid winked, “I’ll get our first round of drinks when we get back.”
Confused, Xantros followed the Hybrid off the field of battle.
Syntax
This should read “and a few seconds later…”
You have a past-tense verb placed in a sentence almost as if it were a noun. You might have tried:
"Possibly, agreed the Arcanist, nodding as he spoke.”
Story
This post, overall, was very short, and while you led well by providing a reason for the battle (a test between Clanmates), you missed the opportunity to develop gravitas. You set the stage well for your opponent to pickup the story, but I do suggest expanding upon ideas even as straightforward as waiting. What is your character thinking about? Why does he suspect he's been called to such a location? He seems to anticipate something, as he takes the time to note his surroundings. Why did he do that? You can add dimension to your character - and to the story - by considering deeper context.
This line is grim, and I heard it as a deep rumble in my imagination. Simple dialogue, but I enjoyed it.