Strong worked his jaw, the kick hadn't been very powerful, but it had surprised him. He'd intended to vault the boulder and tackle the smaller woman, hoping to immobilize her until she could calm down. His mark had been off, it seemed, and now she was spitting fire at him with a small, black blaster that didn't appear to stop shooting. Even with the recoil, she was doing an excellent job of bringing the weapon in line with his bulk, forcing him to roll across the grass.
Heat chased him, fire sprouting from the ground where blaster bolts struck. When the staccato sound of the pistol paused, the clip seeming to have finally run dry, he paused his roll. Strong brought his knees in contact with the ground and pushed his right foot back while he slid his left under him, he took a runner's stance. Strong pushed off, charging towards the woman as her weapon cooled. The Chiss saw her look up from her inspection of the gun, her green eyes widening in surprise.
"How are you so kriffing fast!?"
"TRAINING! This sprinting technique has been taught in my family for years!"
As he bellowed his reply, the girl tried to jump out of his way. What she hadn't counted on was the massive man's vast grasp, his right, knuckler festooned fist catching her in the side as she tried to dodge. Strong skidded to a stop several meters past the woman and spun to face her, arms up in a guard. He blinked in surprise, his foe lying on the grass, clutching her side where he'd struck her, moaning in pain. A quick inspection of his vibroknuckler showed no blood upon the studs, so why was she acting so wounded?
"My apologies, miss, did I cause you grievous injury? I only intended to knock the wind from you so that I might explain that I am not your foe!"
Strong approached his fallen foe, bending over at the waist and reaching for her. He froze as her groans of pain ceased, and he found himself staring at the barrel of her blaster.
"Ah, a ruse! Quite clever! I'm pleased to see that I did not harm you significantly, miss. Now, as I've said, I am not your enemy, please desist."
"You are so weird. I'm pointing a blaster at your face; you realize that, right?"
"I have been called worse," he responded with a mighty shrug.
The woman on the ground winced. "Do you have to keep shouting?"
"I must apologize, Madame, but this is simply how I speak. Now, if you do not intend to fire, could you possibly lower the weapon? I do not mind sharing some of the things I've discovered in my stay upon this island. I did not intend to take any of them with me when my vacation was over."
"VACATION!?"
"Now who is shouting?"
She stared up at the blue-faced man for long seconds, her pistol unwavering. No lies did she find in his glowing red eyes, nor did he seem like he was trying to trick her into an unfavorable situation. While the big man might have been incredibly odd, he seemed genuinely concerned that he may have harmed her and didn't appear to want retribution for her knee-jerk reaction of shooting at him.
"You, uh, got found some neat stuff?" she asked, lowering her weapon slowly. She yelped in surprise when he gave her a broad grin and reached down with two meaty hands, having at some point relieved himself of his knucklers. Bell kicked weakly, out of instinct when he picked her up and placed her on her feet. She decided she'd shoot him if he followed it up with a head pat. Instead, he gestured to the stone hut nearby.
"Indeed! Ancient trinkets and the like, fine collector items I'm certain. Allow me to show you my favorite pieces!"
So weird, she thought as he walked into the hut. With a shrug she followed, who knew, maybe something would be worth keeping for a profit.
Syntax
The verb ‘fall’ does not agree with the subject ‘trinket’. Either you can make the verb past tense of use ‘falls’ but past tense sounds better. In addition. This sentence sounds odd. Did you perhaps mean ‘as the trinket fell from her hand’?
Missing word.
Story
Nice setup of the story from your character’s perspective.
Nice use of her aspect.
Realism
Bell rarely misses with a blaster and has the ‘No scope’ feat, which lets her line up shots after firing from the hip. This makes her very dangerous and unlikely to miss so much. You also do this in your second post where a big Chiss rolls away from her shots and doesn’t get hit. In fact, not one of Bell’s shots hits in the entire story yet she rarely misses. This is a realism error.