Turel remained completely focused on the task at hand. Whilst the sight of an onrushing Sith was one that he was used to dealing with, he was having to remember to defend himself as though he were also a dark sider.
Andrelious’ eyes burned almost as bright and yellow as the sun overhead as hatred towards the apparent Inquisitor continued to spur the Sith onward. Each movement of his lightsaber seemed determined to quickly end things, but Turel still seemed satisfied with simply blocking everything that the Taldryanite threw at him.
As he continued his attempts to smash past his rival’s stubbornly defensive blade, Andrelious began to feel a warmer presence in the Force. At first, he ignored it, but, as it began to cancel out the darkness that he could feel in his opponent, he started to realise exactly what was happening.
“You. Tell me. Were you there when Karufr burned? Did you watch as the Iron Navy’s turbolasers laid waste to millions of innocent people?” the Rollmaster questioned, stepping away from the fight.
“Come on, Andrelious. Do you really think I’m going to tell you that?” Turel responded, glad for the brief respite.
“True. I can’t expect a man who is too much of a coward to even show his face to admit to being involved in anything like that. Let’s just say that you were there. How does it feel to watch a man’s orders destroy everything? All of those people, man, woman, child, killed. Perhaps you were even sent down to help with the cleanup,” Andrelious continued.
“Lord Pravus knows what he is doing. Any of those people, especially the children, could have..” the Jedi answered, trailing off as he realised just how dark he was sounding.
“You can’t justify it, can you? A real Inquisitor has no qualms about defending Karufr. Or New Tython,” the Sith stated.
“My identity aside, you were still here. That’s enough for the Lotus to take you in,” Turel declared, still keeping his false voice.
“No chance!” Mimosa-Inahj spat. He reached forward, swinging his lightsaber with only slightly less aggression than before. Turel resumed defending himself, but he started to spot signs that Andrelious was becoming tired. Stepping back, the Jedi waited for his opponent to reach forward, and, with a quick tap on the wrist, activated his dart shooter. A single dart sped out from under his sleeve, hitting the Taldryanite’s cheek.
The dart began to take effect almost immediately. Andrelious could feel a bitterly cold liquid beginning to flow around his body. As the sensation reached his fingers and toes, the Sith realised that he could no longer move them. The paralysis quickly extended along his arms and legs, leaving him to fall onto the ground.
“Perhaps you are a Sith after all. That was a dirty trick. Are you going to finish me now?” the Rollmaster questioned, his voice slurring.
Turel removed his helm. “No. You and I are done here. Once you get your motor functions back, you can explain to me why you were here. I very much doubt you’re here to help the Lotus, but I’m convinced you’re not helping Pravus,” Turel explained.
Andrelious was unable to respond verbally, but he did manage a small nod.
“Good. You’ll be able to leave here in peace, but I want you to understand something. I could easily kill you. I didn’t. Just think how many times you could have shown a little mercy. Not everyone deserves to die, Andrelious,” the Odanite continued.
Great. This is going to be one of THOSE days.. Andrelious thought.
Who is trafficking the weapons? This sentence could have been edited slightly to be more clear.
These sentences are very comma-heavy. I'm not pointing this out as an error, I'm just pointing out that they could likely have been constructed differently. The first sentence in particular just looks odd to me as presented.