Lucine took a deep breath, trying not to show just how much effort it took to redirect the Savant's attack. This is going to remain difficult as long as she continues to insist on trying to bludgeon me with the Force.
Deactivating the The Demon's Blade, Lucine pivoted to the side, holding the lightsaber downward and at an angle in an almost lazy fashion. “If you are done flailing about like a fool, I suggest we finish this in a more befitting manner.” Her bravado was lessened by the fact that she was swaying slightly. The blood oozing from a cut on her temple made it clear that she had suffered some sort of head injury when Kelly had thrown her.
“It's your funeral, Red,” the Plagian replied as she fell into a wide stance, shifting the green lightsaber into a reversed grip. The silence stretched between them as each woman studied her opponent. Lucine, however, seemed distracted by something behind the brunette.
“You don't really think I’m going to fall for the old 'Look Behind You' ruse, are you?” Kelly said with a sneer.
“You should. I do not make a habit of going anywhere alone,” Lucine replied. “Right now, one of my compatriots has a slugthrower aimed directly at your head,” she added, reaching out with a tendril of Force to enhance brunette's paranoia.
“You must really think I'm stu—"
Kelly's words were cut off by the sound of a firing slugthrower. Acting more or less on instinct, she dived out of the way. A quick glance over her shoulder proved that there was no one there; it had merely been an illusion. The snap-hiss of an activating lightsaber alerted her to imminent danger and she hastily brought up her weapon to stop the orange blade before it struck her.
“I'm getting really tired of your tricks, Red,” the Savant growled as she fluidly lashed out with a quick strike. She noticed that Lucine was no longer swaying. Apparently the redhead had been playing up her injury too.
“Oh, but I am having so much fun!” Lucine replied as she parried the blow. Despite her light tone, she was quickly realizing that she was getting nowhere. Allowing the Force to guide her movements, she considered her surroundings. The Plagueian seemed to rely on heavy blows of energy. Perhaps she could use that? After all, the walls seemed to be crumbling in some places.
With the beginnings of a plan in place, she continued to parry Kelly's blows, moving in an almost casual way as she tried to maneuver her opponent to use the crumbling architecture in her favor.
The orange and green lightsabers whirled and hissed, occasionally emitting sparks as they met. It quickly became clear to Lucine that it was no good. The brunette was far too skilled to be led so easily. While she was starting to fatigue, her opponent showed no signs of weariness. I must end this, quickly.
Once more the Savant lunged. Guided by the Force, Lucine lept to the side, causing the brunette to overcorrect. Seeing her chance, Lucine closed and lashed out with the lightsaber.
She realized that she had erred when she saw Kelly’s smirk. Mendes blocked the blow even as she made a shoving motion with her other hand. Too close to dodge, Lucine was thrown violently backward. Black spots exploded in front of her eyes as she struck the wall with a heavy thud and the telltale snap of at least one bone breaking. Pain flared, but it was mercifully short lived as consciousness slipped away.
Mendes remained on the defensive, fully expecting another trick; but the Arconan remained still. Guardedly, Kelly moved forward to nudge the redhead with the toe of her boot. No response; the Knight was down for the count. With a sigh, the Savant picked up her lightsaber, dropping Lucine’s in the dust. “Well, it looks like your plan wasn’t the only thing I ruined,” she said to the Arconan’s prone form.
Solid opening post. I think this sets up the battle for you both nicely. Two small errors:
"more more" is a minor typo here, but in a battle like this I've got to look at the small things.
I like this from a story perspective, but I'm not sure you explained it well based on your CS. "Concealment" as a Force power refers specifically to masking your Force ability/presence; using a combination of Force Cloak and Illusion I think makes this more understandable. To that end, it'd need to be worded slightly different. Also, Kelly's Seeking II only works against Illusion and Concealment, not against Force Cloak. Again, a minor thing but I'd be remiss if I didn't point it out.
One thing I want to point out that I didn't even notice until it was pointed out to me - how you disarmed Kelly is pretty brilliant. I really like how that was written and how well it played with your feats on your CS.