The Zeltron returned her katana to its sheath, watching the Sith closely lest he get away. DarkHawk gave her a confused look, but not for long. Aura swung her fist through the air and imagined it striking into the Sith’s jaw, unleashing the Force into a focused punch. DarkHawk staggered to his left as it made an impact, his hand lightly pushing off the ground as the man righted himself. The Odanite was already swinging again, but this time the Sith knew what was coming. The man dived to his right, turning it into a roll as he fell.
DarkHawk ran behind some cargo boxes nearby, getting a little help as Aura’s last punch pushed him forward by barely clipping him. The Sith immediately crouched out of view and snuck behind a new crate, catching his breath in the process. He reached out to the Force and immediately focused on making himself invisible, starting at his head.
The Odanite concentrated as she reached out to the Force, feeling a darker presence behind the cluster of boxes. She flexed a hand as the momentary urge to fling the boxes towards the wall threatened to override strategy. Aura didn’t like Sith, particularly ones that hid and followed her around. She took a deep breath and reminded herself of her original mission: gather intelligence and get out.
Not here to kill a Sith. Stay on target!
Fear gripped her, a subtle pull that had some credence of late. She had made plenty of powerful enemies, each of which had loyal followers willing to hunt her down for revenge. First, there was Grand Master himself. Perhaps his minions still wished her harm. Then, of course, there was Clan Scholae Palatinae, who were probably still mourning over the loss of Judecca. Despite her general dislike of DarkHawk solely because he was a Sith, Aura focused on her curiosity and the unanswered questions she had yet to ask.
Let’s see what you know, Sith...
“Did one of the Grandmaster’s thugs send you?” Aura asked.
“No.”
“Someone from Scholae Palatinae?”
“Wrong again. I serve Clan Naga Sadow,” replied DarkHawk.
Aura reached out to the Force, seeking out her opponent. He was slowly moving around the boxes, coming closer with each step.
“I see. I have no quarrels with you, Sith. Why are you here? What do you want? ”
The man froze for a moment, not yet out in the open, and considered his next words carefully. Aura waited.
“I’m here because I made a promise to help my Clan. I was told you serve the Lotus. Like many, I’m trying to find Darth Pravus, if he is even still alive. I think you can help me,” explained DarkHawk.
“Do you? I wish nothing but ill will towards him. How would I know where he is?”
“Don’t play games. I’ve studied you closely. You found something.”
Aura felt the man creep closer again. He would soon be within striking range again. Unease filled her gut as she thought of everything he might have seen.
“Say I have found something, why should I give it to you? What would you do with it?” asked Aura, purposefully walking towards the Sith in the hope she would appear unaware of his approach.
There was no verbal response, but the Force was telling her to move. Aura dodged to her right as DarkHawk’s bow swung through the air like a baton, the rest of his body materializing right before his attack. The Zeltron grabbed her lightsaber and activated it as she countered his initial attack with a quick diagonal slash. The Sith instinctively raised his bow as he backed off to safety, but unfortunately not fast enough. The tip of her saber cut through the limb of the bow, rendering it useless.
DarkHawk glared at Aura and tossed it aside. “Fine, have a taste of my saber.” A bright blue blade came to life with a snap-hiss.
“Finally. But tell me first, what would you do with it?” asked Aura yet again.
“Knowledge is power. Now, give me the info,” demanded DarkHawk.
“What would you do with that power?”
“Many things. Give it to me, now.”
“No. Tell me what you intend to do with it first.”
“I made a promise to retrieve it. No one said you had to live,” threatened the Sith.
Aura raised her saber into a high guard, ready to defend herself.
Your syntax is off here. It needs to be broken up into two parts, and the tense needs to not shift.
Tense issues, again.
Needs to be broken up into two sentences or written out differently for it to be grammatically sound.
Confusing description of action here. Not really sure what you were trying to describe.