“Wait … what?” stammered the young Kiffar, “I was assured. We had the full backing of Odan-Urr and would be allowed safe passage to our headquarters on Kiast.”
Kiast! I knew it! He knows where we are. I can’t let him leave this cave alive, Edgar thought to himself. Then sighing loudly, “So, you do in fact have information on where my Clan resides.”
Levi’s confusion over the situation began to change as he was able to read the Human's emotions. The Kiffar felt Drachen resigning himself to having to kill him. It was then that the Mystic Zetta ignited his own amber saber and let his rage take hold.
The young Mystic had enough. “I know nothing about where Odann-Urr’s bases are and I was only sent here to obtain information about our mutual enemy, the Dark Lord himself. Pravus.”
“I’ve grown tired of your lies Kiffar. I am sworn to protect my Clan at all costs. You will tell me all you know before you die!”
After taking a second to fill his muscles with the Force, Edgar rushed the blindfolded young Kiffar. As the opponents did their deadly dance, it was clear that Levi was relying heavily on his training to keep his enemy at bay.
Drachen’s attacks were strong and powerful and pushing Levi’s defenses to their limits.. But, after being backed into a much larger chamber in the cave, the Kiffar was able to create the space between them he needed. Focusing the Force to enhance his own strength as well as trying to muddle his opponent's mind.
The Human Jedi felt the Kiffar trying to enter his mind, focused on fighting the mental invasion, Levi counterattacked with such speed that it took Edgar off guard and forced him to go on the defensive.
It took a few seconds, but once his mind was cleared he was able to force a saber lock on his opponent. Admiring his adversary for a second, he considered keeping him alive. Then images of New Tython burning with friends, comrades and countless innocent people being slaughtered entered his mind. It solidified his resolve and brought with it a deep rage that carried the darkness with it.
Edgar shifted his weight, lifting his right leg up and, with all the might and strength he could summon, slammed his foot against the Kiffar’s knee. The knee completely collapased in a sicking pop of tendons and bone.
As Levi fell, Drachen broke the saber lock by cutting off his right arm just below the elbow. His severed limb hit the ground as Levi’s saber deactivated. Reaching out with the Force, Edgar picked up and threw the Kiffar’s saber as far as he could into the dark tunnel in which they came.
As the Mystic lay on the frozen ground, Drachen reached down and ripped the blindfold off the young man’s face, instantly blinding him as his eyes were not accustomed to the light of the chamber.
He waited for the Kiffar to calm down a bit before he resumed questioning him, “It’s over. Tell me what you know about Kiast.”
The young man, still in excruciating pain, struggled to focus on the Jedi before him as the Hoth Commander placed his crimson blade to his throat and calmly said, “You say you don’t know where we are but yet you know about Kiast. I won’t have any more lies from you! Tell me, HOW DO YOU KNOW ABOUT KIAST!”
Edgar, not giving Levi a second to think, lightly touched the tip of his saber to the Kiffar’s sternum and slowly dragged it down his chest. Levi twitched and, as the saber stabbed him, screeched loud enough for the cave to echo.
“It was Tisto!” the Kiffar half screamed and half choked the words out of his mouth.
“Go on!” ordered Drachen.
“Tisto sent me here to meet the informant and then he would arrange transport to Kiast, I swear he didn’t give me to coordinates and only said he will have a ship waiting for us. He made me swear my loyalty to him and never to reveal anything I knew about the Void Snakes. I swear to you I don’t know where Kiast is!”
Satisfied that the Kiffar was finally telling him the truth, Edgar plunged his saber into Levi’s heart, killing him instantly.
“Now I have to go deal with Tisto.”
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comma after work, not a period.
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There is quite literally no combat in this post.