Mune felt the world tilt, the grass then ground rising to take him full in the back. He shifted his weight as quickly, to somersault backwards and regain his feet in a fluid motion. A feat of acrobatics that left him ready to leap again into action if he so needed.
Rhylance felt the sting of the wound, felt the blood freely run into the cloth of his uniform. The fingers of his free hand examined the wound, by touch alone, he surmised it was not serious enough to require medical attention. His eyes never left his assailant, the Commander not foolish enough to look away. “I know you are a scholar, an intellectual, Cinteroph. Why resort to this childish show of violence?”
“You are a scientist.” Mune spoke evenly, straightening up from his crouch with the point of his sword remaining levelled at the other man. “Observe, and hypothesise, then share with me your conclusions when the battle is over.”
“Pardon?”
Mune lunged, the point of his sword missing narrowly the right shoulder of the Chiss. The Hybrid shifted his weight, pivoted upon his left foot and swiped fast, a cut that narrowly missed Rhylance’s cheek. The Hybrid’s eyes shone with thinly veiled mirth. “For someone not given to combat, you are reading my attacks splendidly.”
The Taldryan Consul cursed, levelled his peacemaker at his opponent. Finger frozen on the trigger, he felt the point of Mune’s sword pressed almost gently to his throat. It was strangely intimate, the shorter Hybrid in close, sword placed to deal a fatal cut. All Rhylance had to do, he knew, was pull the trigger and he would likewise take out the rollmaster, his peacemaker aimed to take the lightly armoured Seer full in the chest.
Neither moved. Their breath slow and even, eyes locked, an impish grin teasing at the Hybrid’s lips. The Chiss’ features were schooled into a mask of calm, apathetic to the situation, or so he would have it appear.
“So, you are going to play the part of the assassin, Cinteroph?” Rhylance questioned.
“It is what I had been, well before I found myself mantled in the robes of the Brotherhood.”
“Then it is a choice.”
“Is there ever truly a choice? We are manipulated. It is a game, twisted and grotesque, but a game nonetheless.” Mune explained softly.
Rhylance blinked, his finger itched upon the trigger. The savannah held its breath around them, not a blade of grass rustled, nor animal utter a sound. He could not help but feel the other man’s observations, awfully astute. Am I being manipulated? The Chiss’ mind went over the data, sifting through recent events one after another.
“Interesting hypothesis, Mune.”
“Isn’t it?”
“You are mistaken, however, I am not so easily manipulated as that.” Rhylance asserted firmly.
Mune felt the mild tremor in his sword arm. The standoff could not go on much longer, he was well aware. He detected clearly the quiver in the Chiss’ finger upon the trigger. He had one advantage the Commander did not.
Rhylance caught the shift in Seer’s attention and fired. The barrier was unmistakable in that moment, realization dawning upon the Chiss. Mune had drawn upon the Force not to attack but to defend against what he ascertained the Commander would do, given the slightest opportunity. He misread the Seer’s intention and found himself open in his seconds of surprise.The Seer took the opening, the Force coiled within a palm. A shudder ran through the soil and grass, the savannah come to life all at once. He thrust the Force forward in his free hand to strike with the intent of a vicious blow to the Chiss’ gut.
Rhylance threw himself sideways. He felt the attack brush his side, spinning him to crash without any grace whatsoever to the ground. The soil exploded behind him, grass and earth whipped into the sky. Clumps of dirt rained down upon them, clouds of dust obscuring their vision. Mune’s breath was audibly heavier. Rhylance could only guess at the damage it would have done had he not evaded most of the attack He could not see being so lucky a second time.
Mune breathed heavily. The Arcanist took advantage of the dust obscuring them both, to channel the Force. He had to be ready for the Chiss’ counter attack.
Syntax
The addition of ", an Akul" breaks the flow and structure of the sentence. In fact, this is a perfect candidate for a simple sentence. End with a period and have just "An Akul".
A semicolon is used for two independent clauses referring to the same topic. The first half here doesn't function on its own.
The second comma here isn't needed and breaks up your flow.
You should use single quotes within double quotes.
The question mark here is irrelevant, as this is a single joined statement. The dialogue and the narration are the same sentence. You'd use a lower case "the".
It's "Odan-Urr".
You used a comma here, not a period, so "The" doesn't need a capital.
Story
You spent a lot of time trying to come up with a reason for them fighting, but it feels largely superficial here. Mune's motivations aren't really delved into and it is just a declaration of attack. The combat itself is well written and doesn't lose the reader, however.
Realism
"Extensive research" perfectly summarizes what belongs in a Lore. In fact, I surmised that a Combat Master would have similar knowledge (as my predecessor did as well). Both of us used a Lore to denote this. However, it is plausible your character would recognize the Rollmaster of a fellow Consul. You would have to describe it as such though. The writing here associates the knowledge with a Lore you do not have. You also could have played off the "Mark of Pride" aspect on Mune's armorweave cloak to know he is CSP, but you referred to the mask specifically. This is a minor hit.