Terran raced down the crumbling hallway, deftly dodging fallen bits of ceiling and tumbled-down statuettes that littered the stone floor, the sound of Tarvitz's footsteps echoing in his wake.
Why hadn't he confided in the Odanite? The Saarai-kaar's words floated to the top of the swirling maelstrom of adrenalized musings storming through his mind. So too did the woofing chuckle of Isshwarr's laugh, mocking his justifications. "You've never cared overly much about right or wrong, wisdom or foolery." The matronly Wookiee's incongruously gentle voice teased him. "You may love justice, but you love winning more. And you always will." The words stung like a switch from a freshly cut branch and they filled his mind as his footsteps filled the interminable corridor.
A stitch grew in the Kiffar's sides and he tried to smother the thoughts as he paused to scan his surroundings. A soft glow far in the distance, barely visible over his saber's ochre light, presaged the hallway's end. Aside from that small detail, the corridor appeared identical before and behind. Still, something nagged at the Arconan, staying his itchy feet. "You're always running," came the imagined Wookiee's rejoinder. "Always running. The Great Forest Spirit help you if you ever stop."
Run.
Run!
And suddenly, he wasn't sure if the voice was Isshwarr's or his own. His cobalt eyes darted fore and aft, at the unbroken corridor. Something was missing. He took a single soft step, and heard it. His footstep. Only his footstep. He felt a whisper on the back of his neck, the Force's subtle croon, and raised his saber as he leaped away from the right-hand wall. His back hit solid stone and a chunk of the hall evaporated into a doorway. The Odanite stood beyond.
His blaster was raised, poised to fire, and Terran had the shortest of eternities to curse his own stubbornness. He raised his hand reflexively, the ochre light filling the space between them and bathing the pair in amber shadows. Then the blaster whined, spitting emerald fire.
It struck a translucent corona mere centimeters in front of his face, spattering into nothingness.
The Kiffar contained a sigh of relief. He was still trapped, unable to move, and the outsized power pack on Tarvitz's blaster didn't seem likely to die anytime soon. It would certainly outlast his defenses. The slow shots, steady as a metronome, impacted the barrier. A second shot, then a third, threatened to blind him with their emerald flashes. He could now see the doorways that dotted the hall at irregular intervals - doorways into a parallel passage. And now, only a few dozen meters ahead of him, he could see the obvious exit and the colossal stone bridge beyond. The landing pad was just past the bridge, bare minutes from him - if he had just kept running. That would have been the wiser course of action. It would have been a helluva lot less fun, though, he thought, as his barrier began to crack.
Terran sighed audibly, loudly even, and shut down his lightsaber, waving it towards Tarvitz in what he hoped was a conciliatory manner. The Odanite tilted his head briefly then stopped firing. His blaster never wavered. The Human cocked a single eyebrow and Terran mustered a sheepish grin.
"Alright, fine. You got me. We've both got bigger gundarks to wrestle. You want the artifact? It's yours."
Tarvitz eyed him skeptically. It was his only response.
With exaggerated slowness, the Arconan dropped the barrier and reached into his coat, pulling free a small necklace. The stone, strung between chain-linked palladium, was somehow inky and pearlescent at once. He tossed it to Tarvitz with a wistful sigh.
The Human caught it deftly, taking a moment to examine the piece of jewelry, then looking back at Terran sharply. "I can feel this means a lot to you."
"More than you know. But no job is worth your life. Eventually, we all have to learn to live with disappointment."
Tarvitz nodded in agreement, pocketing the necklace. "No hard feelings?"
"None," Terran replied, turning briskly on his heel and heading for the now-obvious exit. He looked back once as he stepped out into the harsh glare of Oricon's sun, hand snaking down to ensure the datacard was secure. The Jedi remained behind, ever the dutiful guardian. The Kiffar just hoped Tarvitz would guard his mother's pendant with half the fervor he'd shown today.
Honor was important. Honesty mattered. Family, especially those lost, could never be replaced.
But nothing beat winning.
Syntax
At this point, since you referenced "this place", it is no longer clear what you are referencing with "it". I have inferred that you mean to say his sword, but it shouldn't be a guessing game.
You need a comma after the introductory phrase.
Lotus isn't the name of an individual, so it ruins the flow to use it as such.
Tense dancing here. You switch between present and past.
Should be "he" rather than "be" in this instance.
Missed the leading comma here.
As a general comment, you favor commas in your writing. I would estimate more than 90% of your sentences use at least one, while others have more. This can lead to run-on sentences. Even when not such a blatant error, it can feel tiring to the reader. It creates mental gymnastics for the pacing that hurts your flow.
Story
Your reference to "Jensaarai" only serves to confuse the reader. In fact, Terran's connection to them is written out in several Aspects while Tarvitz's appears only as a reference to old armor in the description. Regardless, both members could be "the Jensaarai".
Realism
Terran has +4 TK and specializes in using multiple coins as projectiles. At that level, he can manipulate small items directly. The description you give here isn't in line with the powers as applied. He doesn't have a "wave" of Force energy he is shooting across to create a "whirlwind". He would be manipulating the single (or several) objects like small missiles.