The smell of stale sweat, exotic spices and scintillating perfume swirled, combining into a whirlwind of sensation that merged with the bright lights and slightly off-key music. The once infamous Winter Palace was still a den of sin where a man could come to hide.
Sanguinius Entar was such a man. The Jedi, for he was one, despite his maintained cover as a Grey Jedi, was here to make contact with one of his fellow Lotus agents. The Consul of Naga Sadow found it hard to move around unnoticed, thanks to his office. He often wished for the simpler days, back before the madman Pravus had decided to enact his pogrom on the Brotherhood. Thousands of innocents had perished, guilty only of existing. He couldn’t stand aside and let these innocents suffer.
Naga Sadow offered an opportunity to oppose the madness. The home to Darth Ashen, the Clan had the potential to act as a beacon to rally around. Unfortunately, the Jedi had found it more difficult than he had expected. The Sadowans had been apathetic to getting involved in the struggle, choosing to hide away and ride out the storm.
Their decision had been the wrong one, as the Iron Throne wanted no allies, only subjugated Clans. That censure had come in the form of the Iron Throne’s fleet, smashing Naga Sadow’s ships aside and sending a message that no one was safe, no one could remain neutral and oppose the plans of the Grand Master.
Getting to Nal Hutta had been a difficult journey. His Proconsul had demanded that he take a protection detail. Losing that detail had involved a crash on Nar Shaddaa.
The Consul lounged amongst a group of what he assumed were smugglers. Of course, they were a little too loud to be successful smugglers. Experience told him that those who boasted the most often had the least to boast about. His badges of office and any identifying garb were stored on his ship, several miles away. Sang had affected the look of an itinerant spacer, here to score some drinks, spice and girls, in order to blend in with those who the Hutts fleeced, overcharging those who sought entertainment and patronage.
Sanguinius felt eyes on him and directed his gaze at a man who seemed vaguely familiar. His mind raced, skipping through faces of people he had met in the past. The man approached the Entar, raising a tumbler filled with golden amber liquid in greeting.
Recognition dawned as the stranger sat down at the table. “Uji...” Sanguinius hissed, “What are you doing here?”
“I’m here to inform you that you won’t be meeting your contact,” Uji crossed his legs, relaxing back in the chair. “Additionally, your security detail isn’t doing too well after that little accident on Nar Shaddaa.”
Sanguinius bristled, but his eyes darted around the room, checking his prepared exits. The Jedi had planned for the worst possible situations, marking out his potential escape routes and had hidden his lightsabers nearby, as they would have been discovered and confiscated by the Winter Palace’s guards.
Uji watched the Entar, clearly amused at his fellow Defender’s panic. “You’ll find the exits aren’t so accommodating either, old friend.”
“What do you want, Tameike?” Sang demanded, his eyes boring into the Seer’s, the looks clearly threatening violence in response to the intimidating words.
“Why, I want you,” Uji replied, smiling. “The Consul of Naga Sadow, all alone? You’re too valuable a target to pass up.”
The Augur’s quick mind put two and two together and logically assumed the Inquisitorius had sent Uji as their agent to apprehend him.
“Over my dead body.” Sanguinius snarled, he had no interest in becoming a prisoner of the Inquisitorius. .
The Sadowan sprang up from his chair, catching the edge of the table with his right hand. The movement flipped the table onto its side, sending the drinks on it tumbling to the floor. The Entar’s left hand unholstered one of his Westar-35s in order to blast Uji away.
Uji’s foot lashed out and kicked the table, pushing his chair backwards, knocking it over and tumbled out of it. Sanguinius unleashed a torrent of blaster fire, punching holes through the chair. Pandemonium erupted as the patrons scattered and the guards started making their way through the crowd towards the Entar.
“I’m nobody’s fool, Tameike!” Sanguinius shouted over the noise.
I'm struggling with this sentence a bit. I feel as if you're trying to put too many actions into it, and there's a switch in tenses at the end.