In the darkness of Antei, where the last flames of Muz Ashen had long been extinguished, fire burned anew. Alara Deathbane seethed. Her stinging cheek forgotten, she exploded outward. Diving from beneath Legorii’s shadow, she rolled through the dust and came to her feet. Pivoting, the young woman turned to face the Arconan. Then, she leapt. Her lightsabers returned to her palms, shearing the air.
Legorii, at first left in a lurch by Alara’s renewed agility, recovered. His right hand held Soulflayer aloft once more, ready. Willing. His rifle, discarded like so many others in this decaying tomb, was of no more use. Legorii met the half-Sephi’s charge, standing firm, a solitary rock in the face of a tornado of kinetic energy. A haze of gold, emerald, and apricot illuminated sweat-slicked faces. Alara’s lightsabers thundered against Legorii’s, crashing like waves on an outcropping. As futile as waves crashing on an outcropping, too. Perhaps, given another century, the result would be different. Instead, the only erosion was of Alara’s confidence.
“At least,” Legorii hissed through clenched teeth as he parried another twirling slash, “your corpse…” He trailed off, ducking beneath a scything tangerine blade and stepping toward Alara with his own riposte, before finishing, “won’t have far to go.” His Anzati features curled into a sneer as he stepped back, allowing the girl a brief moment of respite. “You’re already in a graveyard.”
Alara’s eyes darted from side to side. Like a caged dog, her desperation only made her more dangerous. When it became clear that she wasn’t going to respond, Legorii chuckled. “Oh, lighten up, Alara. It was a joke. There’ll be nothing left of you to bury.” Sweeping her braid behind her, Alara set her shoulders. Her lightsabers hung freely at her sides, their tips trailing through the grime.
The hall moved. A cracked beam, fallen from the lofty heights it once occupied, roused itself from the floor and hurtled toward Alara. Drawn to her like an insect to flame. Amber eyes widening, Alara threw herself to the side, rolling in the dirt once more. Legorii’s off hand dropped back to his side, the Dark Side momentarily ebbing within him. He pressed his advantage, pursuing the young woman as she scrambled backwards. Seizing the offensive, he worked Soulflayer side to side, maneuvering Alara toward a far corner of the antechamber they now occupied.
For a few minutes, they fought to an impasse. But with each passing moment, Legorii’s impatience grew. A fury mounted within him. The Dark Side clung to every muscle fiber, every swollen artery. Finally, he broke through. A sweeping uppercut battered aside one of Alara’s sabers. Her elbow buckled. The gap in her defenses enabled the Arconan to step closer. His left fist connected with her cheekbone, sending her sprawling. One of her lightsabers clattered away and fizzled out.
Legorii did not let up. Alara attempted to keep him at bay, desperately slashing at him from the ground. With near-suicidal abandon, the Anzat threw himself on top of the smaller woman. Her lightsaber clipped his right shoulder, peeling back skin and muscle, before his knee pinned her wrist to the ground. Grimacing, the Arconan leaned in. Alara felt as though the entire weight of the Dark Hall had descended upon her.
The Anzat’s probosces, fleshy tendrils more common in nightmares than reality, snaked toward Alara Deathbane. Her breath caught in her throat. Her fingers, already denied oxygenated blood by the Arconan’s knee, twitched helplessly. Her amber eyes closed, as Alara gave herself over to the Dark Side. She reached out. The probosces descended, eager for another tortured soul.
A klaxon sounded in the depths of Legorii’s consciousness. A warning. Alara’s last ploy. Her purple fingers were reunited with the lightsaber hilt with which they were so familiar. The Arconan had no time. As the orange blade flared into being, Legorii jerked his own weapon into her chest. It tore through flesh and bone. Her heart, shorn in two, ceased beating. Her threat had been neutralized, to the Arconan’s disgust. After all that, a waste.
Just another ghost in a hall full of them.
Legorii stood, brushing dust from his robes. He reached for his comlink. “Give her my apologies. This one knew nothing of Pravus.” A pause. “I was denied a chance at a more...thorough investigation.”
Syntax
Careful overloading your writing with simple sentences. They need to be used with purpose and in an efficient manner that helps your writing rather than diluting it.
If there's anything further to bring up here it would be your use of commas. It appears that you adore them. I, too, have this issue from time to time. Generally speaking, they don't hurt your flow. They do come close occasionally.
Story
So, this is both good and bad. In regards to your attempt at both imagery and setting the tone for your narrative, you hit this out of the park. On the other hand, I'm left scratching my head at what this means. That's not a good feeling to have. In what way aren't they ghosts and what does this have to do with graveyards?
Other than that, I really don't have much in the way of negatives here. This was a good opening post. You didn't have to delve into back stories or what brought them there to make it emotive. You just had them there. Had the feelings present and went for it.