Mune exhaled slowly, calculations flashed before his mind’s eye as he worked diligently to find a way out of his current predicament. He watched the man stride forth, counted the man’s steps as he closed the distance between them. Halcyon was not undefeatable, no one was undefeatable, he reminded himself. I have no desire to kill him though, he thought in dismay. The man had yet to use his full array of powers, Mune well knew. He tested his knee, no damage, he noted; though he yet did not rise. He held his position and attempted reason against the older man.
“I do not want to fight you,” Mune exclaimed.
The Elder snorted and frowned down at the Hybrid. “Only because you are about to die.”
“I do not want to fight you because it is without purpose,” Mune argued.
“Only as much purpose as there was in Taldryan’s near destruction,” Halcyon shot back.
They locked eyes, “Do I look like I would blindly do Pravus’ work? I may as well wear a sign reading ‘undesirable’.”
“You talk too much, boy.”
The Force gathered at Halcyon’s command and he thrust it forward to throw Mune off balance once again. The Arcanist, however, saw through the attack and had thrown himself sideway. The Hybrid somersaulted and was back on his feet in time to react to the Force’s warning of the saber about to shear him from the side. Halcyon had closed the distance between them and gone for a finishing strike. His mind calculated quickly, his body reacted quicker, he caught the saber upon his own in a cacophony of snarling plasma.
Their lightsabers separated. Mune brought his second lightsaber to bare in a low strike, shifting his weight to straighten up. Their sabers flashed, light that bathed both in eerie colour. Every breath was harsh, the acrid air difficult to breathe, even Halcyon began to feel its effects.The two wove around each other, Mune’s strikes coming in rapid succession. He spun and slashed and cut in a brilliant spiral of death. Halcyon found himself hard pressed as the Seer pressed his advantage of speed. Sweat ran down their faces.
“People will think what they want to think,” Mune spoke between deep pants of air.
Halcyon blinked, a deep frown lining his face. Mune saw the man’s age in those features for a moment. The Sorcerer drew upon the Force near effortlessly and struck outwards. The Seer was already weaving the Force through his own muscles in those milliseconds before he jerked sideways and the scraggly plants and dirt behind him burst into so much debris. His reflexes thus enhanced, he focused on keeping the Prophet from having too many chances at using the Force against him.
“People will think what they want to think. I can talk until I am blue in the face, but words mean nothing to one who has their mind made up!” Mune explained, breathing hard.
“I said you talk too much!” Halcyon roared, again he made to blast the Hybrid back with telekinesis, but the boy was already adjusting and making to dodge. He hurled the power forth, a corner of Mune’s cloak whipped wildly as the sledgehammer blow missed though barely.
Mune was behind him, the Force fueling his movements. A saber came up, levelled at a point between the man’s shoulder blades but he did not strike. The Force likewise did not cry for Halcyon to move, there was no attack coming. Mune’s breathing was harsh, as was Halcyon’s own, their eyes stung with the acrid air their lungs laboured to use to keep their bodies going.
“My loyalty, first and foremost, is to my clan, Scholae Palatinae, in building a new home,” Mune explained slowly, making sure his sincerity was made clear in his voice. He was terrible at lying, so he chose not to lie.
“Your duty is to the Iron Throne.”
“According to you? To some unknown command? Pravus? Who?”
Halcyon hesitated. Both men were drawn with fatigue.
“You can kill me, Halcyon, if I prove false; but I am far too intelligent to follow orders blindly.” Mune lowered his weapons and deactivated them. “If my actions do not prove me sincere, then come find me when all's said and done, and end me.”
Halcyon’s weapon deactivated, though grudgingly. “Leave me, before I think twice.”
Mune bolted. He had a clan to think of.
Comma after say here is out of place, but moreover a period at the end of this dialogue would require a complete sentence afterwards.
No comma after noted - the clause should include what Mune noted.
No need to capitalize hybrid, as it is not a proper noun.
Story here - This sentence is a little odd because it seems it would be Halcyon’s appearance that would reveal his identity.
As Elder here is used as a title, it should be capitalized.
A little surprised Mune didn't realize what was going on, assuming you were going for what Halc picked up on.