“I hate sand. I deplore sand. I despise sand,” Lucine muttered to herself as she trudged up yet another dune. She did not think she had asked for much. All she wanted was for her next assignment to be on a tropical planet; maybe near a nice beach. But alas, it was not to be. At least Zujenia had endeavored not to smile when she gave her the coordinates. “It's not exactly a beach, but it has beach-like qualities,” the Aedile had said.
Zuji had neglected to mention that the 'beach-like qualities' were a blazing hot sun and a truly obscene amount of sand.
“I abhor sand. I loathe sand,” the redhead continued in what was quickly becoming a mantra.
At last she reached the top of the dune and surveyed the wreckage of the starship below. Somewhere down there she would find her objective, an Inquisitorius drop site that hopefully contained clues about Pravus' whereabouts. Once she retrieved it, she could get off of this miserable dust ball of a planet. Just in time, too. I was beginning to run out of verbs, she thought to herself.
Twisted metal and debris lay scattered around the ruins of the ship. Lucine wove a circuitous path through the detritus until she heard her datapad ping to indicate she had arrived at the location Zuji had given her. It took some digging, but she finally managed to find what she sought. Eagerly, she opened the small metal box to reveal—
Nothing.
The cache was empty. Lucine grimaced in irritation, letting the box drop from her hands. She retrieved her datapad and double-checked the coordinates, but she was in the correct location. So it was all a waste of time, she thought disgustedly.
It was then that she realized that there was another Force-user nearby. Narrowing her eyes, she turned to see a Togruta standing upon the dune, watching her. There were not many reasons for anyone to be in such a desolate location, so she had to assume he was here for the cache as well. But was he friend or foe?
“Are you here for the sight-seeing?” she called up to him, putting her datapad away and wrapping her fingers around the hilt of her lightsaber.
The Togruta slid down the embankment, effortlessly keeping his balance as he did so. When he arrived at the bottom of the dune, he replied, “No. I'm here for the cache.”
Lucine studied him, trying to assess his threat level. Despite his montrals, he was not overly tall, and he had angular features that she might have found handsome if the circumstances were different. Despite the blazing sun overhead, he wore dark robes that marked him as an Equite. The fact that he was marching through the desert in that outfit meant he was either tough, stupid, or both. “Well then, I am afraid you are out of luck. Someone already cleaned it out.” Lucine kicked the empty metal box toward him.
The Equite's dark eyes flicked down toward the box, then back at her. “You've been out in the sun too long if you think I'm going to buy that. Give me the datapad you just pocketed.”
“Why would I do that?”
“It’s obvious that you took it from the cache and I'm not going back empty-handed.” To punctuate his words, he reached down and unclipped his lightsabers from his belt.
“Now, now, we are all friends here,” Lucine said, drawing upon the Force to add weight to her words. “You do not want to fight me.”
The Togruta's cocky smile faded slightly as her suggestion touched his mind. His response came in the form of twin red plasma blades to flaring to life. “Last chance to hand it over.”
Lucine tsked under her breath. The last thing she wanted was a fight, but the datapad had been a gift from Atyiru. She would not simply hand it over. “Sorry, darling. You are not taking it from me,” the Arconan replied.
The Equite charged, covering the distance before bringing both lightsabers down in a devastating overhead strike. Lucine's weapon ignited and she brought it up to block the attack. The strength of the blow caused her to stumble back a few steps.
He followed his initial attack with a rapid series of strikes. Lucine fell into the Force, allowing it to guide her in her defense, but she quickly found herself struggling to keep up with his strong, rapid-fire blows.
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Good job with accounting for Lucine’s resolve.
Positioning here is a little confusing – the two had seemed locked in a lightsaber battle just moments b before, close enough that it doesn’t seem he would have much room to stalk towards her.
This is a little repetitive.