Legorii swept his emerald lightsaber forward, careening into Alara Deathbane’s defenses. While she deflected the blow without difficulty, the Arconan’s broad frame blocked the most viable escape route—the dark passageway leading out of the antechamber. Gritting her teeth, the half-Sephi countered, thrusting both of her weapons toward the Anzat’s gut. The thrusts were battered away. Alara caught herself taking a step backward toward the looming ravine.
Their breath hot in the icy air, Legorii and Alara traded blows. In the silent darkness of the crystal cavern, the broader conflicts of the war had no place. While the hell-bent opponents had filled the cavern with violence—and weren’t the first to do so—it was an almost honorable sort of violence. Untouched by the treachery and broken alliances that dictated affairs among their Clans. Here there was no deception. Neither intended to let the other live.
Painfully cognizant of his limited stamina, Legorii redoubled his assault. The Force stirred in the depths of the crystal cavern, lending him renewed strength. Under the relentless blows, Alara’s retreat to the ravine resumed in earnest. The certainty of her steps, and the nonchalance with which the young woman took them, gave the Arconan pause. He was a hunter, but in that moment, he felt like prey.
Once they’d nearly reached the edge of the precipice, Alara sprang into action. Summoning the Dark Side with as much difficulty as one summoning the willpower to get out of bed on a rainy morning, the Aedile vaulted into the air. Legorii slashed at her feet as she sailed past him. He was too slow. Spinning, the Arconan suddenly found that he was the one with his back to the ravine. Even for a scion of the Shadow Clan, a man dark of cloak and of soul, the blackness below was unsettling.
But Alara was not finished. The Dark Side continued to coarse through her. Her blood ran hot, tinging her pointed ears with color despite the cold. Crackling energy leapt from her fingertips, arcing through the cavern’s empty space. But the Force served more than one master. Though his muscles may have been slowed by fatigue, Legorii’s senses were not. The Force supplied him just enough advanced warning of the impending lightning. He dove to the side, sliding head-first across a patch of ice.
Alara’s lightning exploded against the cavern wall, dislodging a cluster of kyber crystals and showering both fighters in dirty ice and fragmented stone. Legorii briefly shielded his face with his left arm. When he turned his gaze back toward the spot that the young woman had previously occupied, she was gone. The Anzat’s crimson gaze found her almost immediately, sprinting back the way she’d come in. Not fleeing, surely. Merely executing the next step of some half-baked scheme.
Immediately, Legorii pursued her. He unslung his BlasTech A280 rifle, knowing that he had only a few seconds before she’d turn a corner. He depressed the trigger, squeezing off a volley of searing bolts while on the run. They sizzled against the far wall of the cavern, boring halls in the ice and generating small clouds of steam. He squeezed the trigger again. This time, one of the bolts found its target, slamming into Alara’s shoulder. The force of it propelled her forward. She lost her footing, throwing her hands out to break her fall. One of her lightsaber hilts was knocked out of her hand, sliding across another patch of ice.
Discarding his rifle, Legorii rushed toward her. Soulflayer lead the way, its green light battling the shadows that blanketed the corners and crevices of the cavern. As Alara struggled to her feet, Legorii felt his anger mounting. He hated when his opponents did not know when they were beaten. Hated when they had the gall to continue to face him. He gave himself over to the Dark Side. His rage boiled forth, fiery in an icy tomb.
With her uninjured shoulder, Alara was able to parry the first of the powerful uppercuts she was subjected to. The second, however, was ferocious enough to knock her remaining lightsaber from her hand. Barely short of feral, the Anzat wasted no time in toying with the woman. His lightsaber screamed through her torso, cleaving her from hip to breast and depositing burnt organs and severed intestines onto the cavern floor.
There would be no foothold for Clan Scholae Palatinae on Ilum.
not sure why she would be capitalized here.
So, the set up for this fight was okay, but there is quite literally no action until the last sentence, pretty much. Also, I found it a bit odd that Legorii would say that he's serving the Inquisitorious (which you could assume based on his Inq Comlink, I guess) but looking at his Aspects, they all speak of dedication to Arcona, and Arcona alone. On top of that, I don't see why Legorii would just drop his saber here and engage in a fist fight.