“Grenade!” the hunters cried out in unison, their leader promptly diving aside to avoid the blast. The grenade detonated with a hollow crack, spilling adhesive chemicals that ensnared the squad leader in place while his comrades opened fire on the fleeing Jedi.
Solid rounds ricocheted off the ancient remains of a basalt Sith’s robes, chipping away at the statue. The man holding the flame projector steadied his aim and depressed the trigger, the pilot flame flickering for a moment before a brilliant gout of flame erupted from the weapon’s stubby nozzle and arced across the courtyard.
Wolfe leapt from his cover as the flames splashed behind him, the burning fuel soaking the hem of his cloak and setting it ablaze. Darting forward, a staccato of automatic fire traced his steps as the gunmen adjusted their aim to follow.
A black lightsaber slammed into the closest man’s chest, knocking the wind from him as the basalt blade snapped in twain from the impact. Staggered, the man fell to his knees while his comrade stared at him in shock, failing to notice the incoming arm that followed. The statue piece racked her in the head, smacking the helmet off her as the Correllian slumped unconscious upon her comrade.
Before Tali could muster enough focus to hurl another piece, however, the third hunter aimed the flame projector at her with a sadistic grin. The roaring stream of flame rose across the gloomy courtyard, illuminating the overgrown plaza though failing to fully banish the most persistent of shadows.
Like her fellow Jedi, the Twi’lek saw it best to dodge the attack and threw herself down from the mezzanine, vaulting over the edge and landing with a roll on a patch of soft-looking moss. A sharp crack and a lancing pain flared through her mind as her ankle twisted at an unnatural angle, the treacherous moss hiding a jagged crack in the floor.
Painfully stumbling forward, she managed to throw herself behind the bulk of an overgrown pillar before turning her focus inward and to her sprained ankle. Without her mobility, she was as good as dead.
“Get her, get her now!” the leader spat as the adhesive chemicals began to melt around him, their grasp on his body yielding as the bonds between molecules broke down in a cascading reaction. Twisting his body free of the last remains of the gooey adhesive, he turned in time to stare into the ice-grey eyes of his executioner as Wolfe pulled the trigger on his blaster.
A pair of neat holes burned through to his back. The hunter stared in dumbfound shock at the Jedi before collapsing into the disintegrating goop, Wolfe dashing past him towards the remaining hunter.
Hearing the shots, the last trooper slewed his weapon around, the pilot flame flickering to life as he zeroed in on the charging Jedi. Wolfe felt power surging through his muscles as he sprinted at inhuman speed towards his foe, but it was not enough. The trooper flashed a sadistic grin as he depressed the trigger.
“Hey! What the…?” The man yelped as the weapon’s nozzle suddenly yanked upwards, the stream of burning liquid projected high over its intended mark and raining down behind the avenging Jedi. He did not manage a further sound as Wolfe’s lightsaber savagely lopped his head from his shoulders, the man and his weapon clattering uselessly upon the stone floor.
Turning his gaze to the right, Wolfe saw the Twi’lek leaning against the pillar, steadying herself after the exhaustive manipulation of the trooper’s gun, before collapsing down from overwhelming fatigue.
Advancing cautiously towards the Twi’lek, Wolfe rounded the pillar’s shattered base and saw the woman lying on her back. Her body was bruised and her ankle twisted, eyes only barely focused.
“Please… just, let me go,” she murmured hoarsely.
He looked down on her injured form and shook his head, taking off the half-burned cloak and tossing it to her. “Hmph, fine. I’ll leave you alone,” he muttered dismissively, turning away towards the remains of the temple.
The screech of a nocturnal predator swooping at him from the right caused him to flinch. The appearance was so sudden he failed to sense the warning of another, actual, threat as the stun bolt struck him in the flank.
“Yes, yes you vill,” Tali muttered as she rose to her feet and holstered her blaster, the illusory screeches fading into the aether.
Syntax
As a reader, this flows extremely awkwardly with the placement of the commas.
Same as above, really odd flow and usage of commas.
Repetitious use of "press" without enhancing the story.
Story
Throughout this post, you use a lot of nameless references. Primarily "he, she". This can get hard to follow after a while, and more so it can get tiring for the reader. Change it up with references, such as "the Twi'lek".
You spend a lot of time trying to set the mood of the scene and some gets lost during this narrow focus. The combat and conflict of this post comes at the tail end, without much given to exactly why Wolfe attacks her. We know why Tali is fleeing, at the very least.
Realism
At +2 Illusion, it requires Tali's partial concentration to create any illusions when not under duress, and to do so she would need to touch on the mind(s) of the people meant to see it. Neither happens here, as being chased in a mad dash certainly counts as duress. It would take more concentration and she never influences Wolfe's mind.