The ominous buzz of plasmic energy rang through her head as Jasper slammed into the wall at the end of the catwalk. Half-dazed, she managed to shove off it, gaining momentum as she pulled into a sprint once more. She was determined to complete her mission.
Jasper hardly noticed as her striped socks slipped down to her ankles, twin copper buns loosening with each step. The white-hot light of the refinery’s plasma columns flickered across the black walls. “Hold 'em off Rex,” Jasper whispered as she approached the next control station. “Jus’ gimme more time. Can’t let ‘em win.” She skidded to a halt at the switchboard, buttons illuminating as freckled hands flitted over them. “Gotta be the good,” she reminded herself.
Her hair ties finally gave way, letting her long hair cascade over her shoulders. Frustrated, she pushed the curtain of copper from her face. Deft fingers pried up the circular plate that covered the station’s docking port, revealing a wiring mechanism within. Jasper worked methodically, connecting the series of plugs in their specific sequential order to her datapad. In spite of the looming dangers, she hummed as she worked, moving as seamlessly as if she were tying her shoes.
The encoded information downloaded from her device onto the hidden drive within the station’s board. With any luck, her assailant wouldn’t think past her capture and the Lotus intel would remain safe. The girl stood on her tiptoes, trying her hardest to see if Rex was still standing. There was nothing but pillars of white light and black walls in view. It reminded her of the Jedi and the Sith; how the darkness seemed to cage the light. She sighed, worrying at the inside of her lip.
With a cheerful warble, the datapad announced the completed upload. A gap-toothed grin pulled at the corners of her mouth as she removed the wiring harness. Jasper tucked the datapad under her arm and bounded down the catwalk again.
“Rex!” she shouted over the deafening noise, eyes searching the expanse of the refinery for her friend. Her energy fading, Jasper trudged around the edge of the chamber, the usual quickness to her steps slowing as she searched.
The girl passed yet another plasma column and froze mid-step. She sunk back against the black paneled wall and traced her tongue nervously over the edge of her teeth. Less than fifteen meters away, Arden loomed over the fallen body of her droid.
In that moment, she hated herself. She hated how missions had become more important than laughing. She hated how duty forced her to abandon her friends. But most of all, she hated being afraid.
Summoning all of her courage, Jasper raced towards the Sith.
Arden raised his saber above his head, one hand outstretched before him. Then, like an ancient clock, he pivoted, arms sweeping wide as he delivered the fatal blow to Jasper’s companion.
“N-no... No. No. No!” she cried.
Moments too late, Jasper threw herself beside the body of her droid. Copper hair spilled around his smoldering, plated chest. She pressed her ear to his forehead, desperate to hear any sign of his internal circuitry whirling.
Silence.
Arden straightened himself, smoothing the folds of his clothes. “I did warn you.”
Sniffling through ragged breaths, Jasper pushed herself up, slowly lifting her gaze to meet the murderer who stood before her. “Ya didn’ hav’ta kill em,” she hissed, her normal sing-song twang dripping with a newfound anger. “Yer stupid magic pow’rs broke if ya can’t jus snatch up a lil girl without killin’ people.” Her eyes, brilliant emerald against tear-stained red, watched the Sith—dared him.
His stoic countenance was unwavering as he extinguished his golden blade. “Droids are not people, Ms—”
Jasper’s beastial roar cut the Sith short, as she lunged at him. Unsurprised, Arden let the girl collide with him, staggering only slightly as her meager weight did little against his mass. She stepped back, charging at him again and again, pounding against his chest each time. The Warlord patiently endured her feeble attacks until, exhausted, she failed to push away from him.
He shoved her to the side and snapped his fingers around her wrist, squeezing until she whimpered. “I made a promise, Ms. Arlow.” The Sith turned on his heel, dragging her down the catwalk towards the hangar bay. He smirked, enjoying the anger and pain the Force leached from her broken soul. “You will regret running.”
Note the character has an accent, although we are a little light on this. I did not take off points here because there is limited dialogue.
Even with amplification, a charging KX droid seems difficult to stop; moreover, smashing a shoulder into a charging droid, even with some enhanced might behind it, would still hurt. Droids are, after all, made of metal! This is a realism issue.
I think this would be better as 'his lightsaber he only occasionally used'. As written, it suggests his lightsaber is what he primarily uses! I understood your intention and it is not wrong, but it is something to note for future posts.
Given the two Combat aspects specifically about avoiding melee combat whenever possible, it seems weird to pull out a lightsaber now that Arden seems to have a bit of safe distance. The previous encounter made sense with those aspects as he was being charged on a narrow bridge, but now with both combatants safely separated, it would be best to explain why the aspects are not in play here.