His first shots missed.
The woman threw herself around the furniture with wounded grace, dodging and weaving as his muzzle tracked her. She rolled along the ground, hands groping — searching for her lost saber? He didn't allow her the reprieve, aiming and spewing a plasmic barrage.
Atyiru had nearly circled the room and stumbled just long enough for one of the bolts to graze her bicep. He heard her hiss, and, feeling a grim thrill, depressed his trigger again.
She lifted her hands, brows furrowed, and in the space of those few heartbeats, the bolts met an invisible wall of her will, breaking against it. Another salvo caused the construction to shatter, but it was enough. The Consul sprinted past him, vaulting over a table and out the door.
Growling, Droveth focused, calling his lightsaber to hand. Gripping the weapon and holstering his blaster, he submerged himself in currents of Light and dove after Atyiru, following her into the multicolored miasma. There was no time to wait for it to clearpurging it.
Though the Human stopped his breathing, his eyes burned, vision crumbling at the edges like flaming paper. His adrenaline-pumping heartbeat pounded frantic in his chest, something he could little afford to focus on with his concentration diverted between keeping command of his aching lungs and searching for the Miraluka. Blurry shapes moved about him, aliens at sabacc tables or sipping drinks, but the Odanite found no trace of his target. Doggedly, he kept moving, his steps beginning to stutter.
He needed air—
No! he thought, but it was too late. His mouth had fallen open around a deep, desperate gasp, and his throat and chest and mouth all felt aflame. They burned, and he cried out, a croak lost to the agony in his airways. The floor began to sway, or perhaps he did. He didn't know. All he knew was that his shoulder hit something solid with a soft, muted thud. The floor? Everything had turned on its axis.
His mind drifted, even as part of him shouted for him to get up and run. But he was very dizzy, and the prospect very hard, and he couldn't breathe—
Things faded.
Then, a wave came. Gentle at first. Steady, thrumming ripples, cool and insistent. A heartbeat. If oceans had heartbeats. It lapped at him, lifted him, pushed and pulled. A fortitude washed over him with each wave, and with it, relief. His body ceased to burn inside out, the fires doused. His head grew clear of its corrosive cloud. He gasped reflexively, but he wasn't breathing. Hedidn't need the air with the power flowing through him.
A hand , white, swam into his field of vision. He heard the words, "Take my hand," and he listened, eyes following white boots up to an insistent face, smiling mouth bared in a grimace of effort.
Droveth reached out, their palms slotting together, and she pulled him up. She pulled, like those waves, and he went. They ran, elbowing past patrons and under strobing lights, then finally out the front entrance.
The pair burst onto the street, gasping for air. It was sour with smog, refuse, and sweat from gamblers and perverts, but it was still the sweetest thing Droveth had ever tasted. That foreign strength disappeared as the Miraluka stepped away from him, collapsing at his side, her chest heaving, shoulders slumping.
Droveth quickly glanced around for interlopers. Then, he drew his pistol, spun it around, and clumsily slammed the butt into the back of her skull with a flesh-muffled crack.
She went down bonelessly. He twirled his pistol back around and pressed the muzzle to her temple, squeezing the trigger—
The Human paused. He hurt, but he was alive, likely because of the woman. A woman who had, in retrospect, herself come in the place of a young Knight, despite her position. Surely, it would have made sense to send another, but no. She had come, and she had come back for him when she might have fled.
Droveth grimaced. He holstered his weapons, coughing and wincing as his raw throat stung. Temperance, then. He would bring her to trial instead of executing her. After all, a verdict could still end with as much, and if in the meanwhile the Lotus gained intelligence it wouldn't otherwise have...
The Odanite dragged the limp Arconan aside and pulled out his datapad, not trusting his comm signal. He would report needing transport for two, and then...
Well. Then remained to be seen.
Syntax
Unneeded repetition of "eye" here without adding to the story in a meaningful way.
Missed a space between the thought dialogue and the narrative.
Story
The pacing is way too slow for a 2+2 match with a 750 limitation on your word count. This post is all set-up with about a sentence of combat at the tail end. Combat that doesn't quite make sense given the Aspects at play. Fighting wouldn't be Atyiru's first choice. She believes in people and their redemption. Not attacking them without trying to sway them.
Realism
Datapad on your person would fall under Equipment. You have the Inq Commlink, but no datapad on the Snapshot of Stealth/Undercover.
Droveth is using both +3 Illusion and +2 Control Self at the same time. That takes a lot of concentration mixed between the two that should be depicted. It's also a little more than conditioning your lungs. In fact, you can't change how they function. You could use Control Self to make it so you don't have to breath as often, but not make them accustomed to poison.
Barely a tick, but remember that Sense isn't a passive power, and at +1 it would take the entirety of Drovoth's concentration to close his eyes and connect to the Force.