The two Sith pulled away from each other. They’d both begun to realise that they were making no progress. The hateful stares at one another, however, went nowhere.
“You will die, Inquisitor. Even if not today, at my hand; then, Pravus will find you, or whatever Clan you serve, to be undesirable. His way is to kill everyone,” Andrelious declared.
“I suppose that’s what happened to you. I’m guessing you’re with Scholae? Or Taldryan?” Abadeer responded.
“For what it matters, Taldryan,” the Seeker said simply. Hearing a sudden warning from the Force, he raised his blade in a defensive motion just in time to fend off another attack from his opponent. Abadeer cursed under his breath and continued to assault his fellow Sith, each of his lightsabers forcing Andrelious to defend so desperately that any chance at a counter attack was near impossible.
As he attacked, the Togruta commanded the Force to attack his opponent’s mind. At first, nothing seemed to happen. Just as Andrelious re-closed the gap between himself and Abadeer, forcing the Plagueian to back away a little, the older Sith’s eyes widened in apparent fear. His lightsaber, swinging through the air, stopped less than a inch away from the Marauder’s arm.
Tired from the prolonged duel, Abadeer found the continued action of projecting fear directly into his opponent’s mental state to be fairly taxing. Andrelious, for his part, had begun to shake and looked every inch as terrified as if he’d just spotted an incoming superlaser.
It doesn’t seem right. I don’t even know who he is, the Proconsul thought.
Abadeer didn’t have any further time to think on the matter. With a roar, Andrelious started to break free of his own fear. Before he had time to properly prepare himself for a further duel, the Togruta realised he would definitely be on the defensive. Holding Andrelious in a prison of his own dread had drained most of what was left of his energy reserves. He was now both mentally and physically tired.
Sensing that he now held a solid advantage, Andrelious, removing his off-hand from his weapon, turned his palm to face his enemy. He started to will the Force to shove Abadeer away, praying that he’d muster the power needed before the Togruta could offer an effective defence.
Abadeer spotted what his opponent was doing. He cast one of his lightsabers aside, mirroring Andrelious’ actions. The two Sith started pushing at each other through the Force, snarling.
I can’t hold it! Abadeer realised.
Letting go of his grip on the Force as his fingers started to ache, the Marauder was quickly thrown backwards.
Andrelious smiled, walking over to the fallen Togruta. “You had potential. You had even picked the right side. Of the Force, at least. It’s just a shame that you stopped being right,” he taunted.
“I regret nothing. You can’t resist the whole Inquisition!” Abadeer shot back.
“I never said I intended to,” Andrelious said coldly. He stared down at the Proconsul with such hatred in his eyes that Abadeer shivered. Sparks of electricity started to flare on the tips of the Taldryanite’s fingers. Closing his eyes, the Togruta desperately summoned the last ounce of strength he found within himself.
As the Force lightning hit, Abadeer, having managed to call one of his lightsabers to his hand, plunged the weapon into Andrelious’ right leg. The Seeker’s roar of pain was the last sound that the Plagueian heard as electrocution became too much to deal with.
Abadeer Taasii was dead. But his last act had wounded Andrelious J. Mimosa-Inahj severely enough that the Taldryanite had a long, painful journey back to the safety of his ship.
It had not been a good day.
Syntax issues. Adding an "and" in here might have helped a bit, I think.
Similar issue as above.