Level 1313: A massive sprawling landscape underneath the upper levels of Coruscant. Named after its location thirteen-hundred thirteen levels from the core of the planet. At least that was a much more appealing thought to Rian, than the fact of the weight of several more thousand levels that lay between those living here and the surface above. The streets down here were littered with shivering figures, some gathered around small fires, others begging for a handful of credits or something to eat. Yet others called out to him, offering all sorts of illegal substances.
Echo, his seeker droid, chimed in with another update on his target. It had taken the droid almost the entire day to find Tisto and since then the small droid has been trailing him from a safe distance until he had entered a nearby bar. The doors to the bar hissed open. The air was hazy with smoke from various substances being burnt, while several exotic looking females moved their bodies to the thundering sound of primal music. Rian quickly scanned the place, looking for the person he had come for.
He found him sitting at the counter, broad shouldered, red shirt and black-and-yellow adds. Rian stalked his way to the bartop almost unnoticed. Only when he reached the empty spot next to his target, did the human barkeeper acknowledge him with a short nod. He ordered a Corellian single malt before bringing the attention onto his target.
"Hey, mind if I take that seat?" he said cheerily to Tisto. The Kiffar waved him off in a lack of disinterest. Rian took the seat anyway, nodding to the human barkeeper who had slid a small glass filled with an amber liquor in his direction. "You did a very good job on Edrien, Tisto."
Tisto looked up to the other man for the first time, taking notice of who exactly was sitting next to him. Rian knocked back the small glass, savoring the smooth yet smokey taste in his mouth, before slamming the glass back onto the bar. "But apparently with your actions, you have brought the attention of the Inquisitorius on you."
"And I can't risk you telling them about Taldryan when they find you, and they will, they always do; and torture you." Rian followed, rising from his chair.
Tisto stared at him, completely taken aback by Rian’s sudden change in tone. Time seemed to slow for Tisto, as he saw Rian's hand slide behind his back, drawing his lightsaber from its customized sheath. With a crackling hiss, a serrated blue blade snapped to life. The barkeeper squeaked in panic, diving under the bar. "Help! Help – "
While most of the patrons scurried underneath their tables, a handful followed Tisto and rose to their feet, grabbing for their own weapons. Spying at the men aiming their blasters at Rian. Thinking of the countless bottles lined behind the bar that were filled with exotic liquors, the barkeeper shouted. "No, no blasters!"
Then there was another hiss, followed by a flash of light. This blade was crimson in color and mirrored the blue one in length. And at that moment, it was clear to the audience that they would do better to leave this stand off then risk getting shot by their own blaster fire being reflected back at them.
Rian lunged, but Tisto ducked the first slash, before bringing his own blade up to block the barrage of slashes that followed. For a moment they danced between the tables, their blades only blurs between them as they exchanged blows.
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